Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 28, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-23997The association between hyperlipidemia, lipid-lowering drugs and diabetic peripheral neuropathy in patients with type 2 diabetes mellitusPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 15 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In the present study, the authors analyzed the association between hyperlipidemia, lipid-lowering drugs and diabetic peripheral neuropathy (DPN) . Their results showed that neither hyperlipidemia nor lipid-lowering medication was associated with DPN in adults with T2DM. The study population was large and the design was reasonable. But, I still have some concerns to address. 1.the authors analyzed the association of hyper-LDL and hyper-TC with risk of DPN. But why the association of hypertriglyceridemia and low-HDL with DPN were not evaluated. Although the two lipids were not different between two groups, the comparison might be confunded by other factors. 2.Since several studies have shown that hyperlipidemia, including LDL, TG, HDL, were contributors for DPN in T2DM (e.g. a review by Pop-Busui R, et al. Diabetes Care. 2017;40(1):136-54), the authors should discuss more details about the discrepancy (e.g. the differences in examination method, characteristics of subjects, statistical method... ) 3.In the multi-regression analysis, some factors were adjusted (Table 2, 3,4). It should be explained why these factors were selected to adjust. Especially, how to adjust the type of diabetes treatment? I think the table and legends could be more detailed. 4.How was the sample size calculated? 5.How about the liver and renal functions (e.g.ALT, AST, Cr) in each group? Whether the patients with severe abnormal liver or renal functions were excluded, since the abnormal function could affect the blood lipid levels. Reviewer #2: # Review The manuscript is written clearly. A large sample size is included. A thorough statistical analysis is performed. The data are clearly presented and justify the conclusions. The references are up-to-date. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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PONE-D-22-23997R1 The association between hyperlipidemia, lipid-lowering drugs and diabetic peripheral neuropathy in patients with type 2 diabetes mellitus PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As the original Academic Editor and one of the reviewers became unavailable, we sought input from additional reviewers. These reviewers provide different perspectives, which we now invite you to address and/or rebut, as we feel that in doing so the clarity and messaging of the manuscript will improve. Please see the full reports below. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 15 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Hanna Landenmark Staff Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: (No Response) Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The Authors of the manuscript entitled "The association between hyperlipidemia, lipid-lowering drugs and diabetic peripheral neuropathy in patients with type 2 diabetes mellitus" have made corrections according to the Reviewer's suggestions. Reviewer #3: Dear Authors and Editor, the main problem of this manuscript is the cross-sectional analyses. Such design does not allow to evalaute any causal link between lipid profile or lipid lowering therapy and DPN. Indeed this study is biased by several factors, e.g. confounding by indications, reverse causality, immortal time bias.... This design does not allow to address the role of lipid profile and LLT on DPN. The authors should design a longitudinal study, evaluating onset of DPN after initiation of LLT or after exposure to low or high levels of HDL,TG,LDL etc... The results therefore do not support the conclusions. Reviewer #4: Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read your paper. This is an interesting cross-sectional study of the association between hyperlipidemia, lipid-lowering drugs and diabetic peripheral neuropathy (DPN) in patients with type 2 diabetes mellitus (T2D). Despite studies conducted among Western cohorts have shown that lipid-lowering medication is not associated with DPN, the evidence is insufficient for Asian cohorts. The study included patients with type 2 diabetes seen in an outpatient clinic at a Taiwanese tertiary medical center. Upon enrollment baseline characteristics were collected including anthropometric measures, medical history, and medication. Neuropathy was evaluated using measurements recommend by clinical guidelines including answering the Michigan Neuropathy Screening Instrument and a thorough clinical examination. Using regression analyses, the authors report that neither hyperlipidemia nor lipid-lowering drugs were associated with a risk of DPN. Despite these findings, the study has limitations – please see my comments below. Major comments: For those in lipid-lowering drug treatment, the authors obtained the baseline lipid level within five years before the drug was prescribed. I understand that patients in lipid-lowering therapy used the medication at baseline. What was the purpose by defining the baseline lipid level as the level before drug treatment and not using the on-treatment lipid level? The on-treatment lipid level may be more informative since lipid-lowering therapy per definition impacts the lipid level. Furthermore, is it possible to obtain information on how long time patients have received lipid-lowering therapy? The cut-offs for triglycerides are very high. Other studies have used 150 mg/dL (1.7 mmol/L). 200 mg/dL is a target provided for clinicians who should consider initiating statin therapy in patients who have a high risk of CVD (Mach et al . 