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PONE-D-23-00721Correlating continuously captured home-based digital biomarkers of daily function with postmortem neurodegenerative neuropathologyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hantke, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: After careful consideration by 3 Reviewers and an Academic Editor, all of the critiques of all three Reviewers must be addressed in detail in a revision to determine publication status. If you are prepared to undertake the work required, I would be pleased to reconsider my decision, but revision of the original submission without directly addressing the critiques of the 3 Reviewers does not guarantee acceptance for publication in PLOS ONE. If the authors do not feel that the queries can be addressed, please consider submitting to another publication medium. A revised submission will be sent out for re-review. The authors are urged to have the manuscript given a hard copyedit for syntax and grammar. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 01 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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He has received research support awarded to his institution (Oregon Health & Science University) from the NIH, NSF, the Department of Veterans Affairs, USC Alzheimer’s Therapeutic Research Institute, Merck, AbbVie, Eisai, Green Valley Pharmaceuticals, and Alector. He holds stock in Life Analytics Inc. for which no payments have been made to him or his institution. He has received reimbursement through Medicare or commercial insurance plans for providing clinical assessment and care for patients. He has served on the editorial advisory board and as Associate Editor of the journal, Alzheimer's & Dementia and as Associate Editor for the Journal of Translational Engineering in Health and Medicine. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In this article the authors correlate some digital biomarkers of activity of daily living with disease stage in patients with Alzhimer's disease with postmortem markers of pathology. While small in size and scope, I think the paper has merits. Comments: - there is basically only one meaningful results, that is correlation of composite score with neuritic plaques. It appears the analysis involved a global F-test of significance and the additional Wald's tests for the coefficients. If so it seems to me that figure 2 can be made to include all of the information and table 2 moved to supplementary. Even if it's not significant, I think a boxplot of composite stratified by Braak is also worth showing. - As I mentioned, there is only one meaningful result. Which I find puzzling, since figures 3 and 4 suggest very clear patterns for individual subscores. I believe it possible that other significant results may be recovered with more powerful statistical methods. One thing that can easily be attempted is to exploit the fact that both postmortem markers are ordered variables, which means they can be treated as quantitative variables and save one degree of freedom. Also I believe that the assumption of normality may be faulty here. I guess the authors did test for normality, but normality tests like KS are greatly overrated, as they are conservative with small samples, which is exactly when they are most needed. It is usually more sensible to look at the actual distribution and choose analysis method based on the data generating process. For example, days spent at computer is obviously count data, those are usually Poisson distributed, and the fact that SD is basically equal to the mean reinforces this assumption as that's a characteristic of the Poisson distribution. A quasi-poisson generalized linear model may be a better call for that specific biomarker. Time spent in bed and time spent not at home are time variables, those usually display skewed distributions and are better modeled after a logarithmic transformation. I suggest to refine the analysis to verify if those results really are non-significant. - In any case, figures 3 and 4 do not work very well; the numbers above the columns are redundant, what is needed and is missing is some measure of variation. Please add error bars, or switch to a boxplot for consistency with the composite data. Reviewer #2: This is a novel study describing the relationship between a passive digital biomarker composite and AD pathology on autopsy. The main issues with the paper are the small sample size and missing data within the collected sample. Specifically, only a proportion of the participants had sufficient data to allow the generation of the composite. This is significant as the individual variables did not associate significantly with the AD outcomes. In addition, a significant proportion of the sample died while the study was taking place. This is somewhat surprising given that the participants at baseline had no significant medical comorbidities (inclusion) - it is unclear how this information was recorded and its reliability. A key point made by the paper is that participants did not have dementia at baseline. However, this appears not to have been explored to the extent that is deemed standard in the dementia literature e.g. Clinical Dementia Rating scale. Instead, the authors relied on a MMSE cut-off score for diagnosing dementia which is considered poor practice in the dementia literature. The authors then proceed to report MCI incidence at death but it is unclear how many participants met this criterion at baseline. Perhaps not surprisingly, a significant proportion were diagnosed subsequently either with MCI (39%) or dementia (15%) - it is unclear how and when this information was obtained or the criteria for diagnosing either condition. Presumably, this was done clinically and thus not using a MMSE cut-off only. It is also unclear how long participants had the digital technology in their homes (2008-2018 was mentioned as the study duration). This is an important component as it needs to be taken into account when justifying the decision to only look at the data from a period separated from death by 12 months. How long was the mean duration of recording in the study? What was the gap between the data analysis window and baseline? Also, looking at the range of time between last recording and death, there is a large gap (1 day to 90 months, the median being 1 day). This