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Original SubmissionDecember 23, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-35189Antimicrobial susceptibility of Western Canadian Brachyspira isolates: Development and standardization of an agar dilution susceptibility test methodPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rubin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 01 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript by Rubin et al. describes a well-designed study for a species where standardized methods are lacking. The results are clearly presented, and my major comments are on the data analysis. Line 94: A proper EUCAST reference for this would be the EUCAST Breakpoint Tables (in which breakpoints for Brachyspira spp. are lacking). Line 110: Please explain “BJ agar” when first mentioned. Lines 246-247: Since several MICs were below the lowest concentration of the dilution series, I suggest adding information on the positive control. Was there always haemolysis in the positive control for MICs read as ≤ the lowest value? Also, were MIC endpoints difficult to define according to the established criteria? If so, were MIC endpoints read by more than one technician? Lines 260-263, 435-441 and Table 3: The authors explain that MICs were regarded to be in complete agreement when MICs were identical or within one dilution. In Table 3, there is a column showing how many results that were below the lowest concentration of the dilution series, but I lack a comment on how this affected the calculations of reproducibility. Also, its should me mentioned as a limitation of the study that many MICs were below the lowest concentration, which makes it difficult to assess the reproducibility. Discussion: The authors show good reproducibility of a new standardized methodology for agar dilution of Brachyspira spp., but it is not discussed how/if this method can be implemented in other laboratories. Please add some text on if you consider that this is a method for a reference laboratory or if it is something that can be implemented/used in routine laboratories working with Brachyspira spp. Reviewer #2: Dear authors, I recommend “Major revision” on this article I would like to congratulate you for the great amount of work you performed; but unfortunately the report you gave here is very confusing, too long then I forgot very fast what was the goal of the study. Maybe you should split the paper in at least 2 : 1/ with the new methodology you offer to standardize 2/ the clinical results that you could compare with the use, clinical output, etc.. for the rest of my review, I will focus on the idea that you write a paper for the methodology of susceptibility testing of Brachyspira. 1/ what does standardization mean for you ? is a method standardized if you perform (even with hundreds of repetitions) in only one center ? I guess not Please explore documents for EUCAST or CLSI to determine what your definition of a standardized method is. I especially recommend to study document M23 5th ED 2018 from CLSI which is free. 2/there are plenty of interesting documents for the purpose of your study at CLSI but unfortunately I think you did not pick the right one. M23 is the most important with M11. You cite plenty of documents but not always the right one at the right time. Did you notice that reference 34= reference 19, it is the same document. Line 234 : I am very surprised that CLSI recommend TSA agar plate : I thought it was always a Muller hinton (MH) base ? you cite reference 12, document M100 as reference but to my knowledge M100 is supposed to provide interpretation criteria for bacteria of human clinical importance that grow aerobically… I am lost… By the way, make sure you use up-to-date documents, the M100 you cite is 5 editions late and then totally expired if you do not justify why you use this old document 3/it is very complicated to cultivate Brachyspira, so why do you wish to perform antibiogram sensu lato ? I am not sure I understood the clue of such a complicated method. Is there issues on the pig health side? therapeutic failure? Is it just for research and epidemiological purposes ? Is it an issue for human health? it is not clear to me why such a method should be implemented. It seems silly but it is not. If you define what kind of output for public you are looking for you can decide which kind of breakpoint you want to set. See CLSI document M23 chapiter 5. By reading you, I did not understand which type of breakpoint you want to set here and for which purposes. Again is this antibiogram helping vets to decide how they shall treat the sick pigs ? Is there a justification to split you results at species level. I noticed that most of the other studies you cite is collapsing results at gender level ? 