Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 11, 2022 |
|---|
|
PONE-D-22-28016The experience of a program combining two complementary therapies for women with breast cancer: an IPSE qualitative studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sibeoni, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 10 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Adetayo Olorunlana, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. We note that you have indicated that data from this study are available upon request. PLOS only allows data to be available upon request if there are legal or ethical restrictions on sharing data publicly. For more information on unacceptable data access restrictions, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-unacceptable-data-access-restrictions. In your revised cover letter, please address the following prompts: a) If there are ethical or legal restrictions on sharing a de-identified data set, please explain them in detail (e.g., data contain potentially sensitive information, data are owned by a third-party organization, etc.) and who has imposed them (e.g., an ethics committee). Please also provide contact information for a data access committee, ethics committee, or other institutional body to which data requests may be sent. b) If there are no restrictions, please upload the minimal anonymized data set necessary to replicate your study findings as either Supporting Information files or to a stable, public repository and provide us with the relevant URLs, DOIs, or accession numbers. For a list of acceptable repositories, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability#loc-recommended-repositories. We will update your Data Availability statement on your behalf to reflect the information you provide 3. Your abstract cannot contain citations. Please only include citations in the body text of the manuscript, and ensure that they remain in ascending numerical order on first mention. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PONE-D-22-280 The experience of a program combining two complementary therapies for women with breast cancer: an IPSE qualitative study 1. The study presents the results of original research. Yes, this is original research. 2. Results reported have not been published elsewhere. Yes 3. Experiments, statistics, and other analyses are performed to a high technical standard and are described in sufficient detail. High technical standard and in sufficient detail. The introduction part in the method section is identical with four to five other articles (all by the same authors). The text can be re-worded. The aim was to explore the lived experience of women with breast cancer who received supportive cancer care through a program of complementary therapies combining structured physical activity and the MBSR program. The introduction is about breast cancer, supportive cancer and then some sentences about complementary therapies. There are some studies about these issues and the authors state; Moreover, no study has explored the global lived experience of a supportive care program based on combined complementary therapies among women with breast cancer. Our qualitative study aimed to fill this gap. I am doubtful that the authors will be able to explore the global lived experiences when interviewing 29 women with breast cancer. When setting up the research group, why is there no oncology specialist? There are medical doctors from other specialties and psychologists and even two MBSR program instructors and doctors. There could be a risk for directing the analysis. In step 2. The reference 19 is using qualitative data nested within an evaluative randomised controlled trial (RCT). Data is from a questionnaire, so no pure qualitative research. I understand that the authors want to introduce the” new method” but still it could be written as other qualitative methods- regarding the research process. The information below step 2 could have been in the introduction (you should always know what other studies there are in the field) Step 3. Recruitment process OK. Sampling criteria— 1) select participants who have experienced archetypal examples of the situation being studied; Yes qualitative 2) include participants who might enrich and add something new to what had previously been found; How do you know? 3)facilitate the identification of breast cancer patients who had benefited from the programs, ok so you are looking for an evaluation of the program and not the lived experiences of breast cancer and complementary therapies? 4)be able to select participants who differed by sex, age, family status, years of experience, rank in their department, and type of practice.??? OK strategic samplings, but rank in department?? there is a need of clarification. There were 100 women in the “population” and 29 participated on this study, give some more information about who invited, how selected, did only 29 women out of these 100 responds. I appreciate the use of information power and its” calculation.” Step 4. Data collection in-depth interviews, one open question 60 to 90 minutes long. Step 5. The method has quite a lot of influences, but it seems like the main idea of analysis is inductive description. Three researchers performed the analysis and then during the group process, the three researchers met with the other members. Were the research ARL and VF participating? They did the literature review and could influence the result. Trustworthiness’ is a mix from several methods and perspectives. A negative case was not presented, triangulation was only by the literature, not methodological or researcher triangulation. Peer review- subject experiences was performed, since it was descriptive and triangulated with the literature it had conformity and was easy to recognize. The result- is two categories/axes only labelled similar to content analysis and then there is 2 sub-categories. Descriptive presentation with many quotations. But why sub-sub labels -- Restore their bodies, Take care of oneself, moving forward, volunteering for a study, and speaking up for the complementary therapies they received. Discovery of their physical and psychological capacities, Another way of embodying her life as a woman on a daily basis, Learning to listen to oneself in a new and different way, In the environment of family and friends, In society. All these sub-sub categories send signals that data are not enough analysed. Sometimes there is a sub-subcategory with just one sentence and one quotation. Often there are sparse of information/data, so perhaps there should be more fluid text presenting the categories/axes. The quotations inform us as readers that this is about family and friends and so on. Readers not used to qualitative research should benefit from a result clarified and presenting those categories/axes solid. The discussion is repeating the result and confirmed by references used, nothing new presented, but this could be due to the research method- working with literature triangulation and systematic reviewing and then using focused research questions. –the lived experiences were not “identified” in the interviews. The authors have also several systematic reviews about the research area- so the research questions are already reviewed. It is appreciated that the authors have some reflections about these issues. Delete the sentence about saturation it is NA and misplaced here. Limitations are well presented but are lacking methodology issues, even though this method is new and rigorous, could there be some weakness? 