Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 13, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-19000The role of uncertainty intolerance in self-management, treatment adherence, and psychological outcomes in individuals living with long-term physical health conditions: A systematic reviewPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Forshaw, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 23 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This systematic literature review is well-written and comprehensive and in line with PROSPERO criteria. However, I have suggestions for minor revisions that are required prior to publication. 1) Results: what were the years of the search from inception? 2) The author hypothesized that intolerance of illness uncertainty would be related to self-management and treatment adherence, however few of the studies addressed self-management and the role of IU. This should be taken up in the discussion and more understanding of how IU would affect self-management should be made more explicit and the specific research that is needed given the potential impact of IU on self-management. It is unclear how self-management was defined in the papers and had a very limited focus i.e. adherence to medications in HIV and perhaps physical activity. Consequently, it is misleading in the conclusion as the author states that the review findings show that IU is negatively associated with self-management, yet the papers focused on a very limited view of self-management and this conclusion is not aligned with the studies reviewed and as such given the prominence of self-management in the title and as a focus of the review the author should be more explicit about this lack of evidence in the review; and its shortcomings. Reviewer #2: Gibson and colleagues in the present manuscript entitled ‘The role of uncertainty intolerance in self-management, treatment adherence, and psychological outcomes in individuals living with long-term physical health conditions: A systematic review’ aimed to explore the relationship between intolerance of uncertainty and health-related outcomes, including physical symptoms, psychological ramifications (e.g., anxiety, depression, quality of life), self-management, and treatment adherence in individuals with long-term physical conditions (LTPHCs). The results of this systematic review showed that IU may present a psychological construct that is potentially able to change, despite being conceptualized as a trait characteristic, that influences patients’ response to LTPHCs. The main strength of this paper is that it addresses an interesting and timely question, investigating the relationship of IU with psychological outcomes in individuals with LTPHCs. In general, I think the idea of this review is really interesting and the authors’ fascinating observations on this timely topic may be of interest to the readers of Plos One. However, some comments, as well as some crucial evidence that should be included to support the authors’ argumentation, need to be addressed to improve the quality of the article, its adequacy, and its readability prior to the publication in the present form. My overall judgment is to publish this article after the authors have carefully considered my suggestions below, in particular reshaping the parts of the Introduction and Discussion sections. Please consider the following comments: · I suggest changing the title. In my opinion, in the present form it seems to be too wordy and not enough clear and specific. · Abstract: In my opinion, a lack of explanation of what the term ‘intolerance of uncertainty’ refers to and how this is related to mental and physical health makes the reader unable to grasp the key aspects of this review only by consulting this section. Please, consider on expanding this point. · Introduction: The ‘Introduction’ section is well-written and nicely presented, with a good balance of descriptive text and information about the characteristics and relationship between intolerance of uncertainty (IU) and long-term physical health conditions. Nevertheless, I believe that more information about possible associations between IU and development/maintaining of mental health disorders, although just as a comorbidity, may provide a more accurate and scientific background to the topic: specifically, I would recommend focusing on discussing how altered levels of intolerance of uncertainty can lead to the overestimation of the possibility that a negative event will occur and to inability to cope, which results in maladaptive cognitive, emotional, and behavioural responses, therefore enhancing the possibility to reiterate maladaptive responses such as avoidance that influence the development and maintenance of mental disorders (https://doi.org/10.3389/fnbeh.2022.946263; https://doi.org/10.3389/fpsyg.2021.737188; https://doi.org/10.3389/fnbeh.2022.998714; https://doi.org/10.3389/fpsyg.2021.737188https://doi.org/10.1016/j.tins.2022.04.003; https://doi.org/10.1111/psyp.14122). · In my opinion, the ‘Conclusions’ paragraph would benefit from some thoughtful as well as in-depth considerations by the authors, because as it stands, it is very descriptive but not enough theoretical as a discussion should be. Authors should make an effort, trying to explain the theoretical implication as well as the translational application of their study. · In according to the previous comment, I would ask the authors to better define a proper ‘Limitations and future directions’ section before the end of the manuscript, in which authors can describe in detail and report all the technical issues that may be brought to the surface. · Figures: Please, provide higher-quality image of the PRISMA flowchart of study selection, because, as it stands, the readers may have difficulty comprehending it. Overall, I believe that this manuscript might carry important value providing evidence for the presence of a psychological construct that is potentially able to change in IU, despite being conceptualized as a trait characteristic, that influences patients’ response to LTPHCs. I hope that, after these careful revisions, the manuscript can meet the Journal’s high standards for publication. I am available for a new round of revision of this paper. I declare no conflict of interest regarding this manuscript. Best regards, Reviewer ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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The role of uncertainty intolerance in adjusting to long-term physical health conditions: A systematic review PONE-D-22-19000R1 Dear Dr. Forshaw, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The article is clearly written and the author has made the appropriate revisions. The revision to the title is clear and the limitations section and discussion are clear and further elaborated such that the contribution of the review to the existing empirical literature is clear. Reviewer #2: The authors did an excellent job clarifying all the questions I have raised in my previous round of review. Currently, this paper is a well-written, timely piece of research that improves the understanding of the relationship between intolerance of uncertainty and health-related outcomes, including physical symptoms, psychological ramifications (e.g., anxiety, depression, quality of life), self-management, and treatment adherence in individuals with long-term physical conditions (LTPHCs). Overall, this is a timely and needed work. It is well-researched and nicely written. I believe that this paper does not need a further revision, therefore the manuscript meets the Journal’s high standards for publication. I am always available for other reviews of such interesting and important articles. Thank You for your work, Reviewer ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Simone Battaglia ********** |
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PONE-D-22-19000R1 The role of uncertainty intolerance in adjusting to long-term physical health conditions: A systematic review Dear Dr. Forshaw: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof. Gian Mauro Manzoni Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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