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PONE-D-21-19478 Power Posture Effects on Approach and Avoidance Decisions in Response to Social Threat PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Metzler, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. I apologize again for the considerable delay in reviewing process due to recurring significant difficulties in securing reviewers for your submission. After careful consideration and feedback from two experts in the field, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that carefully addresses the points raised during the review process. If you choose to submit a revision, please make sure to respond point-by-point to Reviewers' comments found below, paying particular attention to the technical and statistical aspects of your work (including declaring where applicable, whether or not the data were normally distributed, two- or one-tailed tests used and why, and whether the tests were corrected for multiplicity). Please submit your revised manuscript within six months from this date as afterwards, any revision has to be considered a new submission. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors report one experiment in which participants took first a neutral and then a power-related posture (expansive or contracted). After these manipulations, individuals were administered a decision task in which they decided on a computer screen to move their mouse cursor to a chair near or far from an angry or fearful looking individual. This decision was taken as an index for “I want to sit near or far from the individual”. Results revealed as expected a change in behavioral decisions due to posture: Angry individuals were even more avoided when participants had taken contracted postures compared to neutral postures. There was no change for expansive postures nor for trials with fearful individuals. The study is well written and the results are interesting. However, given the heated debate concerning power posing effects, I was surprised that the authors conducted only a single study. As they state themselves, the observed effect was smaller than expected, and thus the study slightly underpowered. Furthermore, results were only achieved for anger in the contracted posture condition. One might thus say that hypotheses were only partially fulfilled. Moreover, some aspects of the theoretical reasoning are not entirely clear to me: The authors argue that effects of power posing might be found only for social behavior. For what reasons? Typically, researchers study power-related behavior, feelings etc. as consequences based on an embodiment explanation (i.e., the posture induces/reinstantiates a feeling of power). Many effects can also be explained via activation of semantic concepts (i.e., the semantic concept of power is activated, so that associated content is also more accessible). It is true that power postures also (maybe mainly) have a social message, but what is the assumed underlying mechanism of the effect? Embodiment? The authors also mention that none of the participants could identify fear and anger as the displayed emotions. Thus, on which processes should the effects be based? On nonconscious ones? In sum, I can unfortunately not recommend publication of the study as it is. With further data, however, the study would be a very interesting one. Major points: 1. Theoretical points: The authors report on a topic which has – as they state themselves – received considerable debate, replication attempts, meta-analyses and reviews in the last years. Given the central importance of this debate for their research, I suggest that the authors are a bit more detailed and explicit about the findings that emerged throughout this debate and the link to their current study. Namely, that effects on other outcome measures beyond feeling were mainly not replicated (Jonas et al., 2017). The authors explicate that most behaviors (for which the effect could not be replicated) would have been non-social and that research regarding social behavior would have been scarce until now. What is lacking, however, is an explanation why power posing should influence social behavior, but not non-social (but power-related behavior, such as, e.g., risk taking). With regard to their research and the specific emotions of anger and fear, the authors explain on p.6 why power posing should influence actions towards an angry or fearful other. Some of the mentioned research takes an appraisal approach, that is, this research takes as a starting point that the feeling of anger goes along with the appraisal of being in control/high power, or vice versa: if one feels in control, it is more likely to develop anger when confronted with an opponent, rather than fear. With regard to this issue, it is interesting to consider their effects. Do they think shared appraisals are the reasons for the observed effects? (see the review of Angie, Connelly, Waples, & Kligyte, 2011, for effects of specific emotions on judgment and decision-making). I would like to have the assumed underlying process or mechanism more outlined. 