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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents five studies that attempt to clarify the structure of interpersonal relationships as assessed by a self-report measure based on relational models theory (RMT). The studies compellingly show that although there is good evidence of four relationship factors, consistent with RMT, the existing measure of those factor is structurally weak. More importantly, they show that the measure can be substantially improved by (a) removing poor items, (b) adding a nonspecific factor capturing relationship closeness (or something similar), and (c) allowing one correlation between two factors (in place of the six included in earlier structural models). Collectively the studies make several worthwhile contributions. They 1) produce a substantially improved measurement scale that will be useful for researchers interested in RMT; 2) affirm its four-dimensional structure; and 3) provide a helpful and simplifying theoretical account of why model fit of the original scale was poor, namely that it failed to consider generic closeness of relationships separate from their underlying model. In essence, we can understand and measure relationships in terms of the model or models on which they are based, AND on their level of closeness or engagement. Methodologically the studies are strong. Samples are consistently larger than prior research, structural analyses are carried out carefully and with sophistication, and replication with independent samples is consistently sought and demonstrated. In addition to these positive comments I have a few small concerns and comments. 1. On line 35, where it says "Relational models theory (RMT) offers a comprehensive classification of interpersonal relationships" it might be better to replace "classification" with "model" or something to avoid the mistaken impression that any relationship must belong to a single model. 2. On line 89, where it says "A two-factor model consisting of orthogonal bipolar dimensions, one running from AR to EM and one from CS to MP", it could be noted what these dimensions mean (e.g., equal-unequal and close-distant). The context here is that whereas RMT proposed four factors, two-dimensional structures like this are popular in social psychology. 3. The Introduction focuses on the issue of how to measure the RMs, without giving even a brief account of the evidence that they matter, such as referring to empirical work showing they predict things that matter. I don't think a full literature review is needed here, but perhaps some citation or work showing the value of the RMT approach would help justify the effort to improve their measurement. 4. A related issue is that the manuscript is present mainly as being about improving a self-report measure and determining its structure, but isn't it also saying something about the actual structure of relationships? Maybe the authors could add a brief statement about whether they think their findings tell us something about how relationships are structured, or do they only tell us about one questionnaire? 5. On line 218 it says "it may be necessary to replace correlations between factors with a general relationship factor". A brief comment about what such a "general factor" is and what finding evidence of it would mean might help here. 6. Line 267 says "which did not replicate well in the hold-out relationship datasets". This comes across as a slight exaggeration: in the replications the CFI is only worse by 3.4% on average and the TLI by 4.1%. Yes there is a drop off, but this is something less than a complete failure to replicate. 7. On line 284, where it says "Fig 2 shows the final model (using the dataset with all five relationships combined)", it's unclear what the combined dataset means. Are the five relationships for each individual treated as independent or is between-subjects variance controlled for? I felt this dataset wasn't explained adequately. 8. On line 297, where it says "We also found that the model required a general factor loading on all items, which was not found in previous studies", it should also be noted that it wasn't found because it wasn't looked for. Past confirmatory studies couldn't have found this factor because they were specifying four RMT factors only. 9. On line 344, "AM" should be "AR". 10. On line 407 it looks very odd to have three correlations in a row that are precisely 0.00. 11. On line 421 and figure 4 it is very interesting that "employee" is much higher on the factor than "employer/manager". This suggests the factor is not about CS/EM/MP versus the AR model in general, as the factor loadings might seem to suggest, but that it's the person's position within the authority relationship that matters. Unless I am misunderstanding it, it seems employers report feel more close to or engaged with their employees than vice versa. This point might merit a brief exploration in the Discussion, as it helps to make the point that the general factor - though the study doesn't entirely nail down what it is - is not just about authority or inequality versus its absence. Reviewer #2: This paper reports a research program aiming to replicate and improve the MORQ, a measure of the relational models proposed by RMT. The paper is cogent and clearly written. The series of studies is well conceived, and the results are valuable. The first two studies (1a, 1b) report basically a failed smaller scale effort, before Studies 2 and 3 provide a better and stable solution with more