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Original SubmissionJanuary 28, 2023
Decision Letter - Kartikeya Rajdev, Editor

PONE-D-23-02534Impact of Bisoprolol and Amlodipine on Cardiopulmonary Responses and Symptoms during Exercise in Patients with Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary DiseasePLOS ONE

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #1: 1. Abstract-

BG- May help to specify the prevalence of Htn in COPD (reflecting the magnitude of the problem).

R- Since leg fatigue is listed, smoking history (PAD) could be additional factor needing to be specified)

C- Avoid subjective description like "mildly lower."

2. Main Paper-

Excl Criteria- CAD/HF were excluded but no mention of PAD (can occur without diagnosis of CAD) and may have independent impact on leg fatigue.

Result/Discussion- Consider adding a metric- Rate pressure product, which has been a reliable indicator of myocardial O2 demand and should be easily calculated from HR BP that you already collected.

Consider opining if Sp02 being lower could be a factor of lower HR at peak exercise in BB group? may need to supply that information as well

Also, description with regards to COPD regimen and need for Beat adr Rx/ interaction of such Rx with BB etc should be elaborated/discussed.

The comment of Amlodipine's association with lower RR and hypothesis of reduction in PA pressure can't be made based on the data presented as this was not prospectively evaluated. You could say, this "might be possible" and either noninvasive (Echo) or invasive (with PA catheter) study could be designed etc.

Clincal Impression-

Limitation- Data regarding PAD/Claudication was missing and this may have an implication in evaluation of leg fatigue which might be confounded, especially in these type of patients with smoking history.

- Baseline COPD therapy should be presented in the baseline characteristics

- Should mention that only mild to moderate COPD patients were evaluated in this study (Gold 4-2 patients only), hence might not apply to such severe COPD patients

- Also, gender/legal sex information is missing, so difficult to apply to population in general

Reviewer #2: The authors present a single center study examining the effects of bisoprolol and amlodipine on cardiopulmonary responses to exercise in COPD patients. One of the limitations of the study is the small size, however it does address a very important clinical question relevant to day-to-day cardiac, pulmonary and medicine practice. The authors have provided good data substantiating the notion that these medications are safe in COPD patients with regards to cardiopulmonary exercise parameters. Another limitation is the exclusion of patients with CAD and CHF, two very important indications for beta blocker therapy in cardiac practice (these cardiac conditions frequently coexist with COPD and the question under investigation becomes very relevant in this setting). However, it would be a good question for investigation in future studies to investigate the effects of beta blockers in COPD patients with known cardiac disease.

Larger multi center studies are needed to substantiate the findings of this study.

Reviewer #3: Comments to author: Please address these minor issues listed

1. Provide reference to Line 4 in third paragraph under Introduction section "Amlodipine not only controls hypertension but also reduces adverse cardiovascular events".

2. In paragraph 4 under Introduction section, Line 6 has bisoprolol and amlodipine in parenthesis implying both as Beta blockers which is not correct. Please address this.

3. Under Methods section, please elaborate the enrollment process. It is not clear at this stage whether this a retrospective study vs prospective study. Later in the paper you have mentioned this as a retrospective study under the limitations. However, it is unclear at this level.

4. There is no mention of health related quality of life (HRQL) and how it is measured in the methods section. Please elaborate regarding the same.

5. Under results section, when you are reporting acute exacerbations (AE), please explain if this is measured as one time event during the cardiopulmonary exercise testing or is there a certain follow up period that this variable is assessed.

6. Under discussion section, please provide more evidence available for related studies on amlodipine.

7. Under discussion section, paragraph 1, line 8, please correct grammatical errors - "in patients without or

without ß-blockers"

8. Page 11: Please recheck this line for any errors "A previous study also showed that β-blockers did not

show meaningful differences in muscle strength 19 and exercise capacity"

Overall, the sample size of the study is too small, but as you mentioned, i believe it is a good start to look at objective data regarding cardiopulmonary parameters to assess use of these medications in COPD.

