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PONE-D-22-19976Antecedents of responsible acquisition of computers behaviour: Integrating theory of planned behaviour with value belief norm theory and habit variablePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yuen Yee Yen Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 31 Oct 2022. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This study focuses on discovering the antecedents of Responsible Acquisition of Computer Behaviour (RACB) which is a form of RCB. The study used TPB, VBN and habits variable to explain RACB. I have the following comments: • More updated literature is required in 2.3 Perceived Behavioural Control and 2.5 Values and New Ecological Paradigm 2.6 Awareness of Consequences and 2.9 Habits. Please read the following papers: o Wut, T. M., & Ng, P. M. L. (2022). Perceived CSR motives, perceived CSR authenticity, and pro-environmental behavior intention: an internal stakeholder perspective. Social Responsibility Journal, (ahead-of-print). o Ng, P. M. L., & Cheung, C. T. Y. (2022). Why do young people do things for the environment? The effect of perceived values on pro-environmental behaviour. Young Consumers, (ahead-of-print). o Yuriev, A., Dahmen, M., Paillé, P., Boiral, O., & Guillaumie, L. (2020). Pro-environmental behaviors through the lens of the theory of planned behavior: A scoping review. Resources, Conservation and Recycling, 155, 104660. • Is habit a theory? You mentioned in the abstract that “This research aimed to investigate the antecedents of responsible acquisition of computers behaviour (RACB) among Malaysian consumers by using an integrated model of the three theories”. Please revise accordingly. • The following hypotheses are missing but the arrows have been shown in Figure 1: o Attitude � Responsible acquisition of green computers behavioural intention o SN � Responsible acquisition of green computers behavioural intention o PBC � Responsible acquisition of green computers behavioural intention • Why 5-Likert scale is adopted? Any empirical support? • Appropriate pre-test and pilot study • Figure 1 and Figure 2 are difficult to follow. Please make a similar approach (especially H11, habit) • For the implications, please divide them into (1) theoretical and (2) practical implications. • Literature support in implications is insufficient. Please add more updated literature accordingly. Reviewer #2: I appreciate that the authors have: 1. Chosen a hot topic that deserves timely research, discussion, and follow-up in line with the government’s initiatives and UN’s SDGs; 2. Demonstrated sufficient analysis and discussion of previous studies in the literature review; 3. Displayed innovation by integrating relevant theories to construct the conceptual framework; 4. Employed a large sample size (1,000) with data collected from 14 states in Malaysia, thereby enhancing power and representativeness; 5. Conducted thorough statistical analyses and explained results in detail; & 6. Displayed complex relationships among factors clearly in figures, which facilitated visualisation of the overall picture. All in all, the study is of adequate standard for publication after minor revision. Please refer to following suggestions and questions for consideration. Please consider: 1. Hiring a professional proof-reader (native speaker) to further enhance the readability of the article, e.g., a. Abstract: “The research question is how to encourage such behaviour” b. Intro: “Their studies revealed that incorporating moral/personal norms into rational model (i.e. TPB) DO account” c. Intro: “Moreover, most of the prior RCB combined TPB and VBN studies AT research mainly focused” d. 2.6: “This study posits that the Malaysian consumer’s environmental concern will determineS” e. “low-cost pro-environmental behaviour, its effect on high-cost behaviour remains unknown.” -> Add “pro-environmental” after “high-cost” f. 6. “and make them AWARE SUCH behaviour is congruent with Biospheric values.” g. Please note that the above list is by no means exhaustive, please check for other typos/ errors 2. Intro and 2.1: “e.g. Ates (2020) – pro-environmental behaviour; Li et al. (2021) – purchase of organic food; Bamberg and Moser (2007) – pro-environmental behaviour; and Wall et al. (2007)’s studies – travel mode choices.” -> Please elaborate a bit more instead of just stating the keywords e.g., “pro-environmental behaviour” 3. 2.1 – 2.4: “Therefore, this study does not need hypothesis testing on the relationship” and other parts with similar meaning e.g., “The relationship between SN and behavioural intention will not need to be tested in the current study as their relationship presented in the TPB model has already been validated across various contexts.”; “The aforementioned relationships as shown in the TPB model have empirical support, thus this study will not test their relationships.”; & “This study does not test the causal relationship between intention and actual behaviour since such relationships have been validated across different context.” -> Despite the fact that previous studies have demonstrated positive findings, it may be advisable to test the hypotheses yourself once again. 4. 