Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 8, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-02944Impact of vented and condenser tumble dryers on waterborne and airborne microfiber pollution.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lant, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 22 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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All other expenses were paid by The Worshipful Company of Launderers, in the form of a grant to AMC, and by Northumbria University through the employment of JRD and SL and provision of consumables. The Worshipful Company of Launderers had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript. There was no additional external funding received for this study.” Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. 4. Please include your full ethics statement in the ‘Methods’ section of your manuscript file. In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. 5. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. 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Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Impact of vented and condenser tumble dryers on waterborne and airborne microfiber pollution Review Comments Abstract: The abstract seems to be bit lengthy. Can be shortened for better understanding Introduction: Line 85 – 86 – Inclusion of reference will be useful. Though the necessity of the redesigning the dryer was addressed in the previous literature, the requirements of comparing vented and condenser dryers was not clear. How this previously studied Tumble driers are differed from the vented and condenser type tumble dryers ? Line 130-145: This paragraph clearly reports that all the existing both vented, and condenser are designed to store their filtered fibers in it. However, their cleaning process and methods are dependent on the user decision. Based on these pitfalls, study has taken two different objectives that did not address the issue discussed in line 130-145. These issues can be included as an aim of the study However, as author mentioned, the selected problems are addressed first time and their findings were need of the hour items in the research community. Materials and methods Line 195 – The protocols can be of some common standard like ISO or BS over a literature. Line 264 – The mass measurements was provided however, the procedure did not refer any standards or previously published literature. Is it AATCC standard?? Can be clarified Results and Discussions The study provides an idea about the contribution of vented and condenser type dryer and their impact on the microfiber emission into wastewater, based on the type of cleaning and disposal of the filter or condensed water that a consumer adopts. This is the novelty of the study, and it is essential findings for the scientific community. However, though the study cited the findings of the previous literatures that evaluated the normal tumble dryers emission, this study did not evaluate it, to compare with the considered to varieties. It is imperative to seek those findings, as the both vented and condenser types are the design variation of the abovementioned normal tumble drier. A comparison would have suggested how far the new designs are inferior or superior to the old one. This is a major draw back of the study. Due to these authors were not able to support their importance of the study over the previous literature like Kapp and miller and Kärkkäinen and Sillanpää. Secondly, the authors did not compare the results of washing emission of the wash loads washed during the analysis. Inclusion of the washing data might be helpful for the readers to find the correlation or relationship or proportion of microfibers emitted in the corresponding washing and drying. It may also provide details including, whether the dryer emission is the really a pain point to address? While we did not have a proper commercial filter for the washing effluent as of now Vacuum cleaning and disposal into a solid waste will directly contribute to the terrestrial microfiber pollution. That is also another problem which are equally important to the marine pollution but leatsly researched as of now. – This suggestion provided in Line 529 can be reconsidered before the publication of the manuscript. Author should include their view point on this as it addresses the major issue Addressing these points will improve the quality of the manuscript. All the best. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr.R.Rathinamoorthy ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-23-02944R1Impact of vented and condenser tumble dryers on waterborne and airborne microfiber pollution. PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Lant, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 27 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Amitava Mukherjee, ME, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I thank author for carefully addressing all the comments posted in the earlier review. The manuscript can be accepted. However, I would like to mention that for microfiber mass estimation recently AATCC has released the standard. Author can find the details over here: https://www.aatcc.org/tm212/ Reviewer #2: Overall, this edited version of the manuscript is thorough, well written and revised to incorporate previous reviewers comments. This article will be a valuable addition to the growing understanding of the contribution that clothes drying methods make to microfiber pollution. There are just two minor revisions that must be made prior to publication. First, in lines 247-248, the figure being referred to is for Vented dryers, however the text is confusing. This must be changed to "Evaluation of the microfiber release from the vented dryer (Fig 3)" in Line 247. Second, line 498 should include "the pore size of lint filters in tumble dryers" for further clarity. Reviewer #3: The manuscript entitled "Impact of vented and condenser tumble dryers on waterborne and airborne microfiber pollution" evaluated the release of microfibers from washing machines. The paper is well written and presents some thoughtful interpretations, however, no quantitative data/results were provided in the abstract proving "high levels of microfibers" (line 33) and "vented dryers were found to be significant contributors" (line 35). Other comments include: -QA/QC's were not provided in the paper. Did the researchers take precautions in the lab to reduce airborne microfiber contamination? (Lab coats, wipe down surfaces and equipment, etc)- If so, please add this in paper or supplementary - Lines 311-315: Please provide the statistical software (plus reference) used in the Statistics section. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr.R.Rathinamoorthy Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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Impact of vented and condenser tumble dryers on waterborne and airborne microfiber pollution. PONE-D-23-02944R2 Dear Dr. Lant, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Amitava Mukherjee, ME, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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