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Impact of Bisoprolol and Amlodipine on Cardiopulmonary Responses and Symptoms during Exercise in Patients with Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease

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Reviewer #1: Partly

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Answer: Thanks to all reviewers. We did our best to conduct the research and write the manuscript.

2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Answer: The co-author, I-Shiang Tzeng is a professional professor of statistics. The statistics was performed appropriately and rigorously

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Answer: We did our best to write the manuscript and have native English speakers edit our English writing.

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Reviewer #1: 1. Abstract-

BG- May help to specify the prevalence of Htn in COPD (reflecting the magnitude of the problem).

R- Since leg fatigue is listed, smoking history (PAD) could be additional factor needing to be specified)

C- Avoid subjective description like "mildly lower."

Answer:

1. BG: We changed the description as “The prevalence of hypertension in COPD patients ranges from 39% to 51%, and β-blockers and amlodipine are commonly used drugs for these patients.” We have also added this description to the Introduction section of the manuscript.

2. Smoking status were not different between patients with or without bisoprolol or amlodipine. We added this description in abstract and main paper. We also provided data in table 1. We are sorry that we did not survey the prevalence of peripheral arterial disease (PAD) in the current study. We described this in Limitation of study.

3. We corrected the description of "mildly lower".

2. Main Paper-

Excl Criteria- CAD/HF were excluded but no mention of PAD (can occur without diagnosis of CAD) and may have independent impact on leg fatigue.

Answer: We are sorry that we did not survey the prevalence of peripheral arterial disease (PAD) in the current study. We added this issue in Limitation of study. We also address some descriptions about this issue in Discussion section.

Result/Discussion- Consider adding a metric- Rate pressure product, which has been a reliable indicator of myocardial O2 demand and should be easily calculated from HR BP that you already collected.

Answer:

Pressure rate product is an indicator to determine the myocardial O2 demand.

The calculation formula is: Rate Pressure Product (RPP) = Heart Rate (HR) * Systolic Blood Pressure (SBP) In the revised manuscript, we provide the RPP at rest and during exercise. However, our data showed no difference in RPP at rest or during exercise in patients taking or not taking bisoprolol, amlodipine.

Consider opining if Sp02 being lower could be a factor of lower HR at peak exercise in BB group? may need to supply that information as well

Also, description with regards to COPD regimen and need for Beat adr Rx/ interaction of such Rx with BB etc should be elaborated/discussed.

Answer: Thank you for your comments.

1. In Table 3, we provide HR during peak exercise. However, HR at peak exercise did not differ between patients with and without bisoprolol. Lower SpO2 during peak exercise did not appear to be associated with HR at peak exercise.

2. We provided the inhaled medications, oral β agonist (procaterol) and theophylline in these patients. There were no differences of inhaled medications, oral procaterol and theophylline in patients with or without β-blockers.

The comment of Amlodipine's association with lower RR and hypothesis of reduction in PA pressure can't be made based on the data presented as this was not prospectively evaluated. You could say, this "might be possible" and either noninvasive (Echo) or invasive (with PA catheter) study could be designed etc.

Answer: Thank you for your comment. We described this issue as “In the current study, patients taking amlodipine had a lower RR during exercise, which might be possible due to a PAP-lowering effect during exercise. However, studies with noninvasive measurements (such as echocardiography) or invasive measurements (such as pulmonary artery catheters) during exercise should be designed to define this hypothesis.”

Clinical Impression-

Limitation- Data regarding PAD/Claudication was missing and this may have an implication in evaluation of leg fatigue which might be confounded, especially in these type of patients with smoking history.

Answer: Thank you for your comments. We added the description in the Limitation Section: “smoking is important factors to contributors to PAD, that often associated with leg pain and limited function. However, we did not investigate the prevalence of PAD in these patients, and the impact of PAD could not be clearly defined. Further prospective studies could be performed to investigate the effects of amlopidine and bisoprolol on PAD and leg pain.”

