Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-33714Characteristics and predictors of out-of-hospital cardiac arrest in young adults hospitalized with acute coronary syndrome: A retrospective cohort study of 30,000 patients in the Gulf region.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Alqarawi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 04 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Characteristics and predictors of out-of-hospital cardiac arrest in young adults hospitalized with acute coronary syndrome: A retrospective cohort study of 30,000 patients in the Gulf region. The authors aim to describe the characteristics and predictors of OHCA in young adults (aged below 50 years) hospitalized with ACS. This is a retrospective cohort study using data from 7 prospective ACS registries in the Gulf region. The main findings are: - The prevalence of OHCA in an ACS population in the Gulf region is lower as compared to previous literature. - Young OHCA patients with ACS are more likely to be male and have STEMI with low prevalence of traditional cardiovascular risk factors, compared to older adults with OHCA. - OHCA is the sentinel event of CAD (i.e., the presenting symptom) in the majority of young adults (29/41 (70.73%)). Their study is unique because it examines young adults separately. However, there are some remarks to be made on this manuscript. Major remarks - It is stated that “causes of OHCA/SCD are distinctly different in those younger than 50 where CAD is not the most common cause.[18]” This is true for patients below 40 years of age, but above 40 also CAD and associated acute coronary syndrome is the main cause of OHCA (Empana et al, JACC, 2022). Please provide data on patients <40 years. - The third main finding as listed above (OHCA is the sentinel event of CAD in the majority of young adults) is based on a sample size of 41 patients, see page 10 Table 1. Since this is described as one of the main results of the paper, please elaborate further on this small sample size. It is striking that for the other variables in Table 1 page 10 (subset ‘presentation data’) there is an almost complete sample size of 188 OHCA patients. - Please include this in the future recommendations as well. - In the statistical analysis section (page 6 line 106) it is described that all variables are reported as means with standard deviations. Are the variables tested for normal distribution? If yes, please mention in the results that all variables are distributed normally. If not, the reviewer would recommend to do a visual inspection of the variable distribution, and present variable as median with interquartile range when widely deviating from normal. Minor remarks - To facilitate reading and to better understand the abstract, the reviewer recommends to rewrite the first sentence of the conclusion of the abstract. ‘We observed a lower prevalence of OHCA in our region as compared to previous literature’ (page 4, line 57) insinuates a lower overall OHCA prevalence, while this prevalence is calculated in a population of ACS patients. - Besides, please clarify that a lower prevalence of OHCA in the Gulf region is found as compared to previous literature from other regions (e.g., USA [3, 22], Denmark[21]). One might misinterpret that the prevalence of OHCA in the Gulf region has decreased over the years since the previous estimation of OHCA prevalence in the same region. - The authors state that one-year follow-up data was available for 3 out of the 7 registries (page 6, Line 91). However, according to S1Table the number of registries with a 1-year follow-up comes to a total of 4 out of the 7 registries. Please clarify this. - Please add the absolute number of OHCA cases in all registries in Table 4 (page 23, second column). - In the reviewer’s opinion, it is not surprising that STEMI is found to be a predictor for OHCA in an ACS registry. The authors state in the discussion (page 21, line 212) that this finding is helpful in the risk-stratification in young adults with ACS for OHCA. Please explain the clinical relevance of this finding. - Please remove the redundant number “9” in Table 4, page 27, seventh column (column Predictors of OHCA, row Fordyce et al.,[2] 2016). - The percentage of primary PCI is extremely low (20-30%), given the fact that the majority of OHCA’s was based on STEMI. Please comment. Reviewer #2: The current manuscript summarizes findings of an observational study pooling data from 7 prospective registries for acute coronary syndrome in the Gulf region. The primary goal was to investigate outcomes of patients suffering out-of-hospital cardiac arrest. Since a large proportion of patients admitted with OHCA is below the age of 50 years, the authors to specifically target this patient group and compare against older patients admitted after OHCA. The recruitment period of the individual registries was from 2005 to 2017 and only 3 of 7 had follow up data up to 1 year available. Overall, 31,620 ACS patients were included in this analysis, of whom 34.3% were considered young (below 50 years of age). 