Peer Review History
Original SubmissionOctober 27, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-29662Regional practice variation in induction of labor in the Netherlands: does it matter? A multilevel analysis of the association between induction rates and perinatal and maternal outcomesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Offerhaus, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 04 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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They reported that IOL rates ranged from 14.3% to 41.1% in the Netherlands between 2016 and 2018 in 77 maternity care networks. They observed a lower risk of unplanned cesarean delivery in maternity care networks with low versus moderate IOL rates after controlling for maternal and neonatal cofunding factors and accounting for clustering in maternity care networks through multilevel logistic regression. They observed no difference between IOL rates and poor maternal or perinatal outcomes. Interestingly, interventions during labor (augmentation of labor with oxytocin, use of epidural analgesia, episiotomy) were lower in networks with low IOL rates than in networks with high IOL rates, suggesting a philosophy of maternity care based on a physiologic, noninterventionist approach. The manuscript is original and well written. It covers a very interesting topic on obstetric interventions and their impact on adverse maternal and perinatal outcomes. Finally, the authors pointed out that women's preference may be the key to understanding variations in interventions. They pointed out that patient involvement through shared medical decisions is essential. Nevertheless, there are some limitations. First, all results are presented without confidence intervals, which limits their interpretation. Second, the authors categorized maternity care networks according to their case-mix adjustment ranking in a logistic regression, but they did not explain why they used only two sociodemographic variables (social economic status and ethnicity) in their model. Thus, the categorization of low, moderate, or high IOL rate should be developed and clarified. In the multilevel logistic regression, there was no adjustment for gestational age. The authors considered gestational age not to be a cofactor but an outcome of IOL. However, poor neonatal outcomes are related to gestational age. In addition, the distribution of gestational age varied from the lowest to the highest IOL rates. There were significantly more IOLs performed for prolonged pregnancy (>42SA) in Q1 than in Q2-3 and Q4. Unfortunately, obesity was absent from the Perined database. Obesity may be a factor in IOL failure or adverse maternal outcomes. The authors discussed this limitation in the Discussion section. Here are some minor comments Abstract Page 8 Lines 30-31 The objective is not clearly formulated Page 9 Line 51-52 “Networks with low induction rates had lower unplanned caesarean section rates compared to networks with moderate or high rates”. Sentence should be rephrased as networks with low induction rates were not compared to networks with high rates. Methods Page 13 Line 149 : What did you mean by “birth characteristics were planned” ? Page 14, Line 182- 183 “We analyzed unplanned caesarean sections, the maternal composite outcome and the perinatal composite outcome in separate models. » Why did you choose to analyze the association between IOL categories and unplanned cesarean deliveries and a maternal composite outcome which included cesarean delivery ? Page 15 Line 188 Could you precise « pregnancy complications » ? Is it included small and large for gestational age ? Page 15 Line 190 « NCIU availability » This variable was not described in the « database and variables » section. Could you provide clarification ? Reviewer #2: The work presented here is very interesting and the variations in IOL is an important subject that needs to be better assessed. My comments Introduction : the introduction is quite long. Nevertheless, I don't feel that it reflects well the problematic that is the risk and benefit of IOL. Moreover it does not cite a very important paper on the subject that is the ARRIVE trial which significantly changed the current practice. The introduction should better clarify the research question that is either to confirm that variation exist, which is my opinion is not such an important message and two what are the impact of such variations on maternal and neonatal outcomes which is indeed very interesting. Methods & Results : The reason for induction is not described. This is very important as it might significantly influence both maternal and neonatal outcomes. Similarly we lack information about maternal characteristics such as age or BMI which may influence outcomes. Although the authors controlled for such coufounding factors these should be clearly shown. Table 3 Confidence interval are missing which impairs comparaison Discussion The ARRIVE trial should be discussed ********** 6. 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Regional practice variation in induction of labor in the Netherlands: does it matter? A multilevel analysis of the association between induction rates and perinatal and maternal outcomes PONE-D-22-29662R1 Dear Dr. Offerhaus, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, David Desseauve, MD, MPH, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-22-29662R1 Regional practice variation in induction of labor in the Netherlands: does it matter? A multilevel analysis of the association between induction rates and perinatal and maternal outcomes Dear Dr. Offerhaus: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. David Desseauve Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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