Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-10674Benefits of computer-assisted home training for French cochlear implant patientsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kerneis, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. The reviewers had the impression that the manuscript was improved significantly. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 30 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The resubmitted manuscript is substantially improved in several respects, such as the inclusion of figures showing data from each test run and a greater level of detail on the Methods (though there are still some aspects here that remain a little unclear). However, there are still some major points of concern, most notably regarding the sentence data. Problems here include the fact that listeners would on occasions be presented with sentences that they would have already heard in previous test runs; there is no control for procedural learning, with data from all test runs included despite there being instances in some listeners of steep improvements in performance from the first to the second pre-training test run; missing data due to unmeasurable SRTs suggest that some of the analyses are based on data from only 3 listeners. In my view the sentence data do not seem reliable enough to support any firm conclusions regarding the possible benefit of training. I think it would perhaps be reasonable to include the sentence data unanalysed and to say something along the lines that while they suggest a possible benefit of training, no firm conclusions can be drawn. The overall conclusions would then also need to acknowledge that the study provides no real evidence of generalisation of training benefit to tasks that are anywhere close to real-world listening. Other issues include: It seems like overkill to include for the same data a line graph of individual data, bar charts of both mean performance and benefit and also a table. There are inconsistencies between the data presented in the figures and tables. As one example, Fig 4 shows CI-only vowel recognition in the BM group to be slightly lower at follow-up than at post-training, but benefit is shown as higher at follow-up and Table 3 shows substantially higher performance at follow-up than at post-training. It is hard to see the relevance of the NH data and I recommend that they be omitted. Other comments L185 – Since within-subject data would be collected from both trained and untrained groups, I don’t think it’s appropriate to use across-subject variability as a justification for the absence of a control group. Perhaps more importantly here, the reference to a ‘within-subject control procedure’ presumably refers to the fact that several test runs were conducted prior to training. However, no criteria for assessing whether performance had reached asymptote are mentioned and data from all test runs are included in the pre-training scores, so that no control appears to have been implemented. L202 – one stimulus L217 – Would be as well to clarify that this (presumably) means that the recordings were made for this study, rather than that they were new sentences. L223 – ‘During testing, a sentence was randomly selected from the stimulus set (without replacement)’ – Presumably this refers to each test run, but it would be good to clarify this. L271 – Would it be more accurate to say ‘4 weeks’, rather than ‘1 month’? L277 – post-training benefit L355 – What hypothesis regarding test run was being tested here? Is 5 listeners really sufficient for these analyses? L477 – The purpose of this analysis isn’t really clear. L498 - Fig 7 y-axis label should be SRT (dB). L515 – It appears that, due to the unmeasurable SRTs, the reported mean values include different numbers of listeners at different time points, which is rather misleading. L516 – ‘For example, when CI-only listening SRTs <25 dB SNR could not be obtained,’ – it appears that the end of this sentences is missing. L521 – Confusion between lower and higher? L555 – ‘All participants were tested in the lab.’ This statement doesn’t seem to belong here. L564 – Why is subsection included as a factor? L632 – What is the basis for the claim regarding increased performance asymmetry in bilateral users? L640 – The claim here appears to depend on an assumption that performance would not have improved for the acoustic ear only, but this is just an assumption and not tested. L652 - The analysis referred to in Table 8 included the effect of test run within each test session, though. With respect to whether procedural learning contributed to improved performance after training the key issue is whether such learning differentially affected performance across different test sessions. L655 - It appears guaranteed that this was the case, rather than just likely. L658 – I think it would be beneficial regardless of the details of the adaptive procedure. L661 – Given the large variability across individual CI users and the different talkers, etc., I don’t think that this comparison across studies is relevant here. L674 – It’s not clear what lists are being referred to here, if sentences were randomly selected from the full set of 100 on each run. L689 – Should this say binaural benefit? L721 – I’m sure it’s true that a lab-based sentence recognition in speech-shaped noise task falls some way short of adequately reflecting realistic listening situations for CI users. However, it does seem hard to believe that training that was truly bringing about a 10 dB improvement in SRT in such a task (e.g., as seen in binaural conditions for BM-5) through perceptual learning rather than through extraneous factors would have no beneficial impact at all on responses to the SSQ. Reviewer #2: Thanks for this manuscript which is detailed and well written. I usually prefer person-first language i.e. ‘people with CI’ rather than CI patients … Lots of journals insist on this now so it’s a good habit to get into Angel sound been around for years- well proven in other languages – why is doing it in French different? Children? Is Angel Sound an App? Line 121 – is there a reference for this? ‘While 121 unilateral CI patients may adapt to an intra-aural frequency mismatch over time, bimodal CI 122 patients may have difficulty adapting to the mismatch in the CI ear, given the dominance of the 123 acoustic hearing ear’ May be good to do a more formal hypothesis and research question – rather than the less formal ‘what you expect’ - especially as you gave a lot of detailed stats later Did you invite all eligible adults to participate? Do you think you had a sample representative of the adult CI population? Did you plan for equal split of unilat/bilat/bimod? Were patients compensated? Make sure you write appropriate © or ® when you put the company names Post pre in your table – post or pre lingual deafness I assume? Make sure to define all abbrev the first time e.g. SRT in line 175 One ‘stimulus’ not ‘stimuli’ e.g. line 202 Am I right in thinking that if you are presenting stimuli ‘without replacement’, it will become easier to identify the final ones, as there is less choice? Why did you choose this rather than at random? 