Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 22, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-35092The impact of tinnitus on adult cochlear implant recipients: a mixed-method approachPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Assouly, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 06 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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We will update your Data Availability statement to reflect the information you provide in your cover letter. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper. The subject is of interest, where CI users experience with tinnitus is being explored. The following aspects require clarification/ modifications; General 1. The conclusion in the abstract should talk about key findings and not generic aspects 2. The secondary aim of looking at prevalence is not matching with the study design and is more of a profiling . This must be clarified. 3. Since the study is aligned to the use of a platform related to a particular company, how was bias avoided? what measures were taken? Method 1. The design is mixed methods, with a qualitative and quantitative component. But the format of a forum discussion is not clear. Is there any reference for this method? how is it conducted when used as a research tool? 2. The qualitative study needs a theoretical framework, what guidelines were used to conduct and report? e.g. COREQ? 3. What were the interview / discussion guides? probes? 4. What was the level of training received by the interviewers/ discussion moderators 5. How was the data coded? manually? or software? need detailed description for these 6. Was deductive or inductive approach used to analyse the themes? 7. ICF is a framework that could have been considered since it is aligned to the aspects being explored in the study. Why were so many other questionnaires used instead? rationale is required 8. Were the subjects who participated in survey and forum mutually exclusive? or overlapping? to what extent? 9. Data analysis is written in future tense 10. Statistical analysis: Validation of new tool (survey) should be using factor analysis, PCA or discriminant values. Cognitive interviews are not suited as primary validation methods. Results 1. The results of the qualitative aspect is unusual with only quotes. Normally, the results are summarised and only few quotes are mentioned as examples. This is not in a readable format. 2. The results are extensive as it covers two almost independent aspects of the study. This does not do justice to either parts of the study in the current format. This paper can be split into two independent papers to do justice to each part with adequate details on method and results. Reviewer #2: Review for: The impact of tinnitus on adult cochlear implant recipients: a mixed-method approach Submitted to PLOS ONE Manuscript Number: PONE-D-22-35092 Comments to the associate editor Thank you for the opportunity to review this article. The motivation for the study is convincing and has good clinical implication. The paper has good writing. I do believe that if revised with minor changes such a paper will add value to the existing literature. With this intent, my review here attempts to highlight some of the key issues and indicate the errors that are reflected in the writing. I sincerely hope that the authors find this helpful in refining their manuscript. Summary The objective of this study was to evaluate the impact of tinnitus in CI recipients. The authors have derived four themes based on discussion in a web-based online forum. A survey was developed under tinnitus experience, situations impacting tinnitus, difficulties associated with tinnitus and tinnitus management. The results showed that tinnitus was of moderate degree with no sound processor and tinnitus was not a problem with sound processor. Overall Impression (General Comments) The strength of the manuscript is the motivation of the study and the flow in writing. The introduction section is adequate. The participants, materials and procedures are explained well. However, the main drawback of the study is the small number of participants used for validation of the survey questionnaire. Detailed review • Title: Adequate Abstract: • Well written Main script: Introduction: o Adequate Method: • The sentence in page no. 7 ‘The number of questions on the sub-themes to be included in the survey was determined based on the number of sub-themes distracted from the quantitative analysis’ is not clear. • The sample size, other participant details such as age range, the device details etc may be given in the method section. Results and discussion: • In page no. 23, Line nos 440 and 441: It is mentioned that ‘Without sound processor, group conversation and hearing difficulties were the most frequently reported, with a median score of 4, followed by difficulties in listening to radio or TV, concentration difficulties and stress, with a median score of 3’. The hearing and listening difficulties are expected to be poorer without the sound processor even in the absence of tinnitus. Authors have given this as a limitation of the study. However, even other aspects (given in Table 5) like stress, anger, anxiety etc. are also expected to be more without the sound processor in the absence of tinnitus. • In my opinion, the participant details should be given in the method section • Page no. 32, Line no 573: ‘All these results does emphasize’ may be changed to ‘All these results do emphasize’ • Did all the participants own a CI from the same manufacturers? • Was there an association between the type of speech processor and tinnitus impact?. • Was the tinnitus always present in the implanted ear? • What about the duration usage of sound processor? Figures: • Figure 1 is not clear and the font in Figure 2 is not visible. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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The impact of tinnitus on adult cochlear implant recipients: a mixed-method approach PONE-D-22-35092R1 Dear Dr. Assouly, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: 1. There is a knowledge gap regarding the loudness and pitch matching of tinnitus pre and post tinnitus management. 2. Duration of tinnitus experienced by the patient isn't clearly mentioned. 3. Gender specific management outcome isn't explained clearly. 4. Point no. 71 , sentence formation can be improvised for more meaningful outcome. 5. Table 1, Demographic data , Hearing loss (H/L) type can also be written in this manner - (a) H/L in one ear, normal hearing sensitivity in other, (b) Symmetrical hearing loss, (c) Bilateral H/L (one ear affected more than other) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: Yes: Archana Gupta ********** |
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PONE-D-22-35092R1 The impact of tinnitus on adult cochlear implant recipients: a mixed-method approach Dear Dr. Assouly: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Prashanth Prabhu Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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