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PONE-D-22-35369Retention of zirconia crown to oxidized titanium base abutment: Experimental researchPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kunavisarut, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Thank you for submitting the work to PLOS ONE. There are several concerns mainly on the manuscript writings, organization, and impact of the work. Please see the reviewers' comments for details. Please provide clarifications and address all comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 31 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: After reviewing the article, I point out the following topics for the authors to evaluate: 1. On page 11, in the last paragraph of the introduction, the authors point out a single null hypothesis. However, on page 17, they state that the second null hypothesis was confirmed. 2. On page 13, the authors state that a 2X2mm2 area of a single specimen from each group was used to assess roughness. However, on page 16, in table 1, they state that roughness was measured in 3 different specimens (n=3). 3. On page 14, figure 3, the authors describe 6 different situations to characterize 3 types of failures. The descriptions of the situations in the letters D, E, F, are difficult to visualize and do not add relevant information to the situations described in the letters A, B, C. Therefore, I suggest keeping only the characterizations of the letters A, B, C to describe the 3 types of failure. 4. The main limitations of the article presented are the absence of a sample calculation, or the calculation of the power of the sample used, and also the lack of description of the statistical analysis performed. 5. In the results, on page 15, I also suggest reviewing the mean and standard deviation values of one of the roughness parameters (Rc). Did the sandblasted and oxidized sandblasted groups show exactly the same values? 6. On page 15, in Graph 1, I suggest adding indicators whether or not there was a statistically significant difference between the groups. 7. On page 16, table 1, a single p value is presented for two different comparisons of the Ra parameter, described in the legend (control vs. sandblasted) and (sandblasted vs. oxidized). 8. On page 16, still in Table 1, a single p value is presented for four different comparisons of the Rc parameter, described in the legend (control vs. sandblasted), (control vs. oxidized-sandblasted), (Oxidized vs. sandblasted) and (oxidized vs. oxidized-sandblasted). 9. On page 16, in the presentation of the groups, I suggest keeping the sandblasted group as letter b, to correspond to group 2, which was always presented as sandblasted. 10. On page 17, in table 2, it is described that the evaluation of the type of failure was performed with a magnification of X10. In other locations, this described magnification was X20. 11. Still on page 17, in table 2, I suggest reviewing the data from the sandblasted, control and oxidized-sandblasted groups. As the sandblasted group had the highest roughness, wouldn't it be expected that the sandblasted groups would have more type 1 failures? On the other hand, the control and oxidized-sandblasted groups, with less roughness compared to the sandblasted group, wouldn't more type 3 failures be expected? 12. Still on page 17, in the caption of table 2, I suggest repeating the description of the types of failures to facilitate the reading and understanding of the text. 13. In the discussion, on page 18, line 8, wouldn't the comparison described be between oxidized sandblasted group and sandblasted group rather than oxidized sandblasted group and oxidized group? 14. Still on page 18, the authors state: “The majority of the cement remaining on “crown” in oxidized group while the opposite occurred for the oxidized sandblasted group, with the majority of the cement remaining on the “abutment”. Table 2 does not demonstrate this. Note that in the oxidized group, most failures were type 1, which 90% of the cement remained retained in the abutment. As described in item 11, I suggest reviewing the data presented in table 2. 15. On page 19, lines 12 and 13, the authors state: “Sandblasting protocol in this study may not cause enough roughness to increase bond strength significantly.” In the results presented, blasting resulted in increased retention when compared to the control group, which contradicts this statement. 