2. Gender of participants and stimuli: The authors explain that the decision of taking only men is empirically motivated. Is there also a theoretical explanation? Perhaps, men have a stronger power motive, or power posing is something which typically men use to demonstrate their power but not women? Given this choice, is the effect the same for male and female stimulus persons? Perhaps, the effect only plays a role for male stimuli? Or varies quantitatively depending on stimulus gender? 3. Task instructions and processing of facial expressions: Participants were instructed to keep their eyes on the fixation cross during the task. Perhaps as a consequence, the authors state on p.11 that “none [of the participants] could specifically identify anger and fear as the two displayed emotions”. Thus, on which processes did participants base their decisions to “approach” or “avoid” one person if it was not the perceived emotional facial expressions? Do the authors assume that the responsible processes are nonconscious ones? They must assume that anger and fear are nonconsciously processed and influence the decision. It is, however, debated whether specific emotions are nonconsciously processed on a specific level (see, e.g., Rohr, Degner, & Wentura, 2015). 4. The authors report that taking the postures took two minutes and each experimental block on average 6.5 minutes. I wondered how long the posture effect holds. Perhaps results are limited to the first block of experimental trials after the posture only? Minor points: • The authors term their task “approach-avoidance task”. However, participants’ task is not directly related to approaching the other. It might be said that a decision for the chair farer away is one of avoiding the other, but speaking of approach is not entirely correct. Maybe this is a point that should be discussed in order not to mingle the results with other approach-avoidance tasks. • On p.7 136ff the authors outline shortly results of previous studies. They speak of the increased avoidance of angry faces. In comparison to what? • On p.9 they describe how the total number of trials is made with regard to the conditions. This is very difficult to understand. Could you please rephrase/outline a bit more? Reviewer #2: The authors studied the effects of power posing on approach and avoidance decisions. Participants were assigned to a high power pose or a low power pose group and engaged in a virtual stool-selection task while seeing angry or fearful persons sitting on stools. After low power posing, participants avoided fearful individuals whereas high power posing had no effect. The study is interesting and authors studied body positions in relation to a hierarchy-relevant topic: approach/avoidance behavior. Research on body positions is relevant and can progress this controversial field. However, before recommending publication, I think the authors should address the following points: 1) The theory section is not up-to-date and several hierarchy terms are mixed. I think the authors should provide more clarity about which effects of body positions are valid and which are not valid (see Körner et al., 2022). For example, the authors repeatedly cite the meta-analysis by Gronau et al. (2017). This meta-analysis relies on a very small sample size and only analyzes the effect of power posing on feelings of power. Thus, the generalizability of this meta-analysis is very limited. Further, the field suffered from consensus and different kinds of body positions have been mixed despite different meanings of different degrees of expansiveness. Therefore, it would be helpful to clarify what body positions were actually studied: Poses (in line with power posing research) representing dominance (see Körner & Schütz, 2020; Witkower et al., 2020). This leads to the next point: The authors quote findings from studies on power, dominance, status, etc. This is fine. However, it should be more clearly stated which effect pertains to which hierarchy variable (power is not dominance, see Blader & Chen, 2014). Much of the rationale relies on findings about dominance (e.g., almost the entire second paragraph about animals and body size in the Introduction). This is completely fine as recent research suggests that power poses are actually dominance poses (Körner & Schütz, 2020; Witkower et al., 2020), but again, more clarity should be provided. For example, the authors can use the term pose instead of posture to join consensus-building in this field. The theoretical rationale can more heavily describe what are correlates of dominance and how can dominant or submissive nonverbal displays affect approach/avoidance behavior. It is fine to still refer to power, as dominance often leads to power (in terms of influence and control), but it should be clearly stated what hierarchy construct is relevant in which sentence (e.g., writing dominance status makes it unclear whether the authors speak about dominance or about social status). Blader, S. L., & Chen, Y.