4. Conclusions are presented in an appropriate fashion and are supported by the data. Conclusions are presented in appropriate fashion, but it seems like the aim was to evaluate especially the MBSR program. The discussion and the conclusion end in a kind of theoretical paper focusing on theoretical psychological approaches. 5. The article is presented in an intelligible fashion and is written in standard English. Yes, the article is presented in an intelligible fashion, but the structure could be sharpened, and it is written in standard English, mostly. 6. The research meets all applicable standards for the ethics of experimentation and research integrity. Yes, this study meets all the applicable standards for research integrity. 7. The article adheres to appropriate reporting guidelines and community standards for data availability. Yes, the article is following the reporting guidelines. Out of 62 references 13 are 10 years old or more, there are 16 references in the introduction which all are up to date and out of these 6 are reviews. In total ten references are reviews, meta-analyses, or meta-synthesis and five references are a mix of methodology. This could be an interesting paper, but it is hard to see what the focus is; a paper introducing this “new” method, evaluating complementary therapies and especially MBSR program or a theoretical discussion paper about psychological approaches. It is not obvious that this paper is about lived experiences…. This paper needs to be clarified, to be suitable for publication. Reviewer #2: Thank you for your research. I have the follow suggestions to revise your manuscript. Abstract - Methods: The authors should add data collection date and inclusion and exclusion criteria. For example, did you include breast cancer patients with all stages? The authors should include how the data was analyzed. - Results: It is hard to follow because there are two different types of numbers (e.g., 1, i). I recommend the authors consider the alphabet or verbally describe their findings. Introduction - Did the needed support differ by the cancer stage? Age? SES? Race/ethnicity? - The authors should more literature review on previous studies that applied qualitative research methods. What were their main findings and advantages of using the methodology? -Where is the study area (France? Any specific region)? The information should be indicated in the introduction section as well as the rationale for choosing that research area. - The introduction was mainly about support, but your methodology focuses on physical activity. There needs to revise the manuscript more consistently. Methods: - The research question and the interview question are not aligned well. - Although the authors mentioned, “The IPSE analytic process is detailed elsewhere”, I recommend they briefly describe the analytic process in this manuscript too. - There should be a description of inter-rater reliability. Findings: - Instead of indicating P13, P28, the characteristics of these participants should appear in the main text with direct quotes (e.g., 53 years old woman with breast cancer stage 1). - The findings are too shallow and descriptive. Instead of having multiple one-sentence quotes, the authors should have an in-depth analysis of the data. - Wouldn’t there be any theoretical framework that the authors could apply? Discussion: - The implications should be expanded in the manuscript. - Some sections that descriptively introduce the previous literature should be relocated to the introduction section. Reviewer #3: This article is interesting, and the authors have referred to the COREQ.Due to the qualitative design, the authors did not perform statistical analysis, but they followed a certain qualitative analysis that may better be described in detail. Authors also need to clarify on how to carry out the triangulation. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
| Revision 1 |
|
The experience of a program combining two complementary therapies for women with breast cancer: an IPSE qualitative study PONE-D-22-28016R1 Dear Dr. Sibeoni, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Adetayo Olorunlana, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for all efforts in amending the manuscript. Mostly comments from reviewers are taken into consideration. Just a small thing; saturation is still in the abstract. This is not applicable to IPSE or Content analysis. Saturation demands parallel data collection and analysis. Perhaps you want to use the term redundancy. Thank you for interesting reading. Reviewer #2: THe authors revised the manuscript well, incorporating reviewers' comments. I recommend the manuscript for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
| Formally Accepted |
|
PONE-D-22-28016R1 The experience of a program combining two complementary therapies for women with breast cancer: an IPSE qualitative study Dear Dr. Sibeoni: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Associate Professor Adetayo Olorunlana Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
Open letter on the publication of peer review reports
PLOS recognizes the benefits of transparency in the peer review process. Therefore, we enable the publication of all of the content of peer review and author responses alongside final, published articles. Reviewers remain anonymous, unless they choose to reveal their names.
We encourage other journals to join us in this initiative. We hope that our action inspires the community, including researchers, research funders, and research institutions, to recognize the benefits of published peer review reports for all parts of the research system.
Learn more at ASAPbio .