Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 24, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-02143HIV infection and cardiovascular disease have both shared and distinct monocyte gene expression features: Women's Interagency HIV StudyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kaplan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands yet. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process in point-to point fashion. Given that these points are adequately addressed, this paper will likely achieve the priority necessary for publication. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 20 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Major: • Current analyses in the manuscript focus on peripheral transcriptomes, but their contribution to atherosclerosis remain unclear. It would be helpful to correlate the found signatures to publicly available transcriptomes of stable and unstable carotid plaques. Are the found signatures associating more or less with either one of the plaque phenotypes? • Down this same track: Are the infected peripheral monocyte closer to monocytes in the plaque. The authors may use available monocyte transcriptomes from available scRNAseq studies. • DE genes used as input for the pathway analysis are not evident from text or figures. These should be shown. Authors should label the corresponding genes in the volcano plots and explicitly state which genes were included in the pathway analysis, best as supplementary data file. • E.g. Line 271 on page 7: "The role of these genes in IM was further investigated by ingenuity pathway analysis (IPA)..." and Line 277 page 7: "IPA was conducted to 59 DEGs associated with the H+C+LLT- group to characterize the gene transcription signal associated with comorbid HIV and CVD..." Which genes were used? • Line 250 on page 7: „By contrast, we detected an extensive DEG signature in IM associated with comorbid HIV/CVD (H+C+ versus H-C-, Fig 1B).“ In Figure 1B, no significantly regulated DEGs are shown for the comparison H+C+ vs H-C-. Line 299 on page 8: „As was found for IM, in NCM the H+C+ group had the largest set of DEGs….”. Please provide a list of genes. Minor: • The legends for the Volcano plots in Figures 1 & 2 are missing. I assume red dots are genes that show significant regulation. • From the Methods section it becomes clear, that the authors performed DE Gene analysis in five comparisons including 6 groups (H+C-, H-C+, H+C+, H+C+LLT-, H+C+LLT+, H-C-). From this perspective, I find the schematic representation in Fig1a misleading, as only 4 groups are depicted. In addition, the orientation of the arrows towards the H-C- group is unclear. What is the intention of the authors? • In Figure 1b, some significantly regulated genes in the volcano plots are named while others are not (compare volcano plots for H+C+LLT- vs H-C- to H+C+LLT-+vs H-C-). Why were these genes labelled and others not? Presentation of data should be consistent. • In line with the previous comment: l. 254 on page 7: "Up-regulated DEGs included known atherosclerosis genes such as the liver X receptor gene NR1H222, and NEXN, TRAF123, TLR7 and LGALS3BP24....". Please labele in the volcano plot. • The pathways shown in Figure 1D are not clearly associated with a particular group. Therefore, the authors are asked to add this information. • I understand that DE genes with an adjusted p-value <0.05 were included in the pathway analysis. Were significant pathways detected by the adjusted or unadjusted p value? This is not clearly stated in the methods section. Unadjusted p-values are listed in Table S3. The authors are kindly requested to clarify this. • Please label Figure 3A&B with the corresponding models and refer to them correctly in the text (see line 359, page 9). Reviewer #2: This manuscript explores the difference in single cell transcriptome of Non Classical Monocytes and Intermediate Monocytes in PBMCs obtained from patient with HIV and CVD. The aim was to identified conserved differentially expressed gene signature in 92 patient divided in four groups according to their diagnosis (H-C- as a control, H+C-, H-,C+ and comorbidity of H+C+). This study is interesting because cardiovascular disease is one of the leading causes of mortality among people living with HIV and the use of PBMCs would be an affordable way to assess the risk and the mechanisms by which HIV engender CVD. Comments: The authors indicated that no difference in cell count was found, does this number refer to the quantification of the cells isolated from the CPT tube or the cells they isolated for sequencing? If the latter, can it really be said that there is no difference? In the results section, second paragraph. The values at the beginning are being presented in percentage, please keep it, it will be easy to correlate the 59% with undetectable RNA and 6 patients with higher RNA. Do the authors looked at whether the 59% of HIV-positive patients who did not have RNA in plasma have any difference with patients with detected RNA and CDV? Wouldn't the presence or absence of RNA affect the behavior of peripheral cells, in this case monocytes? Or even if the disease is at a very advanced stage. This could perhaps give an idea why in the heatmap of the groups with IHV+ are not so homogeneous. Heine GH, Rogacev KS had previously reported that the number of intermediate monocytes may be a significant predictor of cardiovascular events. What could be attributed in this case to the no difference found in monocytes between patients with CVD and negative for HIV? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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HIV infection and cardiovascular disease have both shared and distinct monocyte gene expression features: Women's Interagency HIV Study PONE-D-23-02143R1 Dear Dr. Kaplan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Andreas Zirlik, MD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-23-02143R1 HIV infection and cardiovascular disease have both shared and distinct monocyte gene expression features: Women's Interagency HIV Study Dear Dr. Kaplan: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Univ. Prof. Dr. Andreas Zirlik Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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