Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-22847Inter-rater and test-retest reliability of the Swiss easy-read Integrated Palliative Care Outcome Scale for People with DementiaPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Spichiger, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 17 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Dear authors, Thank you very much for the opportunity to review your very precise and well prepared article. It is a very important contribution to this field of assessing the quality of life of people with dementia. I have minor comments: Have you tried to assess whether the evaluation of IPOS-dem somehow differ according to profession of rater? How was the situation when the raters were the same profession? Could you add the information about how long does it take to complete IPOS-dem? This might be important for clinical practice. Your sample was heterogeneous in the severity of dementia, have you thought of the possibility that this also could cause the difference? From my perspective it might be easier to evaluate the quality of life of patients with mild dementia who could be able to communicate, rather then in situation of patients with severe dementia. Try to discuss that in Discussion. Could you elaborate more in Discussion about the items that are not very reliable, such as Loss of interest? Add your interpretation of that. In your article you are bringing important information, in Conclusion I miss the information about future direction in this field explicitly related to IPOS-dem, what is your opinion about this tool. Reviewer #2: The authors examined the "Integrated Palliative Care Outcome Scale for People with Dementia" (IPOS Dem) in Swiss nursing homes for inter-rater reliability and additionally examined test-retest reliability after 1, 2 and 3 months. In 23 nursing homes in Switzerland, 317 staff members applied the IPOS Dem over 4 months to a total of 240 persons with dementia. Neither inter-rater nor test-retest reliability could be proven, adjustments to the IPOS Dem are necessary. The manuscript is well written, follows a concise structure and the tables are easy to understand. As far as I can evaluate this, the English language is sufficient. Nevertheless I would recommend to invite a statistician to review the methods in detail. Please let me note some questions and concerns: 1) Background, The rater population: I think this should be mentioned in the Methods section. 2) Analysis: What program was used for statistical analysis? And which coefficients were defined as moderate, high and so on? Which coefficients were expected to be satisfactory? 3) For the reader, it is not clear, why higher correlations in test-retest analysis were expected. Isn`t it possible, that things have changed in patient care, which are meant to change, so that the test-retest even should be lower to indicate for these changes? 4) The manuscript is very technical, but the reader misses arguments on the clinical meaning of the results. Also little literature is embedded to discuss the results. Reviewer #3: Dear authors, Please find my comments attached as a pdf. Reviewer #4: In general, medical professions have different educational background and medical knowledge, and it is difficult to share the same language. This is especially true in the field of dementia care. The IPOS-Dem used in this study is expected to be used as a standard scale internationally in the future. This study is significant because the IPOS-Dem, which is usually used by physicians and nurses, was modified so that it can be used by nursing staff as well. The results were not sufficiently reliable. This is a well-designed study with a large number of subjects so that this study suggest strong negative evidence. Then, it is expected to be taken to the next step according to these results. However, the following points need to be confirmed I think the authors should describe the process to modify the scale for easy-to-read, what the authors paid attention to, and how the authors did it, using examples. This would be helpful for future researchers. What frontline staff is should be clarified; there is a lot of N/A and “Other” in Occupation, What is this? The biggest concern is that in the statistical analysis, I don't think the Kappa coefficient can be calculated in the standard way since the evaluators are not fixed. It may be difficult to calculate the ICC as well. We need a more detailed presentation of how it was calculated. How was “do not know” handled in the analysis? The abstract only states that there was no ICC>0.7 item and based on that the conclusion is that the reliability was not sufficient. While this is honest, ICC >0.5 or higher seems like a good figure for a single item alone in such an assessment of dementia symptoms. Compared to studies of other rating scales, it could be written a little more positively. What about the reliability of the IPOS-Dem total score? If the reliability of the total score is high, it would be useful as an endpoint as a global measure. The authors stated that "The ICCs for 2 assessments made a month apart varied between .59 and .18 and increased 243 at both 3 assessments (ICC(2,1) = .72-.37) and 4 assessments (ICC(2,1) = .72-.37)." It would be clearer to compare averages of timepoint. One item has a greater impact on the maximum and minimum. In this analysis, it is vomiting, which is infrequent and marginally biased, so the ICC will also be small. In the future, it may be possible to narrow down the number of evaluators. Couldn't the analysis be limited to evaluations by registered nurses? The authors would think it is not in the real situation, but, I think registered nurse evaluate and share it with the staffs if I use it in my country. Why is there no age in Tab 2? Reviewer #5: This study investigated the reliability (inter-rater and test-retest) of an easy-read version the IPOS-Dem tool for staff-assessment of palliative care outcome in people with dementia. The authors conclude that the reliability of the IPOS-Dem is below acceptable levels. The report is clearly presented; the study seems to be methodologically sound and the conclusions plausible. The choice of intraclass correlation coefficient (ICC(2,1)) appears to be appropriate. I am sceptical about the use of a binary ‘nominal score’ to identify patients with ‘no change’ in status between successive assessments. Such cases are then used to calculate test-retest reliability, i.e. the assumption is that these cases should show identical values at each assessment. But since the same rater has to rate the case as ‘change’ or ‘no change’ and simultaneously to rate the current outcome status, the amount of test-retest agreement or disagreement seems to merely reflect the consistency between the change/no-change rating and the current-status rating. A better test-retest measure might be obtained by using and comparing the two baseline values. Additionally, it would be interesting to see whether inter-rater differences could be partly attributed to consistent differences between types of assessors, e.g. between registered nurses, assistants and interns, and to present the reliability measures (inter-rater and test-retest) within these subgroups. Might it be true that higher qualified staff give more reliable assessments? Minor points Line 182: please explain the subscripts r, c and rc in the formula. Presumably these refer to rows and columns, but what do rows and columns represent in this case? Table 3: what is meant by occupation ‘not applicable’ (22%)? Line 242-3: it is unclear what is meant by 'at 3 assessments': means looking at discrepancies between assessment 2 months apart? If so, the tendency for reliability to increase with time apart seems counterintuitive. In Table 6 the ICC values in the 2-month and 3-month columns are identical, with the sole exception of the first row (item ‘Anxious or worried’). Line 261: What is meant by ‘restriction’ in ‘specific sources of variation in the measurements caused by restriction’? Concerning data availability: the authors state precisely when and where the complete data will be made availiable. ********** 6. 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