Peer Review History
Original SubmissionJanuary 28, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-02534Impact of Bisoprolol and Amlodipine on Cardiopulmonary Responses and Symptoms during Exercise in Patients with Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary DiseasePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 01 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Abstract- BG- May help to specify the prevalence of Htn in COPD (reflecting the magnitude of the problem). R- Since leg fatigue is listed, smoking history (PAD) could be additional factor needing to be specified) C- Avoid subjective description like "mildly lower." 2. Main Paper- Excl Criteria- CAD/HF were excluded but no mention of PAD (can occur without diagnosis of CAD) and may have independent impact on leg fatigue. Result/Discussion- Consider adding a metric- Rate pressure product, which has been a reliable indicator of myocardial O2 demand and should be easily calculated from HR BP that you already collected. Consider opining if Sp02 being lower could be a factor of lower HR at peak exercise in BB group? may need to supply that information as well Also, description with regards to COPD regimen and need for Beat adr Rx/ interaction of such Rx with BB etc should be elaborated/discussed. The comment of Amlodipine's association with lower RR and hypothesis of reduction in PA pressure can't be made based on the data presented as this was not prospectively evaluated. You could say, this "might be possible" and either noninvasive (Echo) or invasive (with PA catheter) study could be designed etc. Clincal Impression- Limitation- Data regarding PAD/Claudication was missing and this may have an implication in evaluation of leg fatigue which might be confounded, especially in these type of patients with smoking history. - Baseline COPD therapy should be presented in the baseline characteristics - Should mention that only mild to moderate COPD patients were evaluated in this study (Gold 4-2 patients only), hence might not apply to such severe COPD patients - Also, gender/legal sex information is missing, so difficult to apply to population in general Reviewer #2: The authors present a single center study examining the effects of bisoprolol and amlodipine on cardiopulmonary responses to exercise in COPD patients. One of the limitations of the study is the small size, however it does address a very important clinical question relevant to day-to-day cardiac, pulmonary and medicine practice. The authors have provided good data substantiating the notion that these medications are safe in COPD patients with regards to cardiopulmonary exercise parameters. Another limitation is the exclusion of patients with CAD and CHF, two very important indications for beta blocker therapy in cardiac practice (these cardiac conditions frequently coexist with COPD and the question under investigation becomes very relevant in this setting). However, it would be a good question for investigation in future studies to investigate the effects of beta blockers in COPD patients with known cardiac disease. Larger multi center studies are needed to substantiate the findings of this study. Reviewer #3: Comments to author: Please address these minor issues listed 1. Provide reference to Line 4 in third paragraph under Introduction section "Amlodipine not only controls hypertension but also reduces adverse cardiovascular events". 2. In paragraph 4 under Introduction section, Line 6 has bisoprolol and amlodipine in parenthesis implying both as Beta blockers which is not correct. Please address this. 3. Under Methods section, please elaborate the enrollment process. It is not clear at this stage whether this a retrospective study vs prospective study. Later in the paper you have mentioned this as a retrospective study under the limitations. However, it is unclear at this level. 4. There is no mention of health related quality of life (HRQL) and how it is measured in the methods section. Please elaborate regarding the same. 5. Under results section, when you are reporting acute exacerbations (AE), please explain if this is measured as one time event during the cardiopulmonary exercise testing or is there a certain follow up period that this variable is assessed. 6. Under discussion section, please provide more evidence available for related studies on amlodipine. 7. Under discussion section, paragraph 1, line 8, please correct grammatical errors - "in patients without or without ß-blockers" 8. Page 11: Please recheck this line for any errors "A previous study also showed that β-blockers did not show meaningful differences in muscle strength 19 and exercise capacity" Overall, the sample size of the study is too small, but as you mentioned, i believe it is a good start to look at objective data regarding cardiopulmonary parameters to assess use of these medications in COPD. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Impact of Bisoprolol and Amlodipine on Cardiopulmonary Responses and Symptoms during Exercise in Patients with Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease PONE-D-23-02534R1 Dear Dr. Wu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: I appreciate the authors taking the time to address my comments. Overall, I believe the comments have been adequately addressed by the authors at this point. They have clarified that the study was directed at pure COPD patients only and patients with known CV co-morbidities were excluded. As long as comments from other reviewers have been met, the study appears suitable for publication at this point. Reviewer #3: Authors have made all the changes and addressed all the comments as recommended by reviewers. Overall as stated before the sample size of the study is too small and is one of the major limitations but as authors have stated, it is a good start to look at objective data regarding cardiopulmonary parameters to assess use of these medications in COPD. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Navya Alugubelli ********** |
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PONE-D-23-02534R1 Impact of Bisoprolol and Amlodipine on Cardiopulmonary Responses and Symptoms during Exercise in Patients with Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease Dear Dr. Wu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Kartikeya Rajdev Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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