Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 21, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-32096A color-related bias in offside judgments in professional soccer: A matter of shirt-background contrast?PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wuehr, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 09 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Summary: The paper investigates the impact of outfit colors on the frequency of offside judgments in soccer. For that the authors investigated games between a team in yellow jersey and a team wearing blue jerseys. The authors claim that more offside judgments are made against teams of higher salience (blue), possibly induced by differences in figure-background contrast. Evaluation The main challenge of such a paper is to control for teams' abilities and styles of play. To do so, the authors use the number of offsides called against a team divided by the number of shots a team kicked towards the opposing team. This measure is based on a very strong assumption that having more offsides is a good measure of teams’ offensive abilities compared to the opponent. However, I don't think that this is enough (and correct). It is plausible to assume that lower ability teams would struggle against higher ability teams both defensively and offensively. For example, in a recent World Cup game between Brazil and South Korea that was very much one sided in favor of Brazil (4:1), Brazilians had more kicks (18:10), but not a single offside compared to five offsides of South Korea (see https://www.fifa.com/fifaplus/en/match-centre/match/17/255711/285073/400128133?country=NO&wtw-filter=ALL ). Why can't it be the same in your case where Borussia Dortmund turned out to be a much better team than their blue-colored opponents? Thus, in my opinion, your identification strategy to disentangle ability from bias is not valid. The second problem relates to the selection of blue-colored teams. To the best of my knowledge, there are several teams that play with blue jerseys (Hoffenheim, Hertha Berlin, Paderborn, Bochum, etc.). Thus, it is not clear why did the authors chose the very specific teams. What I expected to see is the entire pool of games of blue-colored teams, rather than only a very selective sample. Reviewer #2: The present paper deals with the association between jersey color and offside decisions in soccer. I found this to be a very interesting topic that may well warrant publication in PLoS ONE. The paper is very well written and interesting to read. I appreciate that the authors carefully discuss the limitations of their correlational approach. I am also convinced that the authors’ approach (first, find an effect in the lab; second, show that it also exists in the real world) is important for sport-psychological research, as it allows combining the search for causal mechanisms with real-world applicability. That said, I see a couple of points that I would like to see addressed before I can potentially recommend the manuscript for publication. 1) The authors’ reasoning rests heavily on their proposed search strategy for ARs (e.g., lines 139-142; lines 493-496). The authors seem to be aware of the relevance of this idea for their study. For example, they suggest that their findings “may inform us about the cognitive heuristics that ARs are using for spotting offside positions” (lines 492 / 493). However, I was wondering: Is there any evidence that this really is what ARs are doing? If so, presenting this evidence might considerably strengthen the present reasoning. If not, what are potential alternative strategies for ARs, and how do the present results fit these strategies, if at all? 2) Can the authors please elaborate a bit on the proposed luminance contrast: What exactly constitutes this contrast according to their reasoning: Is it the forward’s jersey vs the other team’s jerseys; or the forward’s jersey vs the green of the pitch; or the forward’s jersey vs a mixture of other jerseys and the green of the pitch; or any other combination? I understand that the authors could not empirically determine the respective contrast (see their explanations in lines 216-227). However, what do they principally propose? What is the contrast supposed to consist of? Furthermore, can the authors briefly explain somewhere what exactly a luminance contrast is and why it is different for the jerseys of Dortmund and Schalke? 3) I appreciate the careful discussion of potential alternative explanations (starting with line 505). However, I believe the authors are a bit quick to dismiss the alternative explanation that the results might have something to do with the respective teams’ playing styles (lines 516-520). To me, it does not seem to be implausible that both Dortmund and Dresden might have used somewhat similar tactics, just like Schalke and Bochum might have used a similar one, but a different one from the tactic used by Dortmund and Dresden. Maybe the authors can elaborate a little on this question. I do not see this as being a major problem: As the authors note themselves, their data are correlational, so it is obvious that not all alternative explanations can be ruled out. Furthermore, they might want to discuss that their results completely hinge on data from 4 teams. What does that mean for their generalizability? Reviewer #3: Report: A color-related bias in offside judgments in professional soccer: A matter of shirt background contrast? Kudos to the authors of this “well baked” paper. The Introduction is characterized by a logical flow as it smoothly brings the reader to the problem at hand. The authors doing a good job elaborating the mechanisms that can mediate the correlation between color salience and offside decisions. The methodological part is thoroughly explained, the authors treat their results with caution and doing a long way to deal with alternative explanations. The Discussion is also well-developed and sufficient. I have very a few minor comments: 1. line 252: space between 1 and would 2. line 281: It is better to continue with shirts and trousers instead of using shirts and shorts 3. line 417: The VAR is a system, so use it instead of he 4. line 458: Wühr et al. (2020) not 2021 5. The authors present the reader in the Introduction with the issue of correlation vs. causation, it seems appropriate to mention here the accepted term: confounding problem and/or endogeneity. With appreciation for your meticulous work, Reviewer ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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A color-related bias in offside judgments in professional soccer: A matter of figure-background contrast? PONE-D-22-32096R1 Dear Dr. Wuehr, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors of the present paper have extensively provided answers to my suggestions and questions regarding their first version of the paper and they have added substantial changes to their original manuscript. I congratulate the authors on their detailed answers and thorough revisions. Reviewer #3: The authors adressed my comments and I am satisfied with the improvments. The manuscript is ready for poblication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Elia Morgulev ********** <quillbot-extension-portal></quillbot-extension-portal> |
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PONE-D-22-32096R1 A color-related bias in offside judgments in professional soccer: A matter of figure-background contrast? Dear Dr. Wühr: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Goran Kuvačić Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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