Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 31, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-29930Effect of Core Training on Athletic and Skill Performance of Basketball Players: A Systematic ReviewPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 06 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Hoover Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and Additional Editor Comments (if provided): We believe this manuscript has promise, but issues raised by the peer reviewers must be addressed before it may meet the standards for publication. Thus, we encourage the authors to see reviewer reports, address the points raised, and resubmit in a timely fashion. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this article, which bridges addresses the topic of core stability training and it’s potential impact upon sport-specific performance measures within the sport of basketball. This is a topic that has received relatively lesser attention in the scientific literature. Thus, it stands to reason that greater reasoned analysis of this topic may be helpful for sport-specific coaches, conditioning coaches, and sport scientists as to the potential value of this type of training as well as potential insights into how this type of specific training might reasonably be integrated into annual training calendars. I see this manuscript as generally well-written and clearly laid out. The authors have done a nice job of laying out the need for such a study with the Introduction, clearly describing the Methods and Results, and tying the present findings to related studies within the Discussion. In terms of content, my most substantive suggestion is that the authors could further address the potential ramifications of these findings in light of the “general motor abilities hypothesis” versus “specificity of motor ability hypothesis” that has existed for over half a century (the authors are encouraged to review Magill’s Motor Learning and Control, if they are not familiar with these theories, ad this author does a nice job of comparing and contrasting these specific theories: https://www.amazon.com/Motor-Learning-Control-Concepts-Applications/dp/1259823997). So, specifically, in reading and re-reading this manuscript three times in my review, I was intrigued by the basic premise of the present systematic review and how it may relate to these important theories in motor behavior. In this context, the authors broach the topic of “general strength training” versus “specific strength training” (e.g. core strength training) and the evidence that general strength training does not necessarily translate to improved performance on the basketball court, whereas the specific strength training does seem to carryover, in terms of sport-specific movements that help the athlete perform at a higher lever. The authors do a solid job of addressing current consensus on why the specifics of core training may help to facilitate the strength of the kinetic chain, but as I read lines 62-63, 88-89, 91-95, and 96-104 I am left wanting more information on how these concepts may relate to the “general motor abilities hypothesis” versus “specificity of motor ability hypothesis”. In sum, on this point most coaches, trainers, and sport scientists typically understand that all athletes cannot perform all forms of training, as there are not enough hours in the day nor the capacity to recover from some training in most athletes. So, finally, in terms of helping to shed light on the author’s primary purpose, weaving in this historical debate on the “general motor abilities hypothesis” versus “specificity of motor ability hypothesis”, they may be able to help readers better understand the “why” behind the favorability of the core strength training. This would further strengthen it’s potential contribution to the scientific literature. I would recommend that the authors address this theoretical content at the end of the paragraph which ends on line 108 (basically create a new paragraph addressing this content). They will then also need to revisit this conceptually within the Discussion, but again I think this would help to further strengthen this manuscript. Otherwise, my suggestions for improving this manuscript are largely related to “cleaning up” some English-usage issues. The authors are likely writing in English as a second language, which likely has contributed to instances of odd language usage at times throughout the manuscript. Specific suggestions are listed below, but the authors are encouraged to further review their work for greater consistency in stylistic issues, as this will help to improve the overall quality. In summary, the aim of this project has merit. I recommend the authors address the issues noted below prior to this manuscript appearing in this peer-reviewed journal. Thanks once again for the opportunity to review this paper. Specific comments: Line 31: Insert a comma after Google Scholar (e.g. “Google Scholar, were…”) Line 38: Suggest revising from “Despite the lack of” to “Despite the relatively little evidence” Line 50: remove “the”, and “basketball” should be expressed using lower case (not capitalized) Line 62: Suggest revising to “as players do not demonstrate functional carryover as a result of this type of training.” Line 64: Replace “affect” with “effect” Lines 68-69: This sentence beginning “European and American….” does not thematically go with the rest of the paragraph, which focuses on core stability training. My suggestion is to revise this paragraph so that this sentence is moved to the previous paragraph, which actually addresses strength training. Line 77: Suggest revising as follows: “… increasing strength transfer and coordinating muscle use and management during functional activities such as sport-specific skills.” Line 105: Need a citation for this sentence. Line 110: Suggest revising to “…but not performance with low specificity or functional carryover.” Line 113: Need to be more specific here, describing no effect on what type of physical performance. Line 127: Replace “by” with “until” Lines 134-149: The first sentence in this passage is expressed in English past tense, as should be the case for this type of scientific writing. However, the second sentence then shifts to present tense, detracting from the authors’ clarity of expression. In short, this entire section should be revised so that it is expressed in past verb tense. Line 139: Replace “genders” with “sexes”. This is the first instance of many in which the authors seem to use this terminology imprecisely. See the following sources for elaboration on these related, and often confused, terms: https://cihr-irsc.gc.ca/e/48642.html https://www.who.int/health-topics/gender#tab=tab_1 In sum, this study does not address socially-constructed gender roles but biological attributes associated with physical training, so it seems that “sex” should be used throughout this manuscript. Line 158: Replace “gender” with “sex” Line 164: Replace “ranges” with “ranged” Line 170: Suggest revising to “….146 of which remained after duplicates were removed…” Line 181: Suggest revising to “…the other studies did not report the characteristics of the participants.” Line 181: Replace “gender” with “sex” Line 199: Replace “includes” with “included” Line 220: Replace “are” with “were” Line 221: “plank” should not be capitalized (lower case) Line 223: Capitalize “Superman” Line 318: Suggest revising “waist and abdomen” to “trunk and hip” Line 326: Replace “improves” with “improved” Line 328: Replace “improves” with “improved” Line 331: Replace “collect” with “absorb” Line 335: Replace “guarantees” with “influences” Line 339: Replace “extremists” with “extremities” Lines 347-348: Suggest revising as follows: “Balance is regulated by the vestibular apparatus within the central nervous system as well as receptors in muscles, tendons, and joints and then coordinated within the somatosensory cortex with the aid of visual stimulus.” Line 365: Suggest revising to “the abdominal, trunk, and hip muscles are the “heart” of the movement chain.” Line 402: This is the first instance that you have capitalized “superman”. Technically, the superhero is known as “Superman”, so this likely needs to be capitalized throughout the manuscript simply for sake of consistency. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-22-29930R1Effect of Core Training on Athletic and Skill Performance of Basketball Players: A Systematic ReviewPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zhao, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 13 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: The authors have done a nice job of addressing reviewer suggestions and revising this manuscript. The re-review created a few more minor suggested edits. The authors are encouraged to make these revisions in a timely manner and then resubmit. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to re-review this article, which bridges addresses the topic of core stability training and its potential impact upon sport-specific performance measures within the sport of basketball. As I noted in my original review, this topic has received little attention in the scientific literature. Additional information on this topic may be helpful for sport-specific coaches, conditioning coaches, and sport scientists. In sum, I believe the authors have adequately addressed my suggestion for better explaining the “why” behind the mechanisms that may contribute to this functional carryover seen with core training. As noted in my original review, I see this manuscript as generally well-written and clearly laid out. In the revision, the authors have done a fine job of integrating my original suggestion regarding the inclusion of motor behavior theory and how it may reasonably illustrate the conceptual rationale for how this type of core training may carry over to increased functional performance on sport-specific skills within the sport of basketball. The value of this cannot be overstated, given the goal of all coaches to make links between the training they engage athletes in and the carryover to on-court performance. Otherwise, my suggestions for improving this manuscript are largely related to “cleaning up” a few additional English-usage issues. In re-reading this manuscript, I have found a few junctures where I believe the word usage can be improved, so I’ve made some specific friendly edits toward the goal of contributing to the overall “readability” of the manuscript. In summary, the aim of this project has merit. I recommend the authors address the issues noted below prior to this manuscript appearing in this peer-reviewed journal. Thanks once again for the opportunity to review this paper. Specific comments: Lines 59-60: Suggest revising to the following: “European and American experts began to widely implement strength training principles in a variety of sports in the late 1990s.” Line 116: Need a citation here, at the end of this sentence. The Magill textbook will work fine here (29). Line 127: Suggest adding the following sentence to the end of this paragraph: “In sum, the specificity hypothesis is likely helpful in understanding in what ways core strength training may contribute to improved sport-specific performance.” Line 138: Suggest a minor revision as follows: “This systematic review aims to elucidate the impact of core training as a function of the above-noted specificity hypothesis on basketball players’ physical and skill performance.” Restating in this manner will help to better tie in the new content the authors have included regarding the general vs specificity concept, thus helping to better elucidate why they have elected to do this study. Line 134: Need to correct this typo. I assume it’s referring to VO2 max but not clear as written. Line 166: Revise to the following: “…addressing the impact of at least one core strength intervention on…” Line 257: Replace “are” with “were” Line 341: Suggest revising to: “There is a lack of consensus on whether an athlete should use strength training within a sport-specific training program, what type of strength training should the athlete use, when to use, and how to apply it.” Citations are needed for this sentence; number 7 likely works here but others are needed too. Line 345: Need a citation here, at the end of the sentence. Also, suggest revising to “General strength training can provide overall protective strength ….” Line 346: Suggest revising to: “Adding additional muscle can also help with energy transfer, as a mix of fast and slow twitch fibers can provide more energy uptake, which can help athletes with endurance [45]”. Line 348: Suggest revising to: “To build any type of muscle, however, the muscle must be overloaded, which causes fatigue and necessitates recovery.” Line 350: Suggest revising to: “Furthermore, most coaches, trainers, and sport scientists understand that most athletes do not possess unlimited hours each day to train nor do they have limitless capacity to recover from training and competition, so they must be highly strategic in what they include in training plans [46,47].” Line 352: Suggest revising to: “As a result, highly specific strength training appears to be most beneficial to athletes, as it can improve the execution of sports activities, particularly as external resistance may be added to make the training task more difficult. Specific strength training can stimulate focused muscle growth, increasing further power, endurance, and speed of movement without requiring the excessive time commitments or undue fatigue that generalized strength training programs may be likely to generate [48]” ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-22-29930R2 Effect of Core Training on Athletic and Skill Performance of Basketball Players: A Systematic Review Dear Dr. Zhao: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Donald L. Hoover Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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