Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 28, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-00885Constructing of Predictive Model for the Surgical Effect of Patients with Cleft Lip and PalatePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. I would like to sincerely apologise for the delay you have incurred with your submission. It has been exceptionally difficult to secure reviewers to evaluate your study. We have now received two completed reviews; the comments are available below. The reviewers have raised significant scientific concerns about the study that need to be addressed in a revision. Please revise the manuscript to address all the reviewer's comments in a point-by-point response in order to ensure it is meeting the journal's publication criteria. Please note that the revised manuscript will need to undergo further review, we thus cannot at this point anticipate the outcome of the evaluation process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 04 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors. I like to provide you some observations regarding your interesting study. An important limitation are the groups conformation and follow up time. Outcomes have been considered as good or poor however these were estimated using subjective scales like Asher Mc Dade. In addition, there is not a correlation between the categories of used scales and your categories (good and poor). It is not clear how are you considering the outcomes as good and poor in this study. In addition, the follow up time used in this study is not adequate to evaluate a surgical outcome, this should be at least one year. Finally, the most important predictive factor is probably the surgeon performance and this was not included. In addition, should be important to analyze the clinical relevance of the statistical significant factors like nutritional ones. Reviewer #2: Thank you for providing me with the opportunity to review the manuscript entitled “Constructing of Predictive Model for the Surgical Effect of Patients with Cleft Lip and Palate” for consideration for publication in PLOS One. Here, the authors have created a predictive model to evaluate post-operative surgical aesthetic outcomes in cleft lip and nasal deformity repair in a rather large cohort of patients between 2015 – 2020. The number of patients and data incorporated into the model is impressive and the predictive nature of it impressive as well; however, it does raise many questions and comments. 1. The article would benefit from significant revision to enhance readability. 2. My largest concern is related to the model. a. There is a significant amount of data included in the model with many confounders that have not been addressed. b. How did the authors decide on what was an intense labor? What about nutrition? Did the authors have data on intensity of labor in a 40 year old? Im assuming the data was incomplete for some of these patients. c. Were cleft lips (incomplete) compared against complete cleft lips? LAHSHAL nomenclature or some standardized nomenclature would be needed. One cannot compare an incomplete cleft lip with a spared alveolus to a complete cleft lip and palate. Was NAM available or some form of presurgical molding? Was syndromic status taken into consideration? d. The model seems to include revisions as well. This raises another question about homogeneity when it comes to the model. The model includes patients of all ages, cleft types, and revision status. This introduces a significant amount of variability as it ignores the importance of facial growth. Number of surgeries would certainly correlate with a poor result – the fact that one is operating more than once on a lip means the index procedure may not have been as ideal. Issues such as these do not seem to have been taken into considering in the statistical model. e. Cleft lip and palate outcomes assessment is complex. There are many rating scales and there is a lot of room for subjectivity. While the authors have used somewhat standardized scales, there is still room for significant subjectivity. f. The authors discuss using this in the preoperative consultation. What actions can a provider take to improve the outcome? Based on the data, surgical method and breast feeding are the only two “modifiable” factors that can be changed after a child is born. Do the authors recommend that they care giver abstain from breast-feeding (I would not recommend this based on the wealth of information supporting the significant benefits associated with breast feeding, especially in resource-constrained settings? How this is used in the clinic is not explored. I would be worried that, as constructed, this could become somewhat of a self-fulfilling prophecy. g. Surgical method was important. What method should be used? This is not really discussed. Tables and figures should be referenced in the manuscript in order. For example, Table 3 comes before Table 1. Thank you very much for this opportunity. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Percy ROSSELL-PERRY Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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Constructing of Predictive Model for the Surgical Effect of Patients with Cleft Lip and Palate PONE-D-23-00885R1 Dear Dr. Yang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Engy Asem Ashaat Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-23-00885R1 Constructing of Predictive Model for the Surgical Effect of Patients with Cleft Lip and Palate Dear Dr. Yang: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Engy Asem Ashaat Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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