Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 20, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-34819Ethical considerations in the prehospital treatment of out-of-hospital cardiac arrest: a multi-centre, qualitative studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Milling, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 30 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: An interesting and potentially important contribution to the limited literature available on complex decision making by clinicians in the course of OHCA. The qualitative methodology provides an effective mechanism to explore decision making in ways which are more commonly enumerated, thus limiting insight into the difficulties faced by clinicians. Issues for clarification; 1. The 'observation guide' and 'field notes' instruments are not described or included. Both are relevant and should be included in an appendix. 2. No research ethics approval has been sought or granted for this study, based on the authors view that Danish law does not require approval in such studies. This contention will have to be supported, as it seems unlikely that observational, qualitative research of this nature is immune from ethical considerations. The study otherwise appears to conform rigorously to the approaches required for this work 3. The presence of the researcher on scene during the OHCAs is described as 'author LM balanced between moderate and active participation alternating between the insider and outsider perspectives'. Please explain what this means, the extent of your involvement in individual cases and the potential for you to have influenced participants or case management or to no longer be regarded as an independent researcher by the study subjects. This is a particularly important issue given the qualitative format of the data collection following each incident. 4. How many interviews were carried out, relating to how many OHCAs? 5. The thematic analysis identifies interesting and important issues, well illustrated with appropriate quotes, which will resonate with clinicians involved in such care. Many observations are personal but raise issues such as the extent to which doctors believe their own values should dictate care, the value of DNACPR ' advance directives or the real-work experience of team working. While the discussion summarises these and other issues, it does little to explore their meaning within the broader healthcare system or the implications for e.g. training, discussion with family members (or patients considering DNACPR orders) or if more collaborative decision making on scene has a role. 5. Is there an operational 'learning process' in place for doctors, paramedics etc following these cases e.g. hot or cold debriefing, lessons learned, system learning issues, case reviews, CISM etc? Burnout among clinicians exposed to these stressors on a regular basis has to be more likely if their frustrations e.g. with nursing home advance care directives are not seen to be addressed. An implication from the description of the EMS system is that doctors and paramedics train separately and meet only at clinical incidents - is training an issue to explore in the discussion. 6. Some reflection on future research steps is contained in the discussion - the authors might consider expanding on this in view of some of the issues above. 7. There are a small number of typos in the text - full proofing required. Would suggest changing 'end-of-life' to 'end-of-life care' where relevant. Reviewer #2: I read this paper with interest. However, I would require greater clarity on the qualitative methods employed in this study, moreover, there are gaps in the link between the theoretical framework employed, study methods, and study findings. Specific comments: 1. "By comparison, out-of-hospital resuscitation is characterized by time pressure and a lack of peer consultation and background information" - I am not sure the ethical dilemmas implied by the authors are well articulated. When reading the introduction, the sense I get is in fact that paramedics should just commence resuscitation when in doubt, especially given the lack of information and time-sensitive nature of out-of-hospital cardiac arrests. Most countries also have Good Samaritan laws that provide protection against liability for paramedics, EMTs and bystanders at the scene of an emergency or while en route to a hospital from an emergency, they will not be held legally responsible for acting or failing to act. The introduction section is also too brief at the moment. I suggest the authors give more concrete examples of the ethical dilemmas in the introduction to provide context to their study. 2. How far apart were the six different MECU bases? 3. Given the centrality of the theory of bioethics in resuscitation as a theoretical framework for analysing the study findings, this should also have been laid out in the introduction section for readers to appreciate the context of the study. Why is the aforementioned theory an appropriate theoretical frame to understand your chosen data source? 4. In terms of the methods, what type of specific qualitative method did the authors employ? What was the coding cycle? How did you arrive at themes? What was the intercoder reliability in terms of deciding which topics related to which theme? 5. I am not really following the themes of the study. When reading the verbatims, I get the feeling that age of the person in arrest is a more critical influencing factor and this could stem from ageism bias (which is not uncommon in healthcare when have mental idea or explicit cutoffs for treatment or resource allocation), perceived notion that death of a young and otherwise healthy individual is unnatural versus very old person dying from natural, age-related causes, and overall perceived burden on society (biomedical/ethical principle of justice and equity). All these quotes demonstrate this idea, e.g. "But then again it’s mostly in cases where it’s “young people anyway”, who we’d go full throttle on and transport. I will be a part of that. I wouldn’t have a problem with it", "If you’re like 25 years old and you have ventricular fibrillation, ventricular fibrillation, and ventricular fibrillation… And then you have asystole or something like that… Then I would transport you to the hospital" and "He goes to work, and he has 25-30 years left of the job market. That’s totally recouped", but they were classified under different themes. I am not really following or convinced by the analysis presented by the paper. 6. It may be more straightforward to categorise your themes according to the four basic tenets of biomedical ethics. Bioethicists often refer to the four basic principles of health care ethics when evaluating the merits and difficulties of medical procedures. Ideally, for a medical practice to be considered "ethical", it must respect all four of these principles: autonomy, justice, beneficence, and non-maleficence. 7. "Expectations of poor survival and quality of life in old patients ..." - are these expectations not reasonable? Even when EMS was activated promptly, the rate of survival to discharge among EMS-treated OHCA patients was approximately only 10% (citation: pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/25676321). Given that OHCAs have poor survival as a whole, and that multivariate analysis has demonstrated that each yearly increment in age decreased the probability of survival to hospital discharge by 2% (citation: ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5805233), it is important to have a more robust discussion about the implicit and explicit issues herein. 8. "...studies have described factors such as the location of the cardiac arrest" - it is important to mention that arrest in residential settings and high-rise buildings have been invariably associated with poorer outcomes (citation: ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC8539960). 9. "Applying advance care planning in a wider context both medical and societal could address another challenge mentioned by the physicians in our study" - it is important to mention the caveat that the awareness and uptake rates of ACP have been low, even in developed countries (citation: pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/28417132). 10. No discussion of ethics is complete without an accompanying discussion of the legal framework. Based on my understanding of the Danish law, under the Danish penal code, "all persons must provide aid to the best of their ability to any person who appears to be lifeless or in mortal danger, must alert authorities or take similar steps to prevent impending disasters that could cause loss of life, must comply with all reasonable requests of assistance by a public authority when a person's life, health or well-being is at stake, and must, if they learn of a planned crime against the state, human life or well-being, or significant public goods, do everything in their power to prevent or mitigate the crime, including but not limited to reporting it to authorities, in all cases provided that acting would not incur particular danger or personal sacrifice." Would this not influence the decision-making of first-responders given the law compels them to act? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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