2.7: “…and the causal relationships between AC beliefs and AR beliefs were not empirically tested. Hence, the following hypotheses are tested in this study” -> Can causality claims be made? https://ftp.cs.ucla.edu/pub/stat_ser/r393-reprint.pdf 5. Were the questionnaire items in English? Did the respondents fully understand the questions? 6. Were only some of the items selected from the original questionnaires? Any implications on validity and reliability? 7. Please also include validity and reliability scores of the original questionnaires. 8. “As this study focused only on the main effects of the TPB and VBN variables, future studies could include demographic variables such as age, gender or income, which can be useful in providing meaningful information.” -> Please clarify why such basic demographics were not collected. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Peggy Ng Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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PONE-D-22-19976R1Antecedents of the responsible acquisition of computers behaviour: Integrating the theory of planned behaviour with the value-belief-norm theory and the habits variablePLOS ONE Dear Yuen Yee Yen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by 30 Apr 2023. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Tai Ming Wut Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: About model and originality of the paper: The authors select “RACB” as research subject on the topic of green computer purchase behavior in Malaysia. However, the authors don’t explain why these customers should be considered individually and don’t introduce any new indicators in this research filed. Also, the research model in the study is so complicated which not suitable for the SEM model. it may be necessary for the author to simplify the model or to consider using a different type of statistical analysis. Literature review: The literature part is superficial and shallow even in the revised version. For example, the paper does not provide much detail or depth on the topic that what the weaknesses associated with the use of a single theory by the other authors one by one and the contributions to integrate TPB variables with VBN variables to explain RCB. Moreover, some updated and related literature about TPB & responsible (purchase) behavior were not mentioned/cited yet. I suggest the author(s) to consider reading and citing the following impactful, and updated literature; sure the authors can cite other similar papers not limit to listed ones. • Gao, L., Bai, X. (2014). A unified perspective on the factors influencing consumer acceptance of internet of things technology. Asia Pacific Journal of Marketing and Logistics, 26(2), 211-231. • Liu, M., Liu, Y., Mo, Z. (2020). Moral norm Is the key: An extension of the theory of planned behaviour (TPB) on Chinese consumers’ green purchase intentions, Asia Pacific Journal of Marketing and Logistics, 32(8), 1823-1841. • Kumagai, K. (2021). Sustainable plastic clothing and brand luxury: a discussion of contradictory consumer behaviour, Asia Pacific Journal of Marketing and Logistics, 33(4), 994-1013 • Liu, M., Liu, Y., Mo, Z., Zhao, Z., Zhu, Z. (2020). How CSR influences customer behavioural loyalty in the Chinese hotel industry, Asia Pacific Journal of Marketing and Logistics, 32(1), 1-22. • Wang, Y., Ko, E., & Wang, H. (2022). Augmented reality (AR) app use in the beauty product industry and consumer purchase intention. Asia Pacific Journal of Marketing and Logistics, 34(1), 110-131. • Mo. Z., Liu M., Liu, Y. (2018). Effects of functional green advertising on self and others, Psychology & Marketing. 35(5), 368-382. Methodology and result presentation: The process of data analysis in this paper is too simple and rough. The author needs to present each step of data analysis in the concise way. Also, the title of table 4 need to be revised. The author didn’t presents the direct and indirect effects clearly. Please enhance the mentioned parts. The integration of the TPB and VBN models cannot be seen as the theoretical contribution. Without having enough implications/contributions associating with your core concepts (TPB or VBN), the value of the work will be much weakened. Please enhance your implications/contributions parts in resubmission. There is a lot of inappropriate/non-typical English/nonsense expressions, the language is not academic-oriented enough. Some tables in the paper should be formatted consistently with three-line format. Before re-submission, I strongly suggest the author need to send the draft to proofreader/copy-editor for improvement. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Antecedents of the responsible acquisition of computers behaviour: Integrating the theory of planned behaviour with the value-belief-norm theory and the habits variable PONE-D-22-19976R2 Dear Yuen Yee Yen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tai Ming Wut Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #4: Very clear results and discussions. The contributions are clear. I recommend that this paper be accepted for publication in the journal. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-19976R2 Antecedents of the responsible acquisition of computers behaviour: Integrating the theory of planned behaviour with the value-belief-norm theory and the habits variable Dear Dr. Yee Yen: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Tai Ming Wut Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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