Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 28, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-32202One in five pregnant women had optimal access to ANC in Ethiopia: Multilevel mixed effect analysis of nationally representative cross sectional surveyPLOS ONE Dear Dr.Negash, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please, see the reviewer comments below. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 26 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study "One in five pregnant women had optimal access to ANC in Ethiopia: Multilevel mixed effect analysis of nationally representative cross sectional survey" showed that optimal access to antenatal care, such as first visit in the first trimester, four or more visits and a skilled health care provider, can significantly reduce maternal mortality in an inclusive manner. They also relate access to ANC to factors such as women's education, rural or urban location, age and country regions which offers a more comprehensive picture of the benefits of antenatal care. This is relevant to show the Ethiopian authorities the importance of improving the care centers, as well as the specialists in these centers, in order to reduce malnutrition, stillbirths, maternal mortality, and neonatal mortality. In spite of that there are previous studies with similar focus, and methodology such as "Tegegne, T. K., Chojenta, C., Getachew, T., Smith, R., & Loxton, D. (2019). Antenatal care use in Ethiopia: a spatial and multilevel analysis. BMC pregnancy and childbirth, 19(1), 1-16". In my opinion, the fact that the authors included the variables such as: time of first ANC visit and type of ANC provider it may offer a better picture of the benefits of Antenatal care and offer characteristics that the government of Ethiopia should prioritise in the care of pregnant mothers and new-borns. The manuscript is well prepared, but there are some minor corrections that need to be carried out, which are outlined below. The introduction is appropriate and focuses on the scope of the study. The methodology is well described, indicating how the dependent variable "optimal ANC access" was obtained, and the different levels of the dependent variables. In addition, multilevel logistic regression is adequate to analyse the association between the dependent variables and the independent variables. Likewise, multilevel mixed-effects logistic regression is suitable for evaluating the association between the optimal access to ANC and the independent variables. However, it is important to detail which variables were considered as fixed and mixed effects. In addition, i would only suggest that the odd-ratio be presented in a forest plot and the intra-class correlation coefficient in a scatterplot. The discussion is also adequate, addressing each of the variables analysed and their odd ratio to optimal access to ANC. Minor considerations Line 166. - Please indicate on this line that the result of this logistic regression is presented in Table 1. Line 169. - 170. - The authors mention that the graph of optimal ANC access among women of reproductive age was presented, but this graph is not indicated in the manuscript, nor is it indicated whether the graph is in the supplementary material. Line 177 - 178.- Indicate which variables were considered as fixed effect and random effect in the final model. Line 194 - 197.- I suggest for a better understanding that in this section you include the variables that were considered in the final model and create a table showing only the models and their goodness-of-fit values for each of the three proposed models. Line 207. - I do not understand why the authors place table 1 inside the manuscript and table 2 in the tables (Line 503) and figures section. Please correct this. Line 222.- I believe you are referring to the range of pregnant women 35-49 years of age. Line 223.- I believe you are referring to the range of pregnant women 15-24 years of age. Line 594.- I suggest that only the results of the final model be presented in Table 2 for a clearer presentation of the results. Since it is assumed that the other models are not considered and the data presented are not discussed. Another option would still be to keep this entire table 2, but in the supplementary material section. Reviewer #2: Review response for the title ‘’One in five pregnant women had optimal access to ANC in Ethiopia: Multilevel mixed effect analysis of nationally representative cross-sectional survey’’ By Biresaw Ayen Tegege Dear inviter Dr. Tesera Bitew, Thank you for giving me the opportunity to review this manuscript. Dear authors Thank you very much for your effort and relevant analysis in the field of Optimal ANC access in Ethiopia. Please find my suggestions for major revisions below. Step-by-step suggestions: Major points 1.Title: your title seems the result of study, it would be good if you can say the magnitude of optimal access to ANC and its predictors in Ethiopia: Multilevel mixed effect analysis of nationally representative cross-sectional survey. 2016 WHO ANC model recommended minimum of eight ANC visits but you want to investigate on under dated and limited outcome (4 and above). Why? So that it is difficult to conclude as 20 %had optimal access to ANC. Furthermore, your title is not inline with your objective, please make it inline 2. Keywords: you have used key words like Factors…..but It is better to avoid such terms. 3. Result Your table 1 has showed that the association is only descriptive and vague Could you able to present all Models with its respective adjusted odds ratio in tabular form????? I could not find table 2 in the result section You wrote table 1 at result section and table 2 at the end why? Can you please reform tables as individual and community level variables? 5. Discussion Writing number, % …. not important here since it has been written at result section 6. Limitation It would be good if you write the use of four and above ANC access as cut point in your study as limitation. 7. Recommendation Your recommendation is inside the conclusion, can you write the heading as conclusion and recommendation? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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Magnitude of optimal access to ANC and its predictors in Ethiopia: Multilevel mixed effect analysis of nationally representative cross-sectional survey PONE-D-22-32202R1 Dear Dr. Negash, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mulu Tiruneh Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have resolved the observations arising from the first revision. The manuscript has improved considerably and I consider it appropriate for journal publication. I have no other considerations. Reviewer #2: I want to appreciate the efforts made by the authors to address the raised questions! well addressed and thank you! ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-32202R1 Magnitude of optimal access to ANC and its predictors in Ethiopia: Multilevel mixed effect analysis of nationally representative cross-sectional survey Dear Dr. Negash: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Mr Mulu Tiruneh Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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