Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 21, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-08494Differential gene expression in peripheral leukocytes of pre-weaned Holstein heifer calves with respiratory diseasePLOS ONE Dear Dr. McConnel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 04 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript analyzed a panel of 19 genes as potential biomarkers for prediction of BRD. Authors compared pre, onset and post gene expression from whole blood samples in preweaned heifer calves across time. While they did not identify any differences between BRD cases (regardless of diagnoses), they noted changes in gene expression over time. The paper is clearly written and the study is easy to follow. Although it is largely negative data, the results are relevant for future studies aimed at identifying biomarkers of disease in very young calves. A few comments: 1) Calves in the study received an intranasal vaccine. The vaccine was different and received at different time points. However, there is no discussion or consideration of the effects of the vaccine on gene expression. Because the authors determined early on that GE did not differ, this possibility was disregarded. I think some comparisons should be made to determine if there are effects of the vaccine and/or the different vaccines given at different ages. 2) The authors indicate a major heat event during the course of the study, but do not comment on the timing of this event. A clearer indication of when the heat event (and thus possible heat stress) occurred is important. Were both farms equally effected? Approximately how old were the animals and were major changes observed? this could be buried in the 'age' comparisons but likely has a major impact on interpretation. 3) Figure 1 is not mentioned in the text at all. Figure 2 is not discussed at all in the results section (only discussion). The quality of Figure 2 is very poor and there is no way to evaluate the usefulness of this figure or what it's telling us. 4) Authors mention treatment events in some BRD calves but not others. Were any effects of treatment considered (grouping as +/- treatment, rather than BRD as defined by study personnel)? Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript titled “Differential gene expression in peripheral leukocytes of pre-weaned Holstein heifer calves with respiratory disease”. This manuscript performed a controlled time-course analysis of healthy and diseased heifer Holstein calves with NanoString nCounter methodology, further categorizing concurrent respiratory disease via semi-objective scoring assessment and transthoracic ultrasonography. I commend the authors for their novel approach and thoroughness regarding sampling, clinical assessment, and workflow. In its current state, the presented manuscript is well written and of high quality, and I recommend it for publication pending minor revisions and clarification. Below are comments which may provide further insights and improvements to the manuscript. • Line 219-220: while the Benjamini-Yekutieli correction method for controlling type I error is appropriate, it may be argued that family-wise error correction methodology and false-discovery rates are too conservative due to the limited “independent” hypotheses being tested in nCounter datasets when compared to microarray or next-generation sequencing (DOI: 10.4137/CIN.S16343). This may be an analytical component as to why so few differences were found with these comparisons; however, this approach also provides a strength in demonstrating the differential expression of ALOX15. • Lines 217-219 & 270-277: the authors should expand on normalization and analysis techniques. What type of nCounter analyzer was used (SPRINT, Pro?)? What was the maximum FOV of detection? How was codeset normalization performed (geometric mean of positive controls? Mean/median/max of negative control counts?)? How was differential gene expression evaluated (Fisher’s exact, Wilcoxon-Rank, etc.)? The aforementioned citation [29] does not provide detail regarding these elements of the project. • Lines 228-231 & 278-280: I commend the authors for exploring possible effects between farms and rationalizing the lack of need for its use as a random effect in their testing parameters. • Lines 382-387: I commend the authors on their discussion regarding the potential transient disease that may have occurred within this study; this speaks to the multifaceted nature, and frustration regarding research, of bovine respiratory disease. However, as stated by the authors, these cattle are of different age, breed, and systems, and it may be that the genes selected better represent a more infectious course of respiratory disease, especially of cattle placed into riskier environments (e.g., salebarns, feedlots, etc.). Could it be hypothesized that these cattle, even across two separate farms, were experiencing non-viral (ISG15, MX1, OAS2) or non-infectious (CATHL6, S100A8) course of disease, and that young Holsteins require their own, separate candidate biomarker identification research? Possibly, these distinct gene expression patterns (as detailed by the provided citations) and their associated mechanisms in association with BRD are specific to post-weaned beef systems. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Differential gene expression in peripheral leukocytes of pre-weaned Holstein heifer calves with respiratory disease PONE-D-23-08494R1 Dear Dr. McConnel, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Angel Abuelo, DVM, MRes, MSc, PhD, DABVP (Dairy), DECBHM Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all relevant points in their letter to the reviewers and additions within the revised manuscript. At this time, I recommend the revised manuscript be published in its current state. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-23-08494R1 Differential gene expression in peripheral leukocytes of pre-weaned Holstein heifer calves with respiratory disease Dear Dr. McConnel: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Angel Abuelo Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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