Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 22, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-33531Intraoperative intravenous low-dose esketamine improves quality of early recovery after laparoscopic radical resection of colorectal cancer: A prospective, randomized controlled trialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ai, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 09 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If the funders had no role, please state: ""The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript."" If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed. Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 3. Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments on PONE-D-22-33531 Thank you for inviting me to revise this manuscript. The authors discussed a clinically relevant topic. The manuscript is generally well written, but I have some comments. Abstract - VAS was mentioned without identification - You mentioned group k and group C in the results without identification to which group they referred to. Please identify the group name in the method part of the abstract e.g.: “were randomized to Esketamine (K group) and non-eskatamine groups (C group)” however; using a self-explaining name for the group is better - No need to mention all the study outcomes in the abstract specially when their results were not mentioned in the results section of the abstract - The conclusion in the abstract should reflect the information mentioned in it, and since you did not mention any results related to adverse events in the results part, you should not mention that the drug “and did not increase postoperative adverse reaction” - Please change colorectal patients to patients with colorectal cancer Introduction - In the first paragraph, you need to explain the operative related complication that could be improved by the study drug. Otherwise, it is better to remove the sentence starting with “However, the establishment…” as the role of the study drug is not to improve or impact those complications. You may consider other complications, such as inadequate pain management and use of opioids, which could be affected by the study drug. - In the second paragraph, mention some of the adverse effect of ketamine in comparison to the esketamine. - In the same paragraph, you should break down the last sentence. Methods - The blinding is not clear, you described the rate in the esketamine group as 0.25mg/kg of esketamine as bolus, and then a rate of 0.12mg/kg/h, and that equal volume of normal saline was infused in the C group. please clarify how is equal volume was calculated - In the secondary outcomes please remove “etc” and enumerate the recorded complications. Sample size Please provide more details regarding the assumed SD for the sample size calculation and the used program, ref 18 is not relevant to your study population Statistical analysis Please change: “A Student t-test” to “the Student t-test” “Datas” to Data (interquartile range) to (quartiles) Add how the normality of data was checked Results In the first paragraph last sentence please edit to “were not significantly different” Discussion P 9 third paragraph: S-ketamine to esketamine Some grammatical mistakes: “leaded” should be “led” Reviewer #2: Title: Intraoperative intravenous low-dose esketamine improves quality of early recovery after laparoscopic radical resection of colorectal cancer: A prospective, randomized controlled trial . Thank you for the chance of reviewing this interesting manuscript. This retrospective study aimed to assess the effects of intraoperative intravenous low-dose esketamine on the quality of early recovery in patients undergoing laparoscopic radical resection of CRC using the QoR-15 scale. The study design has exciting clinical guiding value. Especially for the management of multimodal postoperative analgesia, it has a very strong research significance. However, in order to achieve the purpose of the study, there are significant methodological problems. I have the following comments: 1.The article's writing quality has to be further enhanced because it does not adhere to the magazine's standards for statistical analysis methods, tables, charts, and other elements. 2.To make the text more readable, the authors should modify the language. I suggest the authors hire a qualified native English editor. 3.To ensure that readers fully grasp what the researchers looked at, the technical information should be enlarged and explained. 4.Page 1 Methods, VAS, PACU, etc., Abbreviations should be noted in full English whenever they first appear. 5.Please update the ‘Methods’ section of the abstract to include details of the methods, results. 6.The grouping of methods and results in the abstract is not clearly described. 7.Please update the ‘Introduction’ section of the therefore. 8.Why was the age range for the study's participants set at 18 to 65 years old? I don't think this age structure makes sense; if you can, please cite some references. 9.‘Measures related to the blood specimens in the study protocol were not shown in the manuscript because of improper storage of the blood specimens. ’ ? It appeared out of nowhere. I don't comprehend. 10.Please provide information to the "Sample size calculation" section. 11.Figure 1, Fig 1......, Verify the syntax, unify the names, and review the entire document. 12.Table 1, etc., We preserve how many decimal places? Please consult the literature; all statistical findings must adhere to a single standard. 13.Table 2, 3, 4, It is appropriate for the appropriate position. Thanks Reviewer #3: An interesting clinical trial that left me with a lot of questions: 1. You cite reference 18 as giving the sample size, but it's not clear to me that this trial had the same primary outcome, the same patient population, and the same variability that you had in your study. Can you justify using someone else's sample size computation? And if they already did the same study you did, why did you have to redo it? 2. So many p-values, and no adjustment for multiple testing. Yet you say 0.048 is significant. Without an adjustment for multiple testing, I don't believe your "significance" statements. 3. How do I know your sample size was adequate? It would be helpful to add to the discussion whether the assumptions underlying these computations were actually realized in the trial, but then you don't state the assumptions because they are taken from a different paper. 4. Anytime you use repeated measures ANOVA, you need to give the assumptions of the model, and how you verified those assumptions (e.g., diagnostics). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Maha Mostafa Reviewer #2: Yes: Yongtao Sun Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step.