-R. (2012). Differentiating the effects of status and power: A justice perspective. Journal of Personality and Social Psychology, 102(5), 994–1014. Körner, R., Röseler, L., Schütz, A., & Bushman, B. J. (2022). Dominance and prestige: Meta-analytic review of experimentally induced body position effects on behavioral, self-report, and physiological dependent variables. Psychological Bulletin. Advance online publication. Körner, R., & Schütz, A. (2020). Dominance or prestige: A review of the effects of power poses and other body postures. Social and Personality Psychology Compass, 14(8), Article e12559. Witkower, Z., Tracy, J. L., Cheng, J. T., & Henrich, J. (2020). Two signals of social rank: Prestige and dominance are associated with distinct nonverbal displays. Journal of Personality and Social Psychology, 118(1), 89–129. 2) The authors wrote “Yet, feelings as well as many other investigated behaviours were assessed using explicit self-reports, which are susceptible to demand effects” (p. 4). Behaviors are typically not assessed with self-reports because self-reports tap into feelings, thoughts, and self-evaluations. The sentence thus needs revision. Moreover, the authors wrote “cognitively complex social behaviour, such as sales negotiation, cheating or planning to take revenge or to volunteer (Cesario & Johnson, 2017; Strelan et al., 2014; Yap et al., 2013).” Strelan et al. measured revenge with a self-report instrument. Thus, their DV represents rather a self-evaluation than a behavior. The sentence thus needs revision. 3) It may help to backup the sentence on p. 5, lines 96-98, with a reference. 4) p. 8, lines 459-165: This section should be removed. The most recent meta-analytical evidence shows that men and women do not differ in their effects of body positions (see Körner et al., 2022). The same applies to the last paragraph of the discussion (p. 22, lines 521-526) – it should be removed. Instead, it should be clearly stated that it is a limitation to study only men. Yet, as the results of other body position studies do not differ between men and women the authors may speculate that the same effects may be found with women. 5) The power/sensitivity analyses are very detailed. It is great that the authors provide so much elaboration on that part, however, it distracts somewhat. I recommend removing the first sensitivity analysis (pp. 8-9) because in the results section another, more important sensitivity analysis follows. Perhaps, the second sensitivity analysis could be included in a footnote to increase the flow of the manuscript. Moreover, the effect of body positions on self-reports and behaviors is small to medium and thus I would refrain from describing the study as high-powered. It may help to describe the effect sizes used in the power/sensitivity analyses in words so that readers instantly understand that the participant number provides enough power to detect large effects but not enough power to detect small effects. 6) It is great that approach/avoidance responses as an elementary behavior was studied as DV. However, I see two limitations: First, the virtual task is described as preventing demand effects. Yet, the within-subjects design makes demand effects more plausible (Greenwald, 1976). Thus, it may be better to frame this point more carefully (i.e., avoid to describe your study as almost free from any demand effects). Second, the stool-choosing scenario might be criticized as lacking ecological validity. Indeed, a behavior was studied but it is unknown whether the findings also apply to real-world settings. Greenwald, A. G. (1976). Within-subjects designs: To use or not to use? Psychological Bulletin, 83(2), 314–320. 7) In the paragraph on p. 19 (lines 437-450), the references are messed up. The Weick et al. (2017)-reference does not refer to body positions and thus does not fit with the corresponding sentence. The Elkjaer et al. (2020)-reference was heavily criticized. Thus, both references should be removed. The year of Guinotes work is missing and the names of the 2003-reference (very likely Keltner et al.,) are missing. Related to this: The authors refer to the work by Nielsen (2017) as evidence of a non-significant effect of body positions. Nielsen used trait measures and the non-significant results are thus not surprising. It would be better to cite papers published in renowned journals instead. 8) Probably, most readers of this article will be psychologists. Therefore, it will be good to stick with APA style with respect to presenting statistics. 9) p. 21, l. 493: The authors wrote their study has relatively high statistical power. This is somewhat exaggerated as the power of the sensitivity analysis did not reach .80 and I would refrain from describing power as high as long as it is <.90. 10) In the conclusion, the authors used the word “mediated”. I was somewhat surprised because no mediation analyses are reported. It might be helpful to use another term to avoid confusion. 