16. It would be important for the authors to point out the possible limitations of their work. As an example, the lack of physicochemical characterization of Ti surfaces before and after oxidation. Furthermore, the method used to characterize the abutment surface in the 4 different groups seems very limited. Perhaps it would be interesting to use other resources such as SEM. Reviewer #2: Main concern: The present study has a small impact on the dental field. Most of the cited studies on the subject are old, reinforcing the small impact of the subject in the current context. In addition, several points in the writing of the manuscript must be revised and reformulated to be in Plos One standards. The study did not adequately characterize the problem in the introduction, did not present statistical analysis methods, and did not discuss limitations. In addition, several references presented in the text are not in the references cited at the end of the text. Abstracts. - The first sentence of the abstract is strange. Please, review it. - Explain briefly the method of specimen aging. - In the results, the authors reported the statistical difference between the groups. However, it is important to present the directions of the effects, i.g., which group was better? - Please, present the mean and SD of the tests results. Introduction - Please, avoid direct citations in the text. - The sentence “debonding the crown with a constant dry heat will cause oxidation on the - abutment surface.” needs to be referenced. - The affirmation of the sentence “These cases provide the need for a new restoration.” Including chipped restoration can lead to an overtreatmnent. Restoration repair should be the first option in these cases. So, I suggest to the authors the reading of below paper: Anusavice KJ. Standardizing failure, success, and survival decisions in clinical studies of ceramic and metal-ceramic fixed dental prostheses. Dent Mater. 2012;28:102-111 - The authors report the study of Gamelli E et al. However, this study is not in the reference - The reference cited in the introduction Sailor et al is not cited in the reference - The sentence “The chemical bond between the phosphate group in resin cement and the titanium dioxide layer may be affected.” need to be referenced. Also, explain how the layer may be affected. - The authors need to improve the introduction to better characterize the problem of the study. How the oxide affect the cementation? In which clinical situations the dry heat debondation is indicated? Materials and methods - The authors report “Sixty zirconia crowns were milled from monolithic zirconia disk”. However, seems that there are ten “n” for the group. Please, clarify this in the study. - The authors did not report how the statistic was performed in the study. Results - Show where the statistical differences are in graph 1. Also, why the authors used a bo plot graph? Box plot should be used for nonparametric distribution. Did the authors check the data distribution? what test was used? - Table 1. Please, provide similar letters for groups that were similar in the analyzes and different letters for different groups. This is the conventional way of reporting statistical differences in this type of study. - Present each statistical test performed in the footnote of the table/figure. - Avoid rewriting all the data (already presented in the tables) in the text. Draw attention to what really matters in the text. Discussion - Authors need to discuss the limitations of the present study and the directions for further studies. - Avoid direct citations. References: - Please, avoid the citations of books and old references - Some references are not under the journal style Reviewer #3: The study aimed to evaluate potential surface treatments for debonded crown on titanium base abutment. The results are interesting and justified by the methods used. It would be interesting to add in the discussion the explanation of how the debonded method used in the paper can relate to clinical condition, and also the clinical application of sandblasting, as if it is safe to perfome it clinically. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Luiz Alexandre Chisini Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-22-35369R1Retention of zirconia crown to oxidized titanium base abutment: Experimental researchPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kunavisarut, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 29 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Sompop Bencharit, DDS, MS, PhD, FACP Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for addressing the comments from the reviewers. I think the manuscript is significantly improved. There are a few additional requests I would like to add. 1) Please add SEM method in the Methods section. 2) Since you compared the SEM analyses among different groups, I think we need to take it one step further to see if there is damages or changes in material elemental composition. Can you add EDX experiments into this? If not please provide justification and rationale. My thought is that air abrasion may alter the composition of the abutment surface. 3) Please change "sand blasting" to "air abrasion". 4) Can you discuss the depth of the air abrasion and the anodization layer? I assume that air abrasion would not go beyond the anodization layer. If we will recommend this clinically, would this be an issue if someone air abrade the implant abutment too much? [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Retention of zirconia crown to oxidized titanium base abutment: Experimental research PONE-D-22-35369R2 Dear Dr. Kunavisarut, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sompop Bencharit, DDS, MS, PhD, FACP Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Thank you for revising this manuscript and addressing all comments from the reviewers and editor. Reviewers' comments: |
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