611 (1.93%) of cases presented after OHCA in the entire cohort. Overall, 56.6% of OHCA patients survived and were discharged from the hospitals. The prevalence of OHCA was similar between young and old patients. Young adults were predominantly males presenting with first-time STEMI (96.8%). Younger patients with OHCA had lower prevalence of comorbidities. Younger adults received more often primary PCI and had lower mortality compared to older adults with OHCA. The manuscript is well written and the topic remains timely and interesting as there is chronic lack of data in this field. The authors report on a specific subgroup of patients, which is noteworthy and strength of the manuscript. Nevertheless, the study remains highly descriptive and the findings (younger OHCA patients presenting with STEMI as the first-time manifestation of CAD) are not necessarily novel. As such, the authors should try to provide greater level of granularity with respect to out-of-hospital, procedural and post-procedural determinants of poor outcome. It is understood that only 3 out of 7 registries provided follow-up data; nevertheless, the authors could make an attempt to derive predictors of mortality in these prespecified subgroups. Impact of therapeutic strategies may be of interest in this regard. Moreover, nothing is reported on overall outcome of these patients, i.e. neurological outcome, heart failure etc. Given the fact that almost 50% of OHCA patients survived, sufficient data should be available to investigate these important questions. Major points: Methods, page 6, variables, the reviewer is missing important known determinants of outcome among OHCA arrest patients such as witnessed arrest, arrest during daytime or nighttime, bystander resuscitation etc. What was the first documented rhythm in these patients? What was the first pH, lactate etc in these patients. Greater level of granularity is required. Results, page 7, the overall survival rate of 56.6% is extremely high for OHCA patients. This point needs to be discussed with greater focus on potential selection bias (i.e. very young patients, mostly STEMI patients) Supplemental file, the individual registries only included a relatively low proportion of ACS patients, i.e. between 3.9 to 25.8%. Against the notion of the authors that patients were recruited from ACS registries, what was the reason for enrolment in these registries? This also explains the low number of OHCA patients (1.93%), which resembles a dual selection bias, one arising from the registry itself and the second is the survival bias (patients dying of SCD will never present to the emergency department). This point needs to be addressed. Predictors of OHCA, the authors should try to discuss the smokers’ paradox in a more balanced way. Significant literature is available on this topic and very likely, this paradox does not even exist and is a perfect example of selection bias in these kind of analysis. The authors should consider time-dependent analysis given the long recruitment phase from 2005-2017 The authors fail to discuss most contemporary literature on OHCA patients presenting with ACS. A number of major landmark studies were published (i.e. Tomahawk and others) that are not even mentioned. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Niels van Royen Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-22-33714R1Characteristics and predictors of out-of-hospital cardiac arrest in young adults hospitalized with acute coronary syndrome: A retrospective cohort study of 30,000 patients in the Gulf region.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Alqarawi, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 09 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Shukri AlSaif Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors are thanked for their consideration, revisions and additional analyses. To the reviewer’s opinion, the adjustments that are made benefit the manuscript. The manuscript is suitable for publication, but the reviewer recommends to consider the request addressed below. Although the conclusion that OHCA is a sentinel event of CAD appears reasonable from a clinical perspective, the reviewer remains hesitant about the data on which this conclusion is drawn. Is it possible that the missing data introduce a bias for this variable? The authors are asked to provide an explanation for the missing data. Specifically, the authors are asked why this variable is only available for 41 out of the 188 OHCA patients, and how this may impact the obtained results. Furthermore, the authors are requested to include this in the limitations section and to attenuate the concluding statement of this finding. Reviewer #2: the authors have appropriately addressed most of my concerns. I would only like to see a direct comparison of the time-dependent analysis based on the two time-periods with regards to mortality in one single table. This reviewer believes that outcomes are substantially dependent on treatment modalities and these differ quite substantially among time-periods chosen (20.7% vs. 16.5%). ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Niels van Royen Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. 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Characteristics and predictors of out-of-hospital cardiac arrest in young adults hospitalized with acute coronary syndrome: A retrospective cohort study of 30,000 patients in the Gulf region. PONE-D-22-33714R2 Dear Dr. Alqarawi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Shukri AlSaif Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-22-33714R2 Characteristics and predictors of out-of-hospital cardiac arrest in young adults hospitalized with acute coronary syndrome: A retrospective cohort study of 30,000 patients in the Gulf region. Dear Dr. Alqarawi: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Shukri AlSaif Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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