Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 1, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-27178Acute stress symptoms 1-2 weeks after stroke predict the subsequent development of post-traumatic stress symptoms: A prospective cohort study.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. McGuire, Thank you for submitting your valuable work. After my own reading, and also based on Reviewer's comments, some concerns need to be clarified and explained. The reviewer's raised essential and relevant comments on the soundness and transparency of the text - which I agree. But, most important, there is a lack of a substantial in-depth debate of the literature. Also, I recommend the authors to carefully read all comments and refine their work both in terms of conciseness and transparency. Please respond all comments AND highlight them in the text. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 01 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments: Please read my comments. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Appreciate the opportunity to evaluate the manuscript. I believe that it deals with a very important and is extremely important for scientific innovation in the area. However, some inconsistencies were presented and I believe they need to be re-evaluated before final approval. Below I list some of my concerns: I believe that the abstract is well structured and contains important information for understanding the text. So I have nothing to add on this topic. In the intro part, some points need to be readjusted. I believe that there was an error in the presentation of the references throughout the text, since they do not follow a citation order, starting in the text with reference four, as presented in the first line of the first paragraph of the introduction. Also, some moments of the text are missing the citation, I suggest that this be reviewed throughout the manuscript. Between the second and third paragraph I missed a link link about stroke. Why study this condition? The inclusion of epidemiological data could help in this justification. Thus, it is important to create a logical line of reasoning during the text. In the third paragraph it starts a new content and in the fourth paragraph it goes back to the content worked in the second. This makes the text confusing. I suggest that authors can readjust, considering the construction of the introduction following the funnel model, starting from the most general subject to the most specific. I felt that the hypothesis of your study was not amply justified in the introduction. Why this particular period? When starting the discussion, the authors resume two studies that analyzed the period of time worked on the manuscript under other conditions. Perhaps this explanation makes more sense in the introduction, to justify choosing this time period for analyzing your data. In the method, I believe that the authors could try to explain more clearly the composition of the time points worked, as well as better explain if the same people were evaluated at the two time points. Remember that the reader needs to fully understand what is being worked on. In the third line of the first paragraph of the methods, I believe there is no need to repeat the information: "diagnostic criteria for ASD require symptoms to have developed within one month of trauma)", since the important thing is that this is well detailed in the introduction. Regarding the second paragraph of the methods, I felt a lack of additional information, such as: what is the recruitment period? How did the data collection take place? who carried out the recruitment? where was the study carried out, where were the tests applied? Still in the second paragraph (2nd line), the authors report: "Stroke Unit of a tertiary hospital which serves a mixed urban and rural catchment area of approximately 1 million people". In what period of time is the service to this public? In addition, the authors report: "Exclusion criteria were (1) too medically unwell as determined by a stroke physician" (line 5). What would be considered "too medically unwell"? It is important that this information is clear, so that any researcher in the world can reproduce the research design. In the third paragraph, the authors start saying: "From study inception date". But it is unclear what the start date was. I believe it is important to provide this information. In addition, I consider it important that the authors report how they arrived at the sample N? Was it for convenience? Was a sample calculation performed? Were possible sample losses considered? There was a lot of sample loss, what strategies were used to minimize friction and increase participant adherence? I am concerned about the analysis q was performed for such a small n, considering the large number of independent variables that were analyzed. Have tests to assess the fit of the data to the model been performed? In the fifth paragraph of the method, the text refers to the final N of 54 participants. However, at the second time point this N decreased. The same is portrayed in the constructed tables (reporting an N of 54 participants). However, if the analysis was carried out at two time points, and at the second time point there were not 54 participants for the final analysis, I believe that the right thing would be to put the information and perform the analyzes on the final participants, who actually participated in the interventions. . I suggest that the authors re-evaluate this and make this information clearer in the text. In the procedure subtopic, I felt a lack of information, such as: how long did the tests take? where were the tests performed? how were participants contacted at different time points? In the second paragraph of the subtopic "Procedures" the authors suggest that the analysis performed was a linear regression. Which is not in accordance with what is presented in the abstract and in the tables presented. I suggest that this be reviewed. In the subtopic "Hypothesis Testing" the authors mention what was worked on in blocks 1, 2 and 3. There is a description of the variables analyzed in block 1, but not in blocks 2 and 3, the authors directly report the results found. I suggest that this be readjusted, in order to make the relationship between the variables worked in each block clear. At some points in the discussion, I believe that the writing is confused about when the authors were talking about the results of the study or other studies in the literature. I believe it is necessary to re-evaluate this throughout the topic. Regarding the references, about 81% of them are outdated. It is suggested that at least 75% of the references used are current, especially in the introduction, to reflect the current panorama of the phenomenon being analyzed. Thus, I suggest that authors can update the references. Reviewer #2: While in general I find it good that the authors have examined risk factors for PTSD development after stroke I feel that there a number of problems with the ms that need to be addressed before it can be decided whether it should be published or not. The attrition rate is substantial in this study. A large number of exclusion criteria takes us to a starting sample of mild to severe cases who are able to communicate in English - only a fourth of the starting population. I believe these limitations should be pointed out more clearly. Then, 54 down to 31 in the final step (57% participation in the follow-up) is a rather big drop-out, and a substantial part of those who abstained from the follow-up may have done so (refusals and no responses) because of the large number of questionnaires they were exposed to. We need a column in table 1 showing the basic characteristics of those who participated in the follow-up so we can compare follow-up participants with the total group. It is not clear to me how NARS can be used reliably in a sample of stroke patients. And the authors do not use it for any prediction either. It can be omitted from the ms. On the other hand it would have been interesting to know more about the patients´social situation. The authors show education level but that does not tell an international readership so much. What is the average education level in a sample with this age and gender composition in Ireland? Another set of potentially really important predictors would have been social variables, such as employment status. In my understanding it is really hard to generalise anything from this study Reviewer #3: The abstract does not point out important information about the method. The loss of participants between the beginning and the end of the experiment was very high, even compromising the statistical analysis. The discussion was not considered sufficient to corroborate the data obtained in the research. ********** 6. 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Acute stress symptoms 1-2 weeks after stroke predict the subsequent development of post-traumatic stress symptoms: A prospective cohort study. PONE-D-22-27178R1 Dear Dr. McGuire, Please remember to provide their data / data availability statement. We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I would like to congratulate the authors for the care with the considerations provided in the opinion. I believe that all suggestions were attended to as much as possible and the limitations were well described at the end of the text. Thus, I consider that the article is fit for publication. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed the comments well. The weaknesses have been pointed out. Despite those, the main point is well taken. I looked for any statement regarding data availability but did not find any. This has to be supplemented, according to the journal´s policy ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Töres Theorell ********** |
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PONE-D-22-27178R1 Acute stress symptoms 1-2 weeks after stroke predict the subsequent development of post-traumatic stress symptoms: A prospective cohort study. Dear Dr. McGuire: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Thiago P. Fernandes Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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