- Baseline COPD therapy should be presented in the baseline characteristics

Answer: Thank you for your comments. We provided the treatment including inhaled medication, oral procaterol and theophylline.

- Should mention that only mild to moderate COPD patients were evaluated in this study (Gold 4-2 patients only), hence might not apply to such severe COPD patients

Answer: We added the description: most patients were moderate to severe COPD (GOLD stage II or III), this conclusion is therefore more suitable for such patients.

- Also, gender/legal sex information is missing, so difficult to apply to population in general

Answer: We provided the gender information in table 1. There was no significant differences of gender differences between patients with our without amlodipine or bisoprolol. We added this description in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #2: The authors present a single center study examining the effects of bisoprolol and amlodipine on cardiopulmonary responses to exercise in COPD patients. One of the limitations of the study is the small size, however it does address a very important clinical question relevant to day-to-day cardiac, pulmonary and medicine practice. The authors have provided good data substantiating the notion that these medications are safe in COPD patients with regards to cardiopulmonary exercise parameters. Another limitation is the exclusion of patients with CAD and CHF, two very important indications for beta blocker therapy in cardiac practice (these cardiac conditions frequently coexist with COPD and the question under investigation becomes very relevant in this setting). However, it would be a good question for investigation in future studies to investigate the effects of beta blockers in COPD patients with known cardiac disease. Larger multi center studies are needed to substantiate the findings of this study.

Answer: Thank you for these brilliant comments. We did our best to provide good data and manuscript to demonstrate the safety of these drugs in terms of cardiorespiratory exercise parameters in COPD patients.

1. We agreed that this is a single center with small sample size. We descripted this in Limitation of Study. Multicenter studies with larger sample sizes are warranted.

2. In this study, we aimed to explore the effects of amlodipine and β-blockers on cardiopulmonary function at rest and during exercise in patients with COPD. Therefore, we excluded patients with cardiovascular disease, since these diseases themselves also affect cardiorespiratory function. Following this study in which we established the effect of amlodipine and beta-blockers in pure COPD patients, it would be a good subject to investigate in COPD patients with known cardiac disease. We describe this in the Limitation of Study to arouse readers' interest to conduct related research.

Reviewer #3: Comments to author: Please address these minor issues listed

1. Provide reference to Line 4 in third paragraph under Introduction section "Amlodipine not only controls hypertension but also reduces adverse cardiovascular events".

Answer: We provided the reference, Amlodipine and Landmark Trials: A Review. J Cardiol and Cardiovasc Sciences. 2021;5(3):1-8.

2. In paragraph 4 under Introduction section, Line 6 has bisoprolol and amlodipine in parenthesis implying both as Beta blockers which is not correct. Please address this.

Answer: We are sorry for the careless mistake. We have corrected the sentence “we conducted this study to comprehensively assess the effects of ß-blockers (bisoprolol and amlodipine) …” to “we conducted this study to comprehensively assess the effects of ß-blockers (bisoprolol) and amlodipine …”.

3. Under Methods section, please elaborate the enrollment process. It is not clear at this stage whether this a retrospective study vs prospective study. Later in the paper you have mentioned this as a retrospective study under the limitations. However, it is unclear at this level.

Answer: This is a retrospective study. We analyzed patients with COPD who met inclusion and exclusion criteria and underwent CPET. A total of 81 COPD patients who met the inclusion and exclusion criteria and completed CPET. We addressed this in the Methods section.

4. There is no mention of health related quality of life (HRQL) and how it is measured in the methods section. Please elaborate regarding the same.

Answer: We have provided the measurement of HRQL such as COPD assessment test (CAT) and modified medical research council (mMRC) dyspnea scale.

5. Under results section, when you are reporting acute exacerbations (AE), please explain if this is measured as one time event during the cardiopulmonary exercise testing or is there a certain follow up period that this variable is assessed.