2019, 2019 ESC/EAS guidelines for the management of dyslipidaemias: Lipid modification to reduce cardiovascular risk). The cut-off is therefore not DPN specific. Furthermore, using cut-off points can be informative, but may also be problematic because the categorization implies an assumption about patients in a giving category have the same risk which may lead to loss of information (Royston et al. Stat med. 2006). While this assumption maybe approximately true in some cases, it is likely rare that this would hold biologically. Did the authors consider to use more flexible models to be inform the reader about the form of the association for example by using restricted cubic splines? It is highly problematic that the authors categorize patients into “hyperlipidemic” subgroups based on three very different lipid measurements. While LDL cholesterol is important as a cardiovascular disease risk marker, triglycerides may be the most important for neuropathy. When categorized according to EITHER cholesterol OR triglycerides the results will tend to be diluted because LDL cholesterol is not associated with neuropathy. The authors should therefore consider regrouping the patients and analyze the results for each lipid parameter separately. At last, it is unclear why the authors repeat the analysis in Table 2 using another reference group. Instead of categorizing based on two factors (lipid level and lipid-lowering medication), I suggest the authors to stratify on use of lipid-lowering medication for each lipid parameter (exposure). In that way there will only be one exposure. Perhaps the message will be clearer then. According to the American Diabetes Association, diabetic polyneuropathy is a diagnosis of exclusion (Pop-Busui et al. Diabetes Care 2017). Thus, before a diagnosis of neuropathy can be made, clinicians should exclude other causes for example chemotherapy, alcohol, hereditary, B-vitamin deficiency etc. It is unclear whether study participants were excluded if they had another cause of neuropathy than diabetes. The authors state that their regression analyses were adjusted for all confounders defined as covariates that showed a significant correlation. Talking about confounders in a causal framework requires that confounders are separated from mediators and clearly described to the reader. If the aim of the paper is a casual interpretation, the researchers are interested in the “total effect” and would therefore avoid to adjust for mediators. Mediators may also associate “significantly” with the outcome and this rule can therefore not be used to interpret what covariates to adjust for. How did the authors ensure that they only adjusted for confounders and not mediators? Could there be residual confounding? The cohort has a very high median age. Is it possible that those with high cholesterol/triglycerides have died before they had the possibility to participate in your study? Could this be a highly selective cohort and, in that way, cause an underestimation of the association? Minor: • It is unclear from the method section how many patients were eligible and how many patients were excluded. For example, patients were excluded due to missing lipid measurements, but it is unknown how many it was. • It is unclear from the abstract what the main finding was. Please provide odds ratios. • I would recommend not to show P-values. P-values and statistical testing should not be used to evaluate associations (Greenland et al. Eur J Epidemiology 2016). In addition, they should not be used to test differences for baseline characteristics. • Abbreviations are not explained. Please write out the word the first time it is mentioned and include the abbreviation in parenthesis. Use the abbreviation thereafter. For example “triglycerides (TG)”. • Please indicate with percent (%) how many in an exposure subgroup had neuropathy. • The many abbreviations make the result section hard to read and understand. Try to rewording the subgroups. • The word “risk” implies that the study looks at incident cases and can determine causality. Please use another word for example “association” or “odds”. • Please use updated guidelines. The guideline on blood cholesterol has changed very much since 2013 (see discussion). • The section about limitations lacks thoughts about residual confounding, selection bias, misclassification and reverse causality. Reviewer #5: The research is thought of and appropriately carried out. The findings are consistent with the objectives of the study. The limitations reflect a good understanding of what the outcome should be. ********** 7. 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The association between hyperlipidemia, lipid-lowering drugs and diabetic peripheral neuropathy in patients with type 2 diabetes mellitus PONE-D-22-23997R2 Dear Dr. Chang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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The Discussion section effectively contextualizes the findings, comparing them with existing research and thoroughly discussing potential explanations for the observed results. Even though the limitations section could have been further elaborated to address the potential impact of these limitations on the study's findings and conclusions, the authors have tried to address the limitations of their findings. Overall, the study contributes valuable insights to the understanding of DPN in T2D Asian patients, emphasizing that DPN is a multifactorial condition and suggesting that controlling hyperlipidemia alone may not be sufficient to prevent DPN. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: # Review The Authors have made corrections according to the Reviewer's suggestions and in the present form the manuscript may be suitable for the publication. Reviewer #3: As said before the cross sectional design is not adequate for the purposes of this study. The relationship between onset of complications and initiation of treatments is not considered, multiple bias can influence the reported association. Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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