11) I wondered whether neuroticism may explain the results of the angry condition. Dominance as well as sense of power are positively related to emotional stability whereas submissiveness shows a negative relation. Thus, participants in the low power posing condition might show less emotional stability and thus avoid intense emotional, threatening situations. Other explanations might also be possible for the results. The paper may benefit from a deeper discussion of the main result. Overall, the authors conducted an interesting study. However, I think the theory and discussion parts need intense revision. I wish the authors all the best with their research. Robert Körner ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-21-19478R1Power pose effects on approach and avoidance decisions in response to social threatPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Metzler, thank you for submitting your revised manuscript to PLOS ONE. I have now heard back from the Reviewers and second their view that the manuscript has been significantly improved. After careful consideration, however, we would like to convey the remaining concerns and ask you to carefully address them, especially those by Reviewer 2, in another revision of your submission. Please submit your revised manuscript with point-by-point response to the points raised within six months from this date as beyond that point, any revision has to be considered a new submission. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors took great care in responding to the raised critical points. I really like the present version of the manuscript. The authors now report the different aspects of power-posing research, the problems of replicability and the gap their research fills in much more detail. They are also more transparent with regard to the exploratory aspects of their study and the slight underpowering of their research. Importantly, they also provide more background about the possibly underlying processes which allows readers to compare it to other power-posing research (i.e., perhaps power-posing effects are based on different mechanisms depending on the paradigm). I find it thus very important that the authors outline the differences between their approach-avoidance task and other paradigms. Their action decision is one a more conceptual level (i.e., you have to know that sitting on that chair reduces/increases distance) while a constant body posture is taken, whereas in other’s the arm movement is the DV. As a small point: I think there is no need to expand that much on Rohr et al. 2015 and related articles. :- ) (I think you can delete or shorten to one or two sentences). I really was just curious on how participants processed the expressions. So, it seems that it was attentional unawareness (i.e., like in the inattentional blindness Gorilla movie) for most participants. Reviewer #2: Thank you for inviting me to re-review the manuscript titled, “Power pose effects on approach and avoidance decisions in response to social threat”. I read the response letter and the revised manuscript. Overall, I feel that the authors have addressed my concerns almost completely. However, I still have a few minor points: 1) In response to a large point by Reviewer 1, the authors wrote, “The present study was conducted during the ongoing replication debate (in 2016), and needs to be interpreted in this context.“ This sounds somewhat like, “The study is not methodological up-to-date but it was several years ago and this is why it should be published because it fulfills publishing criteria some years ago”. I think this is problematic because the study needs now – in 2023 – to convince the scientific community. The authors should remove the sentence and refer to limitations in the Discussion. Perhaps it might also help to name the study a “pilot study” or “pilot experiment”. 2) I am not convinced with the authors’ response to my comment 7. If the authors still decide to keep the Elkjaer et al. (2022) meta-analysis in the manuscript they should accompany the reference with the criticism (https://doi.org/10.1177/1745691620984474). Further, it seemed that there is a misunderstanding in reading the commentary: Not the lack of open science practices in empirical power posing studies is criticized but the lack of open science practices in the Elkjaer et al. (2022) meta-analysis is criticized. The authors did not share their data and analysis code (also not on request), which is why we cannot fully trust such a recent paper in this controversial field, in which preregistration and open science practices are very important to regain trust. Moreover, as the Elkjaer et al. (2022) meta-analysis includes not even 50% of the studies analyzed in the more recent meta-analysis (Körner et al., 2022), it seems more than questionable why contracted body positions might have an effect. Thus, I strongly recommend to (1) refer to the meta-analysis only together with the critical commentary because otherwise readers might be misled, and (2) do not claim at any place in the manuscript that other meta-analyses suggest the effect in power posing studies might be driven by the contractive body position group (we still don’t know this but your own study might add to the open question). 3) I am not a native English speaker but I feel that the manuscript needs to be proofread. Signed, Robert Körner ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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