217 I note that the French HINT sentences were recorded for this study – was validation and equalisation of sentences done to ensure equal difficulty? I know tat can sometime be quite a long process. Why did you choose to rerecord? Was it keyword scoring, or 50% of all words? Why did you include the listeners with NH? Can you explain please? 657 257 I don’t understand why you say there were lots not used in this study? ‘there are more than 1000 French 257 monosyllable words produced by 2 male and 2 female native French talkers that were not used for 258 testing’ Lines 271 and 330 – repetition of info I would start results section saying how many people complied, how much training was done e.g. a range of 10 hours to 20 hours with a median of … How can we show that it’s the training effect not practice at the tests? So does making the ear performance more equal benefit people ultimately or not? Lots of tables of number may be better in appendices – really loses the readability here Could the raw data be provided online? Ten plus tables of numbers is just too much! 554 – can you say the range of training done e.g. 9 to 14 hours? Otherwise it seems meaningless to do a correlation between training benefit and amount of training, if they’ve all done pretty much 10 hours. Can you comment on retention of benefit past one month? Were people keen to continue? 657 50% OF the words Fig 1 is useful thanks ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Helen Cullington ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-22-10674R1Preliminary evaluation of computer-assisted home training for French cochlear implant recipientsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Kerneis, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. While one reviewer has accepted the manuscript, there is a strong remaining concern raised by the other reviewer on your method of analyzing the data. The concern is a valid one. To address the concern, my suggestion would be to adequately discuss the issues of the second reviewer in your manuscript. I see this as a mandatory requirement to get your manuscript published. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 23 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Andreas Buechner Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Dear Dr. Kerneis, while one reviewer has accepted the manuscript, there is a strong remaining concern raised by the other reviewer on your method of analyzing the data. The concern is a valid one. To address the concern, my suggestion would be to adequately discuss the issues of the second reviewer in your manuscript. I see this as a mandatory requirement to get your manuscript published. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: While adequately addressing some key issues the revisions to the ms have introduced new problems. A reasonable case can be made that stable performance over repeated testing pre-training indicates that comparisons between pre- and post-training are unlikely to be much affected by procedural learning. However, the approach of including test run as a factor and then excluding some post-training runs on a post-hoc basis does not seem appropriate to me. Excluding the post-training runs with poorer performance would inevitably seem to result in bias towards finding beneficial effects of training. The removal of the analysis of the sentence data is not reflected in some parts of the ms. The Abstract mentions sentence in noise recognition as an outcome measure and reports only that performance improved after training, implying that this included sentence recognition. The first sentence of the Discussion states that there were significant benefits for sentence recognition in noise. Other points L206 – ‘Data were averaged across all runs’ - This is inconsistent with test run being included as a factor in the analyses. L238 – The reference to NH testing seems out of place here. I recommended omission of the NH data, but if they are going to be included their purpose needs to be made clear. Also, in the Results it is stated that SRTs were obtained from 13 listeners. L253 – ‘high-quality recordings…’ – this is stated earlier. L353 – Make clear whether they were asked or if these were spontaneous requests. L374 – This suggests that binaural performance was assessed in the unilateral group. L380 – This should presumably say ‘vowel’ rather than ‘consonant’ L399 and similarly at L441 - It’s not clear exactly which analysis is being referred to here. Were additional analyses performed on differences between pre- and post-training performance? L428 – ‘all 3 test runs’ – earlier it says there were 2-3 runs L452 – It’s not clear here exactly which data is included in this analysis but in any case I don’t think that comparing benefit between vowel and consonant tasks is very meaningful or useful. No rationale is provided to expect a difference and given that the tasks differ in various ways such as the numbers of response options and the starting levels of performance I don’t think that finding a significant difference in percentage point benefit would really be informative about changes in underlying perceptual processes. L473 – SNR rather than SRT L478 – Again, I’m not convinced that this analysis is really worthwhile. L513 – Although it’s unlikely to change any of the conclusions, given that it doesn’t appear to be of interest whether scores are higher overall for any particular subsection, it would appear more natural to analyse each subsection separately, rather than to treat subsection as a factor. L599 – ‘somewhat larger improvements’ – this seems to be comparing the magnitude of an increase in percent correct in a closed-set phoneme recognition task with a change in SRT which doesn’t really seem to make sense. Reviewer #2: I reviewed this paper originally as reviewer 2. The work aims to evaluate French Angelsound in 15 people with CI (5 unilateral, 5 bilateral, 5 bimodal). They performed 10 hours training over one month. Thank you to the authors for considering and mostly including my suggestions in your revised manuscript. This is now a v well written manuscript with a clear abstract; it will contribute to the literature. I love your ‘Other observations’ paragraphs. There are only 3 things I suggest and they are word changes/copy editing, so I will not need to rereview: Line 142. I think it’s a bit odd to put ‘some of our research questions were’. Maybe just put that those were your primary research questions. Line 143 repetition of word ‘would’ line 345 try and ensure there is not a line break as it currently looks like the SRTs were 5.3 on quick glance – can you remove a space perhaps? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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