Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 21, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-23027Interval walking training in type 2 diabetes: A pilot study to evaluate the applicability as exercise therapyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Oiwa, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by March 31, 2023. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: A single-arm intervention clinical pilot trial was conducted which aimed to evaluate the efficacy of interval walking training (IWT) on glucose and lipid metabolism, body composition, physical fitness, and muscle strength in subjects with type 2 diabetes. No statistically significant changes in the primary outcomes (HbA1c and body composition) were observed. The target achievement subgroup showed a statistically significant increase in VO2 peak. Minor revisions: 1- Abstract: Clarify which outcomes are primary and which are secondary. 2- Abstract: List the statistical methods used for estimating the p-values. 3- Remove the results where a trend is claimed. 4- Indicate if the distribution of the data was checked for normality prior to applying paired t-tests. 5- Line 252: Include the standard deviations that correspond to the means. 6- It is standard practice to summarize normally distributed data using means and standard deviations. For non-normally distributed data, use median, first and third quartiles. 7- Thoroughly proofread the manuscript. Sometimes the phraseology is non-standard. Reviewer #2: General Comments: In this paper the authors presents a study to evaluate the effect of interval walking training on glucose and lipid metabolism, body composition, physical fitness and muscle strength in persons with type 2 diabetes, which sounds novel and original since many studies have not been published in this area, but at the moment the manuscript has not been presented in an intelligible fashion and the method has not been described in sufficient detail. There are grammar and language issues across the manuscript that require attention and proof reading. Please thoroughly check it. Abstract In the materials and methods (page 2 line 34-38) the frequency and intensity of the intervention should be clearly stated. In the results (page 3 line 39-51), no significant effects should be stated as ‘though no significant, there tend to be improvement in ……’ In the conclusion (page 3 line 52-55), with no improvement in the main study outcome and only one secondary outcome, this section should be written modestly in accordance with the results. Introduction The introduction does not provide sufficient background and do not include all relevant references. The sections needs to be rewritten for clarity of purpose and to reflect novelty, rigour and impact as well as rationale for this study. Page 4 line 63: add ‘combined’ aerobic and resistance exercise... Page 4 line 64: change ‘effectively’ to ‘effective’ Page 4 line 67: change ‘side’ to ‘hand’, rephrase to ‘there is a low uptake of exercise, with…’ Page 4 line 69: remove ‘people’ Page 4 line 70-71: rephrase to ‘Another reason for the low exercise uptake among people with type 2 diabetes could be difficulty on the part of medical professionals to teach ….’ Page 5-6 line 73-101: this should be summarised to provide a rational for the current study. The details of the protocol should only be referenced. Example ‘details of the protocol is published elsewhere (aa et al., 1999)’ Materials and methods This is not adequately described and must be improved significantly. Currently, it is difficult to replicate in terms of the description provided. Research design Page 8 lines 124-126: Unclear Line 128: Participant registration should be ‘Participants’ only Page 9 line 129: How were participants recruited? Why was BMI 20-34kg/m2 an inclusion criterion? Intervention protocol The outcomes and their respective measures, how, when and where they were taken should be clearly stated, and should be delineated under the section ‘Outcome measures’ before the 'Intervention protocol'. The intervention should be clearly outlined. Currently it is difficulty to follow. Would be helpful if it done chronologically. Page line 194-198: MAGE measurement Did participants wear the device throughout the 20weeks of the study? It is mentioned here 2weeks before start of study and for 18 weeks after the start of the study. In the intervention it was mentioned that 18th week of the study. Please reconcile. Line 224: What is fastest walking? How was it determined? How is low, medium and high speed differentiated? Results Needs to be rewritten for clarity. May be better to state clearly significant findings followed by non-significant findings or vice-versa under each section, rather than mix them together Line 250: Change to ‘Basal’ to ‘Baseline’ characteristics Page 15 line 254: ‘hypertension and dsylipdemia showed 68.6% is unclear. Line 328-331: Please state non-significant finding as such. The target fast walking time needs to be properly explained from the onset in the methods. Line 334: reference needed. Line 335: Table 5. What is all (51) and the associated values? Discussion This section should be written to provide a more holistic perspective of the current findings in relation to literature. Reviewer #3: Introduction In line 68-70, the authors stated without appropriate citation, “This low practice rate could be attributed to low people motivation, limited time availability, management problems, and lack of willpower or control.” In line 73-76, the authors stated without appropriate citation, “The Department of Sports Medical Sciences, Shinshu University Graduate School of Medicine, developed a unique walking method termed interval walking training (IWT) in 1999. There has been active research and development of IWT, with approximately 8,700 individuals of overall good health participating in these studies.” In line 92-93, the authors only cited one article but stated, “There is a plethora of scientific evidence supporting the efficacy of IWT, with increasing worldwide attention [11].” Materials and Methods: Did the authors do any power calculation? How did the authors arrive at 51 participants as the appropriate sample size for the pilot study? How did the authors arrived at 20 weeks of follow-up? Why not 6 months or a year? Results: In line 44-49, the authors stated, “However, there was significant improvement in high density lipoprotein cholesterol (from 1.4 mmol/L to 1.5 mmol/L, p = 0.0093). Further, there was improvement trend in liver fat mass (from 8.73% to 7.59%, p = 0.051), visceral fat mass (from 183.58 cm2 to 174.15 cm2, p = 0.065), and extension muscle strength (from 430.1 N to 448.4 N, p = 0.064). In the target achievement group, a significant increase in VO2 peak by 10% (from 1,682 mL/min to 1,827 mL/min, p = 0.037) was observed.” The changes in liver fat mass, visceral fat mass, and extension muscle strength are not statistically significant based on their p-values. Why did the authors state otherwise? The change in HDL (from 1.4 mmol/L to 1.5 mmol/L, p = 0.0093) is statistically significant, does the authors think the change in HDL is clinically significant? ********** 6. 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Interval walking training in type 2 diabetes: A pilot study to evaluate the applicability as exercise therapy PONE-D-22-23027R1 Dear Dr. Oiwa, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Jennifer Annette Campbell, PHD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-23027R1 Interval walking training in type 2 diabetes: A pilot study to evaluate the applicability as exercise therapy Dear Dr. Oiwa: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jennifer Annette Campbell Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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