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PONE-D-22-34113Selective ablation of VIP interneurons in the rodent prefrontal cortex results in increased impulsivityPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hatter, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. The two reviewers clearly outline their positive comments and their concerns with your study. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 18 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript by Hatter and Scott characterizes the role of VIP-expressing interneurons in the infralimbic cortex. The authors used a cre-dependent caspase-3 approach to ablate VIP neurons in the IL. Using a three-choice serial reaction time task, the authors found an increase in premature responses in the caspase mice. The authors used both sexes in compliance with SABV. Overall, this discrete study adds to our understanding of the role of VIP interneurons in encoding impulsivity. Major Issues: 1) Was the spread of the caspase restricted to IL? Please, show images of the spread of the virus. Given that the authors injected 400 nl, it’s most likely that the virus spread to PL. 2) The authors should reanalyze the data using the right statistics. Throughout the manuscript, the authors use unpaired t-tests post-ANOVA without correcting for multiple comparisons. 3) The correct way to test for sex differences is to run ANOVA with sex as a covariate. The authors should run 3-way ANOVA (Fig. S1) and 2-way ANOVA (Fig. S2) to correctly compare the effect of biological sex. If there is no main effect of sex or interaction between sex and treatment, only then should the authors claim no sex differences. 4) The number of mice used per sex/treatment is not powered enough to find sex differences. This limitation should be mentioned in the discussion. 5) In line 113, remove the statement “implicating a sex-specific control over novel social interactions” since there’s no statistical significance. 6) In prior work from the lab, Newmyer et al. found reduced locomotion following the activation of IL/PL VIP neurons. Did the authors observe any difference in the total distance traveled? 7) In Fig. S2A, there are 7 female sham and 9 female caspase mice, but in S2B, there seem to be 8 female sham and 10 female caspase mice. Same issue with S2C. Please fix this and report the correct values. 8) In Fig. S2, it looks like female caspase mice consumed more food than sham mice. Did the ablation of VIP neurons alter the body weight of mice? Minor Issues: 1) Line 148 should say Gq-coupled DREADD 2) Line 156: it should be trials and not trails 3) Minor grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. Reviewer #2: Hatter and Scott present a well-written manuscript assessing the behavioral effects of infralimbic cortex VIP ablation on impulsivity-like behavior and other mPFC-related tasks. They use a caspase virus with a transgenic strategy in VIP-IRES-Cre mice and combine male and female mice. VIP caspase-ablated mice showed increased impulsive-like behavior with the 12.5 intertrial interval, as assessed in the three-choice serial reaction time task (3CSRTT), with trends in the same direction at the shorter ITI’s and premature responses. There were no other stark differences between sham and VIP-ablated mice when they were further tested for social interaction with a novel mouse, free exploration in the Phenotyper box, and acute high-fat diet consumption. Importantly, these behaviors were performed during the dark phase. While this is a straight-forward set of studies with the same animals, improving the treatment of sex, increasing specificity of behavioral language, and including more methodological details would improve this manuscript. These experiments collapse the data for male (n=5-6 per group) and female (n=7-9 per group) mice. While there are no significant differences in sex for any of the behaviors, this may be because of a low sample size, especially among the males. These behavioral differences may be driven by the females, as indicated in the Supplementary Table of p-values. If adding more animals is not possible, the authors could indicate the male vs female data points within the Figures. For example, having open vs closed circles, or circles versus triangles, etc. would distinguish the sexes within the same bar graph. Another recommended strategy would be to provide the means and standard errors of the variables in the supplementary tables (plus p-values, as already given) for each sex. This treatment of sex would not only improve the manuscript, but be useful for future studies. I have some issue with anxiety-like behavior being assessed in the PhenoTyper. Traditionally the open field test is performed in larger, uncovered arenas, and the Noldus PhenoTyper is enclosed on all sides and a smaller area space. I would make it clear to readers that this set-up is not a traditional open field, reporting the smaller dimensions. I would also refrain from generalizing anxiety-like behavior since other tasks of anxiety-like behavior, such as an elevated plus maze, or light-dark test, were not performed. Again, I recommend being more specific with word choice. Another area of overgeneralization is regarding the acute high fat diet feeding test. The authors present the experiment as assessing high calorie food intake, hedonic feeding, or eating behavior, but the protocol was a 30-minute test. Research on hedonic feeding may entail more chronic high fat protocols assessing binge-like consumption. Further, general eating behavior was not assessed, so adding more specific language, or discussing as a limitation, would more accurately reflect the results. The Figures have poor resolution. In Figure 1A, one can hardly see the ROI box in the middle panels or see the text “DAPI.” In Figure 2A, the text labels are also illegible. The methods are generally well-explained, but some minor methods details can be added, such as: 1) test order of experiments, 2) 3CSRTT training vs testing timeline, 3) equipment manufacturer for the 3CSRTT, 4) did mice encounter same-sex conspecifics. Minor writing edits: Abstract, The second to last line, “impulsive responding during longer trials” could end with “in the three-choice serial reaction time test.” Line 103, The header, “Ablation of VIP interneurons does not affect interest in novel stimuli” is too general in that only a novel conspecific was tested, and not separate tests of social interaction and novel object recognition task. 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Selective ablation of VIP interneurons in the rodent prefrontal cortex results in increased impulsivity PONE-D-22-34113R1 Dear Dr. Hatter, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Andrey E Ryabinin, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-34113R1 Selective ablation of VIP interneurons in the rodent prefrontal cortex results in increased impulsivity Dear Dr. Hatter: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Andrey E Ryabinin Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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