Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 15, 2023 |
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PONE-D-23-10494Do people with disabilities experience disparities in cancer care? A systematic reviewPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tosetti, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.Invited reviewers have provided several beneficial comments on this submission which I think could be implemented to improve the prepared material before any decision for publication. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 04 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Sina Azadnajafabad, MD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: General Comments: This study addresses an interesting topic. It includes a valuable effort in answering the questions about the disparities about treatment outcomes of a vulnerable population of patients. Overall, the abstract effectively communicates the objectives, methods, findings, and limitations of the systematic review. It highlights the need for further research and action to address the disparities in cancer care for people with disabilities. It is well-written and provides valuable insights into an important and underexplored area of healthcare. However, I think a few concerns need to be addressed in the next revision: Study selection: - Line 123, Lack of independent screening: The manuscript mentions that one author screened the studies by title, abstract, and full text to determine eligibility. Ideally, study selection should involve at least two independent reviewers who screen the studies separately and then compare their results to resolve any discrepancies. This helps minimize the potential for bias or errors in the selection process. - Line 115: The exclusion criteria in the PRISMA flowchart (after retrieval) should match the exclusion criteria in the methods section. As I read, the exclusion in the methods were study type, study measure, study population and study outcome but not study setting. You should fully mention the actual exclusion (As shown by PRISMA chart) in the methods section. Risk of Bias: - Line 231: The authors should avoid speculation about the results in this section ( “…mostly due to possible misclassification bias…”). The justification for the medium risk of bias should be completely transferred to the discussion section followed by explanation and citations from the appropriate source. Outcome results: - I suggest starting this section with the main results of outcomes (line 249) and then mentioning the opposing result from the other study (small study). - Line 246: The opposing result about one study has been reported by the authors, but the explanation should be omitted from here and be transferred to discussion. - Line 253: This line includes an important claim about the association of disabilities with the worse outcomes in cancer patients. However, the reader needs to see the reported numbers from three cited articles that support this claim. Moreover, this claim is missing an important assumption: the heterogeneity of outcome measures in the reported articles. Which is only assessable via visual, statistical assessment and subgroup analysis of the study outcomes. - Line 255: “…with a large portion of that disparity not justifiable on the basis of rational clinical decisions”. I do not find this claim to be true based on the findings of this manuscript. Please add extra details here to support this claim. - Line 263: It would be great to limit the outcome reports about the opposing study to actual findings of the study and consider moving the suggestions about these findings to the discussion section. - Same for lines 269, 289. Discussion: The discussion section is comprehensive, Including all the necessary concerns about the findings of the study. However, few points need to be addressed: - Line 318: This line includes a very long sentence, which is hard to read. Please consider dividing it to smaller sections. - The limitation about lack of independent screening should be addressed in the discussion or the screening needs to be performed by another person independently. Figure 1: - I suggest omitting the word “Wrong” in the excluded reports, since it might lead to misconception about the content of the excluded studies. Table 2: A few points to consider in the table 2 are: - The overall quality of the table is acceptable; however, I suggest that all the abbreviations in the table be fully mentioned right below the table to make them understandable for the readers. Some of these abbreviations include: IR , OR, PWD, aHR IRR, SMR and etc. - I suggest specifying the type/s of disability to this table and changing the title accordingly. This is additional to the data extraction table (Table 1 Supplement1). - Some proofing notes to consider: - Line 216: All the abbreviations in the manuscript must be fully mentioned the first time they appear in the text. - Line 75 vs line 77: The citations in the manuscript should follow the same pattern through the manuscript (before or after the “.”) . Please apply the same pattern for all citations in the text according to previously published articles in PLOS One. - Table 2 : lezzoni study : “disabilities”, Kaneshiro study : “Invasiveness”, Shinden study : “Postoperativ-e” + change “postop” to postoperative. - Line 422 : “enroll” Thank you for submitting this article, I hope that the suggestions can improve the overall quality of your valuable research. Reviewer #2: This systematic review aimed to bridge an existing gap in the literature by conducting a comprehensive analysis of studies spanning a period of over two decades, addressing issues ranging from inadequate training of healthcare workers to the necessity for more inclusive clinical trials. Nevertheless, there are minor aspects of the study that necessitate additional clarification and improvement before considering the manuscript for publication. I have outlined these points in the comments provided below: 1. Abstract: The abstract provides a concise summary of the systematic review article. It effectively presents the background, methods, results, and discussion. However, I suggest including more specific details on the inclusion and exclusion criteria applied in the systematic review to enhance transparency and replicability. Additionally, it would be beneficial to briefly discuss the implications of the findings and potential strategies for addressing the identified disparities in cancer care for people with disabilities. 2. Introduction: The introduction provides a broad overview of the topic, highlighting the burden of cancer, the importance of accurate diagnosis and access to appropriate treatment, and the disparities faced by people with disabilities. I suggest providing some statistics to support the statements regarding the disparities in the use of cancer prevention services and lower cancer screening rates as factors contributing to higher mortality rates in people with disabilities. Also, consider emphasizing the potential impact of addressing healthcare disparities for people with disabilities on overall health outcomes and mortality rates. 3. Methods: The methods section provides a detailed systematic review process. However, consider discussing any efforts made to minimize publication bias. Additionally, it would be beneficial for the authors to provide a brief rationale for excluding non-English studies. Regarding the risk of bias assessment, report how many reviewers assessed the risk of bias in each study. 4. Results: The results section provides a comprehensive overview of the findings from the systematic review. It covers the study selection process, characteristics of included studies, types of disabilities and cancer, outcomes assessed, risk of bias assessment, and specific results for each outcome. It would be helpful to discuss if there were any patterns or differences in outcomes among the different types of disabilities or cancers. Are there certain subgroups within disabilities or cancer types that experience more significant disparities in cancer care? What about the clinical significance of the findings? How do these disparities in cancer care for people with disabilities impact patient outcomes, quality of life, and healthcare delivery? 5. Discussion: I suggest that the authors explicitly mention the gaps in knowledge or research questions that remain unanswered based on the findings of this study. Also, consider discussing strategies for promoting the inclusion of people with disabilities in clinical trials and highlight the challenges that exist in communication and partnership between healthcare providers and individuals with disabilities. Overall, this systematic review article appears to be well-structured, with a comprehensive search strategy, a clear presentation of results, and a thoughtful discussion of limitations. The findings have significant implications for healthcare policies and practices, particularly in addressing the disparities in cancer care for individuals with disabilities. I would recommend that the authors continue with the manuscript submission process while addressing the minor comments and suggestions for improvement mentioned above. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Amirhossein Parsaei Reviewer #2: Yes: Parinaz Paranjkhoo, MD, MPH ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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PONE-D-23-10494R1Do people with disabilities experience disparities in cancer care? A systematic reviewPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Tosetti, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please follow the provided comments to reformat the manuscript to meet the journal requirements. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 08 2023 11:59PM If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Sina Azadnajafabad, MD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: The manuscript needs edits regarding the manuscript formatting and sections of the paper according to the Plos One requirements. Also, the referencing format is not according to the journal style, besides the errors evident in the number of cited manuscript which need a major revision. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for revising the manuscript according to the comments. All comments have been adressed in the revision. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. 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Do people with disabilities experience disparities in cancer care? A systematic review PONE-D-23-10494R2 Dear Dr. Tosetti, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Sina Azadnajafabad, MD, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-23-10494R2 Do people with disabilities experience disparities in cancer care? A systematic review Dear Dr. Tosetti: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Sina Azadnajafabad Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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