Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 16, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-04652A novel kinetic energy harvesting system for long-term deployments of wildlife trackersPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Havmøller, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 05 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: - This study is interesting where it investigates the use of a small, lightweight kinetic energy harvesting unit as a power source for a custom wildlife tracking device to achieve lifetime animal tracking. The authors integrated a Kinetron MSG32 microgenerator and a lithium-ion capacitor (LIC) into a custom GPS-enabled tracking device capable of transmitting data via the Sigfox 'Internet of Things' network. The prototypes were tested on four domestic dogs, one wild-roaming Exmoor pony, and one wisent. The results showed that enough energy was generated from walking to transmit Sigfox messages with 2 bytes of data per day. The authors conclude that this technology can be a meaningful advancement in ecological research requiring long-term tracking of animals. The design of the Kinefox is provided open source. - For the supporting figure of the map, I think it would be valuable if included in the main manuscript. Reviewer #2: In this paper, the authors validate the use of a kinetic energy harvester as a power source for a wildlife tracker. The tracker is equipped with some sensors and a GPS and sends the data via Sigfox. In this work, it is tested on domestic dogs, a pony, and a wisent. Overall, I find the paper original and I read it with interest. An aspect that should be adjusted is the structure of the paper and the proper allocation of the information in the chapters. A detailed description of the tests, equipment a methodology used, is, for example, missing in the method, a thing that makes the reading complicated. Introduction, abstract, and discussion should be harmonized. Arguments that explain the unicity of the solution and the reasons why the proposed technology outperforms the existing ones should be addressed more clearly. Finally, some imprecisions and not clear aspects are present in the results. Below you can find a detailed list of comments. 1. In the introduction, the authors analyze the advantages and disadvantages of alternative energy harvesters to support the choice of the kinetic harvester. They address the robustness issues of solar cells, with which I could agree, however, the robustness of the kinetic harvester is not addressed. Has the Kinetic harvester robustness issues, especially considering that it has mechanically moving parts and that must work outdoors with any temperature and weather? 2. Rows 85-88. Here the authors state that another problem of the solar cell is the reduction of efficiency over time, which makes them not suitable for several years of deployment. This statement is however later contradicted in raw 120-122. I suggest harmonizing the content. Also, I suggest that if performance over years is taken as a drawback for a specific technology, data on this aspect should be offered for the technology suggested in this paper. Is there available information on the aging of the MSG32? 3. Raw 160- 165. How does the max number of charge/discharge cycles of the supercap contribute to the presented device's lifetime? 4. In raw 113-119 the system components are only mentioned, without giving the components' names. Additionally, this part looks out of context in this part. I would suggest moving the text to the chapter “electronics”. 5. In the text, the targeted operation time should be stated clearly and without contradiction. Is the goal a lifetime tracking of the device (raw 36 and 104) or decades (raw 171)? 6. The authors should describe more clearly the differences between prototype V1 and V2 in the chapter electronics. In this chapter, it is clear the additional components in V2 with respect to V1. However, it is not clear which components are integrated into V1. The reader must get to the chapter embedded software before understanding that in v1 only the voltage of the LIC is sent. 7. The authors should integrate a scale in figure 3 so that the reader better understands how compact the device is. 8. The chapter case-study appears to be sound, however, the structure is unclear, making it difficult to follow. I advise the authors to rewrite this part to improve the readability of the text. A table listing the experiments, the prototype used, the period and the animal is helpful to improve the readability 9. The explanation of AVC, ANS, and AGP belongs to the methods, not in the description of table 1. The measurements tests and the parameters measured could be placed in “case-studies”. Additionally, it should be explained how the slope of figure 4 is the voltage change per day if the x-axes of figure 4 are not days but the number of transmissions. The variable AnimalAV is used in table 1 description for the first time without further explanation. To me, it is not clear the definition of this parameter as well as the formula for ANS. About the calculation of AGP, an explanation must be added. Are the authors able to know how many Sigfox messages are generated per day, or only the received messages are counted? Given that some messages get lost, by using the received messages, the energy consumption would be underestimated. 10. Raw 315-317. Could you please give here more details? Does the Kinefox still operate even if in sleep mode? 11. The measurement of energy consumption is shown and explained in the chapter “power consumption”. However, it is already used in the previous chapter (formulas in Tables 1 and 2). I suggest that the chapter “power consumption” is placed before the first use of measured values. 12. Part 328-334. Could the authors define what information was sent in the 2Bytes message, as they did for the 12-bytes message? Useful for the reader would be here to have a schematic representation of the payload. 13. For the power consumption experiments, the tests (instrumentations, protocol, etc.) must be described in the chapter Method. 14. In the discussion, it is addressed the difference between the collar materials used in prototype V1 and V2. This aspect must be addressed more clearly in the methods. As said in point 6 of this list a better explanation of the two prototypes is necessary for better comprehension. 15. Part 365- 383. The authors should explain in a more scientific way how and when the MSG32 outperforms batteries. The authors for example assert the necessity of their solution if 20J are used per day. Can the Authors explain, why exactly this value (which by the way was also not achieved in their work)? The Authors should make an energy comparison considering the features and energy consumption of devices on the market or from the literature. 16. The assertion in 381-383 is not supported by literature 17. The references should be checked. For some articles, the list of authors is not complete. 18. The text contains spelling errors (for example raw 73, 240, 241) Reviewer #3: The idea is new and there is an innovation in it. The structure is good. The study method provides the purpose of the study. The conclusion section is good. 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