Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-28145Most Endovascular Thrombectomy Patients Have Target Mismatch Despite Absence of Formal CT Perfusion Selection Criteria.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Butcher, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please tackle the reviewer's comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 15 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Please tackle the reviewers' comments. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors describe an observational case series of EVT patients some of whom underwent CTP prior to treatment and show a high proportion to meet target mismatch criteria. The Introduction states that late time window EVT is “based on selection using Computed Tomographic Perfusion (CTP) and quantitative post-processing of data using the RAPID software package,” but this is not correct. DAWN used clinical – core mismatch and allowed entry with DWI alone, not requiring CTP (or perfusion imaging of any kind). MRI perfusion was also permitted in DEFUSE-3 (although processed by RAPID). Could the authors change “final” infarct volume to “follow-up” infarct volume throughout? The large proportion of patients excluded because CTP source data were lacking is unfortunate as it limits the current series to 170 participants, only 14 of whom lacked a target mismatch profile, and all of these individuals because of core volume >70ml. Since EVT eligibility was determined by clinicians with full access to all imaging, it is unsurprising that the target mismatch population constituted the great majority of cases. The Discussion and Abstract should make it clearer that the population in the study was of patients selected for EVT based on clinical assessment that included all imaging – eg the Discussion opens with a description of the study being of “perfusion imaging patterns in patients undergoing EVT,” whereas this should better read “perfusion imaging in patients selected as suitable for EVT on clinical and imaging grounds.” Could the failure to meet target mismatch criteria be a consequence of processing by MiStar rather than alternative software (presumably RAPID in all cases)? Discrepancies between CTP volumetric estimates among software are well-recognised and in some cases may be quite large. The median was 90ml so perhaps half the cases likely looked around 70ml if only vendor perfusion maps were available for clinical review. Since the group evidently had a large penumbra volume, therefore good collateral status, this may have been persuasive for clinical selection. The more surprising finding was that the group without target mismatch had a similar proportion of mRS 0-2 outcomes as the group that had target mismatch. One potential explanation would be a higher proportion of Right hemisphere strokes in this group since clinical outcomes may be better – at least better disguised – in right compared with left hemisphere strokes of similar volume. The text should include a description of hemispheric lateralisation in the groups. It also seems to be an artefact of the mRS 2 threshold since a difference is seen with the mRS 0-1 outcome. The main message perhaps ought to be that mRS 0-1 has significant potential as a more rigorous clinical endpoint (as was seen in the trials of IV thrombolysis, so perhaps not too surprising) as well as the infarct volume that the authors choose to emphasise. The possibility that the lack of mRS training (and perhaps a non-standard approach to obtaining the score) was most relevant to these findings should be given more prominence. Structured interviews significantly lower the observer variability in mRS scoring, and the subjectivity of the mRS 2 versus mRS 3 threshold is greater than for any other boundary in the scale. The mode of scoring is not described, but if a structured interview was not employed then this may also account for the apparent discrepancy. The penumbral salvage analysis limited to the 14 non-mismatch patients has numbers far too small to allow any meaningful comparison and there should be no conclusion drawn other than this. Reviewer #2: This is a well written retrospective analysis of EVT outcomes and their relation to baseline perfusion measures. Please find here some specific comments: Please include information on onset time for your patient cohort into the methods section. It seems, based on table 2, that the vast majority of the patients in your study were within a 6h time window of known stroke onset. Previous pooled analysis done on MR CLEAN, ESCAPE, REVASCAT, SWIFT-PRIME & EXTEND-IA data have already shown that advanced imaging (CTP) is not necessary for patient inclusion in this situation. It would therefore be a good idea to discuss the added value of your study in relation to the above mentioned papers. In light of this, it would also be interesting to single out those patients who were in the extended time window (beyond 6h) and compare their outcomes (if possible - I expect this will result in an extremely small cohort). The following two sentences seem to contradict one another, please correct or explain: "A further 5 patients did not meet Target Mismatch criteria due to very small perfusion deficits (<15ml)" and "All No Target Mismatch patients had a penumbral volume >15ml". Can the authors provide a reference or explanation for the usage of the following criteria to define area of hypoperfusion: "The hypoperfused tissue deficit was defined using a threshold of DT >3 seconds"? It can certainly be argued what the best parameter map or threshold for labelling tissue as hypoperfused might be, however the value which seems to have "established" itself in literature is Tmax > 6s. For readers unfamiliar with MIStar, could you explain the origin of the parameter DT (delay time) - how is it comparable to Tmax? I recommend including the following reference into your discussion (Borst J, Berkhemer OA, Roos YBWEM, van Bavel E, van Zwam WH, van Oostenbrugge RJ, van Walderveen MAA et al on behalf of the MR CLEAN investigators. Value of Computer Tomographic Perfusion-Based Patient Selection for Intra-Arterial Acute Ischemic Stroke Treatment. Stroke 2015) and discussing your results also in relation to this 2015 paper. ********** 6. 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PONE-D-22-28145R1 Most Endovascular Thrombectomy Patients Have Target Mismatch Despite Absence of Formal CT Perfusion Selection Criteria. Dear Dr. Butcher: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Eshak I Bahbah Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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