Answer: AE of COPD is a sudden worsening of symptoms in patients with COPD. Severe AE is defined as AEs requiring urgent medical attention, such as emergency department visits or hospitalizations. We recorded the number of severe AEs in patients in the year preceding the analysis.

6. Under discussion section, please provide more evidence available for related studies on amlodipine.

Answer: We thank you for your suggestion. The published study about the effects of cardiopulmonary response of amlodipine in patients with COPD are quite limited. We did our best to describe this issue in the revised manuscript. There are limited studies on the effects of amlodipine on cardiorespiratory function in patients with COPD. Saikov et al. al showed that amlodipine has no effect on lung function and SpO2 in COPD patients, which is the same as our study [1]. There are no studies on the effect of amlodipine on the cardiorespiratory response during exercise in patients with COPD. This study is the first study to reveal that amlodipine did not affect exercise capacity, cardiac index, work efficiency, and HRQL in patients with COPD. A study of amlodipine in patients with heart failure also showed that amlodipine did not appear to affect exercise tolerance, symptoms and HRQL in these patients [2].

1. Sajkov D, Wang T, Frith PA, Bune AJ, Alpers JA, McEvoy RD: A comparison of two long-acting vasoselective calcium antagonists in pulmonary hypertension secondary to COPD. Chest 1997, 111(6):1622-1630.

2. Udelson JE, DeAbate CA, Berk M, Neuberg G, Packer M, Vijay NK, Gorwitt J, Smith WB, Kukin ML, LeJemtel T et al: Effects of amlodipine on exercise tolerance, quality of life, and left ventricular function in patients with heart failure from left ventricular systolic dysfunction. American heart journal 2000, 139(3):503-510.

7. Under discussion section, paragraph 1, line 8, please correct grammatical errors - "in patients without or without ß-blockers"

Answer: We are sorry for the careless mistake. We have corrected this mistake.

8. Page 11: Please recheck this line for any errors "A previous study also showed that β-blockers did not show meaningful differences in muscle strength 19 and exercise capacity"

Answer: In this text, we wanted to describe that patients taking bisoprolol had more leg fatigue, but without decline in exercise capacity. We corrected this sentence as “Although, we found more leg fatigue during exercise, exercise capacity was similar in patients with or without bisoprolol. Therefore, patients taking bisoprolol had more leg fatigue, but without decline in exercise capacity.”

The description " A previous study also showed that β-blockers did not show meaningful differences in muscle strength and exercise capacity " is intended to provide prior studies showing that bisoprolol did not appear to reduce muscle strength and exercise capacity.

Overall, the sample size of the study is too small, but as you mentioned, i believe it is a good start to look at objective data regarding cardiopulmonary parameters to assess use of these medications in COPD.

Answer: Thank you for these brilliant comments. We did our best to present good data to demonstrate the safety of these drugs in terms of cardiorespiratory exercise parameters in COPD patients. We agreed that this is a single center with small sample size. We descripted this in Limitation of Study. Multicenter studies with larger sample sizes are warranted.

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Reviewer #3: No

Answer: We respect reviewer's opinion.

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Impact of Bisoprolol and Amlodipine on Cardiopulmonary Responses and Symptoms during Exercise in Patients with Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease

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Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #2: I appreciate the authors taking the time to address my comments. Overall, I believe the comments have been adequately addressed by the authors at this point. They have clarified that the study was directed at pure COPD patients only and patients with known CV co-morbidities were excluded.

As long as comments from other reviewers have been met, the study appears suitable for publication at this point.

Reviewer #3: Authors have made all the changes and addressed all the comments as recommended by reviewers.

Overall as stated before the sample size of the study is too small and is one of the major limitations but as authors have stated, it is a good start to look at objective data regarding cardiopulmonary parameters to assess use of these medications in COPD.

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Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: Yes: Navya Alugubelli

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Kartikeya Rajdev, Editor

PONE-D-23-02534R1

Impact of Bisoprolol and Amlodipine on Cardiopulmonary Responses and Symptoms during Exercise in Patients with Chronic Obstructive Pulmonary Disease

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