is a very large variation with likely a number of outliers who had years in between the recording and the pathology assessment. In addition, it is unclear why there was such a variability in terms of availability of digital biomarker data across the cohort. APOE4 status was recorded but not used in the analysis. Please justify. A minor point is that Table 1 is confusing e.g. hippocampal sclerosis (n=19) - does this mean that only 19 were assessed for presence of hippocampal sclerosis? FAQ abbreviation needs to be disambiguated Reviewer #3: Thank you for allowing me to review this interesting paper. Nice methodology with a lot of real world potential and interesting results. Abstract ‘Sensitive to early cognitive change ‘ -- this is too much of a claim as neither the cited references in the introduction nor the manuscript itself is showing this Page 4: High data-capture frequency passive sensors provide digital biomarkers [DBs] of objective change in daily function (13) --- I don’t think reference 13 is backing up this claim. Page 5: provides insight into every day cognitive function and can predict conversion to Mild Cognitive Impairment (MCI) prior to a clinical diagnosis (14-19). --- Several of the references refer to online surveys and not digital biomarkers. Reference 19 is referring to a study to validate DB, but is not yet providing empirical evidence. Page 5 - A prior study of the decline in computer use over time found a significant relationship between decreasing computer use and medial temporal lobe atrophy as determined with volumetric MRI (20) --- Reference 20 is referring to a cross-sectional study, whereas the authors imply that results are longitudinal (decline … over time). Introduction is severely lacking with respect to how and what references are used. Several sentences are not clearly backed up by evidence as references are actually not fitting to the claims. Page 7 -- unclear how the home sensor system is measuring out of home time, given that there are two people living in the home. References are unclear how the system works in such scenarios. The authors should provide more information and clarify how they ensure that they measure time out of home for the participant only. Page 8 -- ‘early markers of change’ -- the authors are not doing a longitudinal study, but purely cross-sectional, hence speaking about ‘change’ is misleading Page 8 -- Figures 3 and 4. Barplots are not acceptable statistical representations of between group differences. Please change these figures to boxplots. Page 8 -- ‘(last MMSE before death) and a functional measure (FAQ at last visit before death)” . following the arguments of the authors about average the full year of DB before death to avoid acute changes before death, here also only patients with MMSE and FAQ measures significantly before death (several month) should be included for a fair comparison Page 9 -- ‘23 volunteers (56%) died while their home was sensored;’ should be removed as the next sentences offer better and cleare explanations. Page 9 -- ‘cessation of computer use due to various difficulties’ - the authors should explain if these where potentially related to mental decline, as this would constitute a bias in their score/analysis (ceiling effect). Methods: generally well explained. Two concerns -- significant levels not explained. Seems the authors imply a 0.05 significance level cut-off. Is the study powered to detect anything there or not? Otherwise I would advise to be careful with the use of ‘significant difference’ and rather compare results in terms of p-value ranks etc. Otherwise I would expect e.g. in the discussion a comparison of the MMSE vs. NP results here (authors state it as ‘not significant’) vs. the ones found in other studies to put things into a general perspective. -- methodology: why do the authors use linear regression, when they want correlations. Here spearman rank correlations could have been a better alternative to also avoid problems with normality assumptions. Page 10: unclear what statistical methodology was used for the stroke analysis. Is it stroke vs. no-stroke? In that case I don’t see how a linear regression would work. Also I am concerned with normality assumption and in such cases use non-parametric testing if necessary. Page 11: “The current study provides the first, preliminary data validating correlations between digital biomarkers (DBs)” -- I don’t agree with the term ‘validating’ . this is an exploratory first analysis. For ‘validation’ I would accept earlier findings to be referred to and a study that is powered to actually validate. Also, the authors are using linear regression, which is not ‘correlation’. The authors should use the correct statistical language here. Page 11: “It is also possible that some DBs have a more complex relationship with functioning than presently captured in the current models.” -- I think instead of ‘with functioning’ the authors mean ‘with changes in the brain’. Their DBs are supposed to be be measures of ‘function’ itself, so there should not be any type of ‘relationship’. The sentence ‘DBs, particularly DB composite metrics, may hold significant promise in detecting incipient behavioral changes in AD, … ‘ → the authors just quote here other papers, but don’t contextualize this with their analysis. The authors should actually use this to contextualize the shortcomings of their study, in the sense that despite them having collecting longitudinal data over several years, they have not provided a longitudinal analysis. They have not shown reproducibility or replicability analysis either. And making claims on 90% sample size decrease are way too early. Also, the authors are not discussing ‘cause and effect’ . Actually with their longitudinal, several years data, they could have provided more data for some suggestion in the direction. Is it lifestyle that could have an influence on brain deterioration, or vice versa? Here there is a tendency of a biased story teeling in there that it is ‘brain deterioration’ → ‘lifestyle changes’ → ‘MMSE changes’. I am not saying this is not possible, but in many diseases lifestyle changes are the last thing that changes as people (and their brains) have coping mechanisms. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Ivan Koychev Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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