Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 25, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-35295Acute effects of the FIFA11+ and Football+ warm ups on motor performance. A crossover randomized controlled trial.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Asgari, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR:Dear authors, The work is interesting but in the current form, there are several issues that need to be addressed before further consideration. Indeed, there are some important issues that may lead to rejection. Even so, I believe that it is more correct and ethical to give a chance for authors to explain. Thus, I suggest major revisions. Please address and answer all comments made by the three reviewers. Thank you BR ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 02 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Rafael Franco Soares Oliveira Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: When submitting your revision, we need you to address these additional requirements. 1. Please ensure that your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's style requirements, including those for file naming. The PLOS ONE style templates can be found at https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/file?id=wjVg/PLOSOne_formatting_sample_main_body.pdf and 2. Please include your full ethics statement in the ‘Methods’ section of your manuscript file. In your statement, please include the full name of the IRB or ethics committee who approved or waived your study, as well as whether or not you obtained informed written or verbal consent. If consent was waived for your study, please include this information in your statement as well. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review this article. The paper addresses a novel under-researched area, which has the potential to provide useful recommendations for coaches. However, there are some questions that need to be addressed to the manuscript. Specific comments are provided below: ABSTRACT Remove “SPSS V.29” KEYWORDS Change the keywords that match in the title (line 26) INTRODUCTION His study focuses on men and women. However, the introduction does not distinguish between the two genders. Please clarify this. Also, please update the references and include the results of meta-analyses related to this topic. Male or female? (sentence 2, pag 3) Add references (sentence 4, pag 3) Add results of all studies included in the second paragraph METHODS Participants Why four participants dropped out during the study period? Add it Performance tests What kind of boots did you use the participants during performance tests? Include the height of time gates Statistical analyses Please divide the sample by gender and perform the statistical analysis. The second paragraph of this sections should be in the results section. Change it. RESULTS Include Cohen's d values in table 1. DISCUSSION Add a paragraph with the limits of the study and possible future studies. CONCLUSIONS There is not a proper conclusion where the main findings are highlighted. Add guidelines on how relevant are the findings of your study for physical trainer APPENDIX 1. Is it possible to represent each exercise as a figure? That would help the reader to understand it better Reviewer #2: First, I would like to congratulate the authors for the pertinence of the study. I will, however, present some suggestions for improvement: - Abstract must comply with the rules of the journal - Introduction: Refer what the present study adds to existing knowledge. The objectives must be clarified. According to what exists, is it not possible to establish hypotheses? Methodology: Interventions - I suggest pairing an illustration or table with the programs used. Results: Notes should be placed on abbreviations in the table. Improve the table so that all results are clearly displayed. Discussion: I suggest that results are not presented in the discussion. Authors should mention the limitations of the study and propose future investigations. Present the practical implications of the study. Review the formatting of references. Reviewer #3: Congratulations to the authors. The study has a simple method and findings section. The method section is not written in detail. Given the quality of the journal (my quarterly tranche Q1), I would like to reject the study. - The data collection process cannot be detailed. Where, by whom, and in what time of day the data (mornings???) were collected. It should be detailed. How was it applied to a total of 48 people? On different days? If 48 people practiced in the same session, waiting time during different tests may reduce the warming effect. What action was taken for this? The Experimental design should be illustrated? -11+ exercises are mentioned in the Interventions section. Like the Football+ programme, it should be presented in detail in the table. -What kind of advice was given to the athletes before the measurements (sleep, nutrition). should be explained. Why were men and women evaluated in the same group? Different tables can be created for both genders. In the study, two different protocols were tested on the participants. There could have been 3 different protocols in the study. That is, the Study could only have a control group in the form of general warm-up or jogging to determine the effect of other warm-up protocols according to control group. How the intensity of the exercise was adjusted during the both warm-up protocols in all participants. It should be disclosed. The discussion section is not detailed enough. Physiological mechanisms have not been adequately explained. Up-to-date resources are required. The study has a simple method and findings section. The method section is not written in detail. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Fernando Santos Reviewer #3: Yes: Halil İbrahim Ceylan ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-22-35295R1Acute effects of the FIFA11+ and Football+ warm ups on motor performance. A crossover randomized controlled trial.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Asgari, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR:Dear authors, Congratulations on the work already performed. Reviewers already recommended acceptance of your work, and I just have some minor suggestions to improve some parts. If you address them, the paper will be accepted in the next round: -in the 1st line abstract, authors stated that: "Few studies including small samples have addressed the acute effects of the 11+ on motor performance." However, I believe this sentence needs to change because in your limitations, authors also stated that "given that the sample size was relatively small, dividing the players based on gender resulted in nonsignificant and contradictory results." Therefore, please change the abstract; -authors also mentioned in abstract that "Contradictory results were found according to gender." This is not clear enough. Please be more precise. Authors should have in mind that abstract is like the cover letter of your work. Thus, it must be carefully written; -finally, in the hypothesis of the study, authors wrote that "Given the roughly intensive, soccer-specific and dynamic structure of the Football+ program, we assume that it results in superior acute performance compared to the 11+." This is also not clear enough. Therefore, please change and support your hypothesis with references. Thank you ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by 8 of April. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Rafael Franco Soares Oliveira Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Dear authors, Congratulations on the work already performed. Reviewers already recommended acceptance of your work, and I just have some minor suggestions to improve some parts. If you address them, the paper will be accepted in the next round: -in the 1st line abstract, authors stated that: "Few studies including small samples have addressed the acute effects of the 11+ on motor performance." However, I believe this sentence needs to change because in your limitations, authors also stated that "given that the sample size was relatively small, dividing the players based on gender resulted in nonsignificant and contradictory results." Therefore, please change the abstract; -authors also mentioned in abstract that "Contradictory results were found according to gender." This is not clear enough. Please be more precise. Authors should have in mind that abstract is like the cover letter of your work. Thus, it must be carefully written; -finally, in the hypothesis of the study, authors wrote that "Given the roughly intensive, soccer-specific and dynamic structure of the Football+ program, we assume that it results in superior acute performance compared to the 11+." This is also not clear enough. Therefore, please change and support your hypothesis with references. Thank you [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have taken my contributions into consideration in order to improve the level of the manuscript, which is interesting. Reviewer #2: The authors responded appropriately to the reviewer's comments, and the article is ready for publication. Reviewer #3: I examined the file. Authors made all revisions. Congratulations. The article is ready for publication. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Elena Mainer-Pardos Reviewer #2: Yes: Fernando Santos Reviewer #3: Yes: Halil İbrahim Ceylan ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Acute effects of the FIFA11+ and Football+ warm ups on motor performance. A crossover randomized controlled trial. PONE-D-22-35295R2 Dear Dr. Asgari, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Rafael Franco Soares Oliveira Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear authors, Thank you for following all suggestions. My recommendation is to accept your work. Congratulations! Best regards Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-35295R2 Acute effects of the FIFA11+ and Football+ warm-ups on motor performance. A crossover randomized controlled trial. Dear Dr. Asgari: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Prof Rafael Franco Soares Oliveira Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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