Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 13, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-28122Computer-based intervention for residents of domestic violence shelters with substance use: A randomized pilot studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Hailemariam, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Your manuscript has been assessed by two expert reviewers, whose comments are appended below. The reviewers have highlighted multiple areas in which additional information or discussion is required regarding the study design, statistical analysis, and the rationale for your study with respect to existing literature. Please ensure you respond to each of these points carefully in your response to reviewers document, and revise your manuscript accordingly. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 13 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents data analysis from a randomized pilot study on computer-based ntervention to reduce alcohol and drug use among women with IPV. The topic is of importance, the study was registered as a RCT with a valid NCT number, and was approved by the respective IRB/Ethics Committee. While the study objectives sound interesting, is important, and on target, some shortcomings were observed, in regards to abiding by the CONSORT guidelines for conducting and reporting results of high-quality randomized controlled trials (RCTs). Some other (statistical) comments were also provided. 1. Methods: Methods reporting need some work. An orderly manner is suggested, following CONSORT guidelines, without repeating information, such as Trial Design, Participant Eligibility Crtieria and settings, Interventions, Outcomes, sample size/power considerations, Interim analysis and stopping rules, Randomization (details on random number generation, allocation concealment, implementation), Blinding issues, etc, should be mentioned. The authors are advised to create separate subsections for each of the possible topics (whichever necessary), and that way produce a very clear writeup. I see the Authors indeed made an attempt; however, they are advised to write it carefully, following nice examples in the manuscript below: https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0889540619300010 Specific comments: (a) For instance, the randomization and allocation concealment should be made very clear (they are NOT the same thing); the trial staff recruiting patients should NOT have the randomization list. Randomization should be prepared by the trial statistician, and he/she would not participate in the recruiting. (b) The manuscript does not provide details on the randomization procedure; it just states as a "standard" procedure. Provide more details. Why was block randomization (BR) used? If not, any specific reason, why? This is because BR is often recommended in clinical studies/trials to ensure a balance in sample size across groups over time. https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2267325/ (c) Sample size/power: A sample size/power statement is still required even in a randomized pilot trial; see https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/abs/pii/S0895435612002740 It's better if that is provided, utilizing the primary response, acceptable effect size, and at 90%, or 95%. Even pilot trials need to be conducted with some ballpark number. It should also be described in a separate sub-section. (d) Statistical Analysis: Based on the (longitudinal) design of the study, the authors justifiably conducted a mixed linear model analysis. Who were the underlying Gaussian assumptions (of the random effect & error) assessed? Furthermore, a generalized estimating equation (GEE) would also be adequate; any reason why that was not conducted? (I am not asking authors to do it). 2. Results & Conclusions: (a) The authors should check that any statement of significance should be followed by a p-value in the entire Results section. Otherwise, the Results section look OK. Reviewer #2: The study is addressing two important public health challenges in women's health, IPV and substance use. The use of technology based interventions in the domestic violence shelter is justified given the multiple needs and overburdened staff. However, the manuscript would be strengthened with more details on the intervention (screen shots), details on the content related to substance use, given there may be use of multiple substances, etc. For example, what skills building, etc. are the focus for behavioral change? Does the intervention provide the user with specific local referrals to service organizations in the community, what is the link between the intervention content and increase daily substance abuse treatment use? The intervention describes a personalized safety plan, does this mean that the safety plan includes strategies to seek treatment or discussing substance use with counselors for example? Are advocates/case managers in the shelter trained on the intervention, would be likely that a participant would discus the information provided for behavior change and/or discuss/review personalized safety plan with an advocate, how was the advocate involvement in supporting participant taking into consideration when examining the implications of the findings? More detail on the choice of control condition is needed, as it appears the control condition is not related to behavioral change but rather on time that equal intervention group. All the women are in shelter, it would be interested to understand what other services they are receiving during the stay that may also influence findings, such as case management, legal support, child care, employment assistance, substance abuse treatment referrals, etc. More discussion is needed related to increase in self-efficacy in control group. Further, more discussion is needed related to the findings on IPV, it appears that IPV perpetration over time has a pattern towards significance with intervention group reporting more perpetration than control group, and control condition appears to have greater reduction in IPV victimization, cyberbullying and perpetration than intervention, although not significant - it would be interested in more discussion about these findings given IPV severity is stated outcome. Further, would be useful to report that participants in control condition used more safety strategies than intervention, this may not matter as use does not indicate that strategy was helpful/useful, so think need more discussion of these findings and how they inform future versions of the intervention. For example, the lower use of strategies by intervention group may be related to the personalized strategies so intervention participants did not need to use more strategies. I do think detailing a framework for feasibility/acceptability testing would be useful, what was the measure used for acceptability for the intervention? I would recommend a table of the feasibility/acceptability, outcome and mediator measures used for study, would make it easier to read and follow. More information on human subjects protections given that many shelters do not allow women to use substance, what strategies were used if a woman was active user? The study did not detail limitations, small non generalizable sample from 3 different shelters, no race/ethnic difference assessed related to substance use, IPV severity, etc. No discussion of reasons why control group had significantly improved self-efficacy? Although the intervention was reviewed as feasible, there was little indication that the intervention would be effective given the outcomes of reduce substance use, IPV severity and self-efficacy, what additional work, like qualitative interviews, etc will need to be done to revise the intervention to meet the needs of survivors? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Computer-based intervention for residents of domestic violence shelters with substance use: A randomized pilot study PONE-D-22-28122R1 Dear Dr. Hailemariam, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sandra Ann Springer, M.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have carefully responded to the reviewers' concerns and questions and the article is not acceptable for publication. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-28122R1 Computer-based intervention for residents of domestic violence shelters with substance use: A randomized pilot study Dear Dr. Hailemariam: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Sandra Ann Springer Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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