data. Study 4 explores correlation of observed variables with additional measures. One might wonder whether #1 should then be still reported, but I agree that it is good to report it to see the full development. The only thing I would suggest in addition is to test the final model again on the data from Study 1 to provide another internal replication. It is very commendable that all data from this study are available. Both this paper and the data will be an excellent resource for future work on the MORQ. One of the many merits of these studies is that the participants were UK residents, in contrast to the participants in the original studies of Haslam and Fiske. Thus the current findings constitute a cross-cultural replication, albeit in a very closely related culture. This should be mentioned, along with the fact that three decades have elapsed since the original studies. These two differences may partially account for the finding that many of the original items did not load on the expected factors. On p. 9 the authors write that “following Haslam and Fiske (3) between-participant variance was controlled by regression participant ID on all item responses”. Haslam & Fiske (1999) did this: “In each analysis, one item was regressed on 41 dummy variables collectively representing the 42 participants, and the unstandardized residuals were retained.”. Did the current paper do the same? The sentence above is vague. The method applied by Haslam & Fiske (1999) seems somewhat outdated. Wouldn’t it be better to run the confirmatory factor analysis on a multilevel model, where random variance due to participants is added in the form of a random factor? Is that available in the R packages used here? The holdout samples in Study 2 fail to replicate the structure according to the criteria set earlier – CFI and TLI > .95, RMSEA < .06. But I noted in Table 2 that RMSEA actually holds up well, it’s the other two indices that are poor. Can this be interpreted? More generally, it would be helpful to the general reader if the authors wrote a few sentences explain what each of the indices assesses, and what the conventions are for acceptable scores, and good scores. On p. 19, the Discussion includes the sentence “Although we controlled between-participant variance by regressing participant ID on all item responses, these replication datasets were thus not independent.” – This was surprising, is it a copy-paste mistake? Why would you do that procedure if the data are not analyzed in the same model? If you analyze the datasets separately, this regression shouldn’t do anything, and seems unnecessary. Please clarify. On p. 16, you say “… that this is the true model of MORQ” – I would object to this way of putting it. You found a model that fits the data well, as well as new data. No model is ever true; a model is simply a model! The only question is whether it becomes useful by approximating the data. Study 4 matched new data to the dataset from Studies 2 and 3. This seems to contradict the earlier statements that “No personal identifying information was collected”. I assume that you matched participants using their Prolific ID? If so, you should clarify that the researcher team could not identify the participants. Please make it clear how you were able to match. Related: I actually had a look at the Study 2 dataset available on OSF and did not see any ID variable for participants, just wave, gender, and age. That should be added? p. 19: “the general factor and RWA were unrelated (r(2193)” – I couldn’t figure out how this was calculated. If this is a simple correlation, how did you arrive at a variable representing the general factor? Or was this done in the model, and we just see the estimate from the model? But then how do we get an r? Again, wouldn’t this be better done in a multilevel model? Same question for the remaining analyses in Study 4. The final model features a general “general relationship” factor, which however doesn’t load (or even loads negatively) on the AR items. In addition, the model fit requires a rather high correlation of the latent CS and EM variables. The discussion already provides a good start at explaining these. It’s not fully satisfying, but that’s ok. My question is however: What are the recommendations for future work with the MORQ (in particular the item selection here)? Should researchers simply average items to scales and proceed as usual? Or would it be better to replicate the observed structure, and then either work with the latent variables, or somehow save the (predicted?) values? I was a bit surprised and perplexed by how speedily participants completed the tasks in each of the studies. Do we know that all participants conscientiously completed all tasks? Was there any check on that? On lines 44-45, the authors write that Fiske posited the four relational systems to be the dimensions of social relationships. That is definitely not what Fiske posited; he posited that the relational models are four distinct structures of relationships, and not dimensions. Haslam’s subsequent work, using several taxometric methods, supported that conclusion. Regarding the dimensions vs. categories question: this is a bit hard to ask, because H&F1999 doesn’t really discuss this ether, despite the fact that H1994, using data collected with the same instrument, already shows that people perceive their own relationship as categorical. So I would just invite the authors to ponder this. Lines 45-46 (see also line 69), the authors write that authority ranking entails “respecting and obeying.” In his 1991 book, his 1992 article, and subsequent publications he specifically wrote that command and obedience are not necessary features of authority ranking. In some authority ranking systems, command and obedience are among the cultural implementations of authority ranking, in other cultural implementations, not. If US News and World Report ranks university A above university B, that does not entail anything about commands or obedience. Buddhists regard the Buddha as the highest ranking being, while for Tibetan Buddhists, the Dali Lama is not far below the Buddha. But neither is entitled by their supreme rank to give orders to anyone. Line 260 has a typo: “sets of items would permit fit this structural model.” Line 344, “AM” should be ‘AR.’ I wonder whether the “general factor” assesses commitment and devotion to the relational model, where the low end of the scale approaches what Fiske defines as ‘Null relationships.’ Lines 495-6 the authors mention the value of a measure of the person’s proclivity to form relationships based on the four respective relational models. Such a measure exists, and results from studies using it have been published. In essence, after a participant reports 40 relationships, the participant codes how well each one fits the four relational models, and the researcher simply counts how many of the person’s relationships are reportedly structured according to each of the four respective rms. Here are a couple of references: Allen, Nicholas B., Nick Haslam, and Assaf Semedar 2005. Relationship patterns associated with dimensions of vulnerability to psychopathology. Cognitive Therapy and Research 29: 733-746. Caralis, Dionyssios, and Nick Haslam 2004. "Relational tendencies associated with broad personality dimensions." Psychology and Psychotherapy: Theory, Research and Practice 77, no. 3: 397-402. Haslam, N., T. Reichert, and A. P. Fiske 2002. Aberrant Social Relations in the Personality Disorders. Psychology and Psychotherapy: Theory, Research and Practice 75:19–31. (See also: Brito, Rodrigo, Sven Waldzus, Maciej Sekerdej, and Thomas Schubert 2011. The contexts and structures of relating to others: How memberships in different types of groups shape the construction of interpersonal relationships. Journal of social and personal relationships 28, no. 3: 406-432.) Reviewer #3: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript! I was very pleased to see that someone has devoted himself to the topic of measuring relational models, after the research here has to fall back (by necessity) on a few scales that do not always "work" optimally. I find your work overall very promising and of practical value for future research on RMT. However, below are a number of comments that might help you make the article even more informative for the reader. Introduction: The explanation of Relational Models Theory seems to me to be a bit brief and I am not sure whether a reader who is not already familiar with this theory will really understand from this brief description what exactly the core ideas are, what exactly relational models are, what distinguishes the theory from other theoretical frameworks of social interaction and why it is significant and promises added value compared to other explanatory models. My guess is that many readers are not at all familiar with the theory and cannot assess to what extent the present research of an instrument revision is at all relevant. I think the manuscript would benefit greatly from expanding on this part. In which parts of psychological research is the theory applied? What phenomena can it explain? What are examples of recent studies in the different psychological sub-disciplines? A few recent studies (Keck et al., 2018, Vodosek, 2012) have already been cited, but not really described. Maybe you could use recent studies to give the reader an impression that the theory (which is, after all, somewhat older and does not really receive much attention in many psychological sub-disciplines) is definitely still relevant, which is why it is worthwhile to further develop the measurement of relational models. My impression is that - especially in organizational psychology - there is even a growing interest in this theoretical framework to explain social interactions, both on a theoretical (e.g., Bridoux & Stoelhorst, 2016; Mossholder et al., 2011) and on an empirical level (e.g., Arendt et al., 2021; Keck et al., 2018; Stofberg et al., 2019). It should also be mentioned that relational models theory has undergone several " enhancements " in the past decades, namely in the form of Relationship Regulation Theory (Rai & Fiske, 2011) and Relational Incentives Theory (Gallus et al., 2021). Please do not misunderstand me: It is not necessary to provide a comprehensive overview of all empirical research, but the reader should be given some insight into recent work on relational models in order to enable him/her to assess the practical value of a revised scale. Measuring relational Models • It might be worth mentioning that Vodosek's (2009) scale, that you mention and cite, measures relational models at team level and not at individual level. Against this background, the fact that the items did not or only insufficiently form a 4-factor structure is to be evaluated somewhat differently than in the case of a scale that refers to individual dyadic relationships. Already when formulating the Relational Models Theory, Fiske explicitly emphasized that no relationship takes place exclusively in one model and that it is actually always a