4/figures and tables are sometimes useless and confusing What am I supposed to see on Figure5 ? Table 4 why do I need to know the origin of the strains? is it important for your conclusion ? is it finally clinical results ? 5/ your interpretations / conclusions are sometimes questionable Line652-653: is it finally comparable or not. I am lost Line668-669: I disagree with your “step-wise” hypothesis. It is also conceivable that you are facing a multitude of different mechanism. My best advice: restrict your goal and explain it. Don’t forget to define the term you use (at least for you), your readers would follow your point. As it is it is too complicated to memorize your take home message ( which I haven’t been able to understand) Reviewer #3: The present study ”Antimicrobial susceptibility of Western Canadian Brachyspira isolates: Development and standardization of an agar dilution susceptibility test method” by Kulathunga et al developed a standardized protocol for conducting agar dilution susceptibility testing of Brachyspira spp. and determine the susceptibility of 32 isolates from Western Canadian Brachyspira using the standardized methodology. Following are the specific comment regarding this manuscript. 1. Page 5, Any pericular reason behind selecting the “B. pilosicoli (ATCC 51139), B. hyodysenteriae (JXNI00000000) and B. hampsonii genomovar II (IDAC No 161111-01, ALNZ00000000” for Development of a standard curve over the other ATCC strain mentioned on Page 9 line 193 to 196? 2. As the test is being standardized for antimicrobial susceptibility testing did the author’s used any known resistance strain with known mutations? If No, why? 3. Please provide the data (may be supplementary) on serial dilutions of the bacterial culture’s vs OD at 600nm. 4. Page 6; Line 126-129: “Following incubation, a drop of each culture was examined under a phase-contrast microscope at 400 magnification to confirm the presence of live, motile spirochetes. The optical density (at 600 nm) of cultures was then measured to determine the bacterial concentration” Here the bacterial concentration means CFU per ml? If yes, please mention. 5. Page 6, line 119 – 121: “The relationship between OD600nm, CFU/ml and genome equivalents/ml as measured by qRT PCR was previously determined and found to be consistent” Please provide the reference. 6. Why broth culture was incubated at 39 oC and agar plates are at 42 oC. 7. Page 7, line 133 - In the case of broth, visible turbidity compared to an uninoculated control was considered positive (growth….”. Did the authors examined the absence or absence of bacterial growth under a phase-contrast microscope to confirm the bacterial growth? 8. Why different dilution series were used for Development of a standard curve (1:1.1, 1:1.2, 1:1.3 and 1:2-1:512) and Determination of the minimum inoculum required to start a culture (1:10 dilution series (10-1 to 10-9)? 9. Why two different agar plates (BJ agar and Trypticase soy agar (TSA) + 5% sheep’s blood) were used during the experiments. 10. Page 10 - 11. Porcine clinical isolates identification: Please provide the details on how the phylogenetic tree was constructed (nucleotide substitution mode and bootstrap replicates)? 11. Figure 5: Please include the sequence from B. hyodysenteriae (JXNI00000000), B. hampsonii genomovar II (IDAC No 161111-01, ALNZ00000000) and also available sequence from different species (B. hyodysenteriae, B. hampsonii, B. pilosicoli, B. murdochii, B. innocens,) from Western Canadian region for phylogenetic analysis. 12. How did the authors confirms that the non-clustering (n=13) are from Brachyspira species? 13. Page 11 – 12: “When turbidity was observed, ODs were measured and bacterial density was adjusted to 1-2 X108 CFU/ml….” Please explain why? 14. Page 13: Development of an equation relating organism concentration to an optical density: As each Brachyspira species showed different CFU in liquid media and on agar media. Why the Avg equation were considered to calculate the CFU/mL and not the Brachyspira species specific equation. 15. Fig 2: Why the data were collected up to OD value 1 for B. pilosicoli and B.hampsonii, 16. Fig. 2. Why data were collected for OD values 0.1 to 0.4 for hyodysenteriae. 17. The information on the growth kinetics data on three Brachyspira species will provide the information on growth cycle. Did the authors study the growth kinetic for the three isolates? If yes, please provide the data (may be as supplementary). 18. Did the authors examined the culture microscopically for degree of clumping/aggregation and presence of dead bacteria before taking the OD values? 19. Did the authors confirmed the presence of known antibiotic resistance mutations for the isolates to confirm the resistance to antibiotics? If No, please explain why? 20. Did the authors submit the “nox gene” sequence data generated to GenBank? 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