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PONE-D-22-33531R1Intraoperative intravenous low-dose esketamine improves quality of early recovery after laparoscopic radical resection of colorectal cancer: A prospective, randomized controlled trialPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ai, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 08 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Ahmed Mohamed Ibrahim Hasanin Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments: There are still major problem with the statistics, namely the sample size calculation. The authors changed the source of the data of their sample size calculation to a pilot study instead of a previous study. The authors need to clarify why they changed the source of the data. Do they think that the original calculation was not correct and they performed a post-hoc calculation? [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Abstract - Enumerate the adverse events in the method section of the abstract as you still mentioning it in the results and conclusion of the abstract for example “Other outcome include the incidence of postoperative adverse events (nausea, vomiting, dizziness, hallucination and pruritis)” Introduction - Please change colorectal patients to patients with colorectal cancer Methods - Change muscle relaxation to neuromuscular blockade. The response to reviewer 3 point #2 is not clear Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Many of my statistical comments were either not understood or not responded to adequately. The authors now admit that the paper that they based their sample size on is not relevant to this study, and now redo the sample size analysis from scratch. It seems odd to me that this new analysis gives the sample size used in the study. Typically, a study cannot be remediated when the design is incorrect. Secondly, the authors now conduct a post-hoc analysis using completely DIFFERENT techniques than were specified in the original analysis. The study was never powered for a correlation, it was powered by a difference in means. My comments on statistical significance and multiple testing was not addressed adequately. Distributional assumptions were not verified with diagnostics. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Yongtao Sun Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. 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PONE-D-22-33531R2 Intraoperative intravenous low-dose esketamine improves quality of early recovery after laparoscopic radical resection of colorectal cancer: A prospective, randomized controlled trial PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Ai, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 02 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Ahmed Mohamed Ibrahim Hasanin Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Thank you for your nice revision. There is a very minor statistical comment which needs correction before final acceptance of the manuscript. Well done. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: please state that "Adjustment for multiple testing was done using Bonferroni or LSD" in the statistical analysis section Reviewer #2: Thanks to the authors of the manuscript for their active and effective revisions. The quality of the manuscript has been greatly improved, basically meeting the requirements for publication. After my own careful examination, i feel that the native English needs to be further improved. If the language of the article is improved, I think the article is clinically significant and can be published. Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Intraoperative intravenous low-dose esketamine improves quality of early recovery after laparoscopic radical resection of colorectal cancer: A prospective, randomized controlled trial PONE-D-22-33531R3 Dear Dr. Ai, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Ahmed Mohamed Ibrahim Hasanin Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-22-33531R3 Intraoperative intravenous low-dose esketamine improves quality of early recovery after laparoscopic radical resection of colorectal cancer: A prospective, randomized controlled trial Dear Dr. Ai: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Ahmed Mohamed Ibrahim Hasanin Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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