matter of mixed forms from different models. It is certainly the case that in many (dyadic) relationships a tendency towards certain models is recognizable (which is supported by the previous results). However, with a methodological approach and a scale that refers to the relationships in an entire work team, as is the case in Vodosek's studies, one is confronted with the problem that in a team with its various members, relationships, team fault lines, etc., there is considerably more heterogeneity with regard to the relational models that are applied than in dyadic relationships. I think that Vodosek's scale can therefore only be compared to a limited extent with scales that consider dyadic relationships. There is also another adaption of the MORQ that is not yet mentioned in your manuscript: Biber et al. (2008) used a German adaption of the MORQ, that is provided by Hupfeld-Heinemann (2005). Interestingly this scale has also 20 items with 5 for each relational model. To my knowledge, the details of the scale construction and validation are only described in German but maybe the Author has also material in English. It would be interesting to know if his adaption of the scale resulted in the same or similar items as yours. Results: With regard to the results section and the scale-analytical results, I would like to note that although I am familiar with these topics in principle, I do not consider myself an expert in this area. Although the descriptions of the authors are coherent and comprehensible for me, I recommend to attach more importance to the judgment of the other reviewer(s) than to mine in this part of the work. References Arendt, J. F. W., Kugler, K. G., & Brodbeck, F. C. (2021). Conflicting relational models as a predictor of (in)justice perceptions and (un)cooperative behavior at work. Journal of Theoretical Social Psychology, 5, 183-202. https://doi.org/10.1002/jts5.85 Biber, P., Hupfeld, J., & Meier, L. L. (2008). Personal values and relational models. European Journal of Personality, 22(7), 609-628. Bridoux, F., & Stoelhorst, J. W. (2016). Stakeholder relationships and social welfare: A behavioral theory of contributions to joint value creation. Academy of Management Review, 41(2), 229-251. https://doi.org/10.5465/amr.2013.0475 Gallus, J., Reiff, J., Kamenica, E., & Fiske, A. P. (2021). Relational incentives theory. Psychological Review, Advance online publication. https://doi.org/10.1037/rev0000336 Hupfeld-Heinemann, J. (2005). Die grammatik sozialer beziehungen [Habilitation Thesis, Universität Bern]. Bern. Keck, N., Giessner, S. R., Quaquebeke, N., & Kruijff, E. (2018). When do followers perceive their leaders as ethical? A relational models perspective of normatively appropriate conduct. Journal of Business Ethics. https://doi.org/10.1007/s10551-018-4055-3 Mossholder, K. W., Richardson, H. A., & Settoon, R. P. (2011). Human resource systems and helping in organizations: A relational perspective. The Academy of Management Review, 36(1), 33-52. https://doi.org/10.5465/amr.2009.0402 Rai, T. S., & Fiske, A. P. (2011). Moral psychology is relationship regulation: Moral motives for unity, hierarchy, equality, and proportionality. Psychological Review, 118(1), 57-75. https://doi.org/10.1037/a0021867 Stofberg, N., Bridoux, F., Ciulli, F., Pisani, N., Kolk, A., & Vock, M. (2019). A relational‐models view to explain peer‐to‐peer sharing. Journal of Management Studies. https://doi.org/10.1111/joms.12523 Vodosek, M. (2009). The relationship between relational models and individualism and collectivism: Evidence from culturally diverse work groups. 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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have done a careful job responding to my comments and I am completely happy with all of them with the partial exception of comment 5. I realize the meaning of the general factor hasn't been fully clarified by the studies and it would not be reasonable to expect it to be, but is it really about initiating versus avoiding relationships (lines 297-8)? This would seem to implying that the general factor is about relationship onset and quantity (i.e., whether and when they begin and how many the person has), not qualitative aspects of the relationships the person actually has (like closeness or intensity or level of engagement). Surely a tendency to avoid relationships would mean you have fewer of them rather than saying much about the the nature of the ones you have. The fact that the general factor is related to features of actual relationships (e.g., the degree to which they're CS, EM and MP but not AR) implies that the general factor is about HOW people conduct the relationships they have rather than a general tendency to start versus avoid relationships. Clearly that "how" isn't adequately captured by closeness, but what it is remains uncertain. This is not a key issue and I don't think it has to be addressed, but I thought I'd raise it as something for the authors to consider and potentially tweak at lines 297-8 and potentially 576-585. To me, it would be better to be clear that any idea of the general relationship factor being about "avoidance" or "general commitment and devotion to form social relationships with others" has to do with how existing relationships are carried out (i.e., aspects of current relationships), not with whether they exist at all. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Nick Haslam Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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