Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-07011Prevention practice and determinants of WHO recommended COVID-19 prevention measures among pregnant women attending antenatal care during the third wave of COVID-19 in eastern Ethiopia, 2021: an institutional-based cross-sectional studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Alemayehu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We apologize for the delay incurred on your submission. The manuscript has been evaluated by two reviewers, and their comments are available below. They mainly request additional information on methodological aspects of the study and presentation/discussion of the results. Could you please revise the manuscript to carefully address the concerns raised? Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 11 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Comments to the Authors This manuscript described “Prevention practice and determinants of WHO recommended COVID-19 prevention measures among pregnant women attending antenatal care during the third wave of COVID-19 in eastern Ethiopia, 2021: an institutional-based cross-sectional study” which is an important issue to assess the practice and predictors of COVID-19 prevention measures among more risky groups pregnant women particularly in the study area. Despite the interesting scope of the research, the manuscript needs minor revision by considering the comments written below. Title: The title is appropriate, but needs modification try to make SMART (it’s 30 words) Abstract A. Result: Please what is your outcome of interest? Good practice Vs Poor practice or WHO recommended COVID-19 preventive measures practice? Please include all significant predictors of practice of COVID-19 preventive measures B. Conclusion and recommendation: Make it short and correlate with the findings of the study. � Introduction 1. What makes your study differ from others; because your study also assessed level of practice towards COVID-19 preventive measures? 2. Please add recent study like…. Compliance of COVID-19 preventive measures among pregnant women….in Ethiopia � Methods 1. Is this study conducted at all 14 health facilities? If so, indicate the study was conducted at all 14 health facilities in Harari region ….. Under study setting section. 2. Eligibility Criteria: ……. and had the willingness to participate in the study were included. Do you think that you have conducted with correct sampling technique? …. This indicated that those pregnant women who were selected using the sampling technique and who were refused to participate were excluded in your study. That’s wrong; there is selection bias. 3. Why determined your sample size with 50%? Why not used studies conducted in Southern Ethiopia, Debre Berhan ….? 4. Write your Kth interval 5. Operational definitions and measurements: put your reference for your operational definition and write how you value respondents’ answer ‘‘for all knowledge, and practice questions participants who answered the “correct answer” or “Yes” were earned a “1 score”, whereas participants who gave the “wrong answer” or “No” were earned a “0 score” separately. � Result A. Please write all identified factors under section ‘‘Factors associated with WHO recommended COVID-19 Prevention practice’’ B. L196: The level of prevention practice among pregnant women was 61.6%… It’s not clear; please indicate the level of practice as Good Vs Poor practice??? � Discussion A. The discussion substantially needs rewriting; clear and logical justification B. Please use recent studies to compare and contrast….. � Conclusion: - Needs to be more punchy and to the point/ findings. Reviewer #2: Abstract Well written Background Lines 61-65: Could the authors kindly update the statistics! Lines 82-86: It would be great to compare the severity of COVID-19 statistics for pregnant women in African during the first and second waves! Methods Lines 167-172: What informed the authors decision to use the mean as a cut off points for good and poor knowledge/practice? That has to been backed with scientific evidence. Results Lines 208-217: Kindly report all odds ratios with their decimal points as in table 4. Lines 216-217: The interpretation is not accurate. It is 76% lower odds BUT NOT 76% times………. Authors should be consistent with the use of decimal points on the table and throughout the manuscript. They should either stick to one or two decimal points but not use both. Discussion Lines 250-252: Provide a citation to back the speculation. Lines 258-259: Provide a citation to back the speculation. Lines 262-263: The interpretation is incorrect. Kindly refer to table 4 to write the right interpretation. Lines 263-265: Provide a citation to back the speculation. Lines 267-271: Provide citations to back the speculations. Since this was an institutional-based cross-sectional study, it can only be generalized as such. This should be stated as one of the weaknesses of the study. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-22-07011R1Prevention practice and determinants of WHO recommended COVID-19 prevention measures among pregnant women attending antenatal care during the third wave of COVID-19 in eastern Ethiopia, 2021PLOS ONE Dear Astawus Alemayehu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR:
Please submit your revised manuscript by 2 January 2023. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for your response. More or less comments were addressed. Please, your topic needs modification to make SMART. Also, rewrite and cite your operational definitions. Reviewer #2: Introduction The authors insist on using outdated statistics for the introduction. This is not an acceptable practice of international standards in the research community. It is important for the authors to note that they are writing the manuscript to inform current and future policy, but not past policy. It is therefore most appropriate to use current statistics. They should kindly address my earlier two comments on the introduction. Methods Authors should kindly cite the scientific evidence used for the mean cut off point in the appropriate section of the manuscript. It is not enough to only write that on the response page. Results Table 4 still contain odds ratios with different decimal points. Please make sure all decimal points are uniform (i.e. one decimal point or two decimal points for all). Discussion The authors claim that their findings are novel hence they cannot cite them. I do not agree that these novel findings. But even if these are novel findings, the reasons behind those findings MUST be accompanied by reasonable scientific evidence. So I urge the authors to kindly do the needful and cite appropriately. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Mulualem Silesh Reviewer #2: Yes: Maxwell Tii Kumbeni ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. 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PONE-D-22-07011R2Determinants of WHO recommended COVID-19 prevention measures among pregnant women attending antenatal care during the third wave of COVID-19 in eastern Ethiopia, 2021PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Astawus, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 31 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Bereket Yakob, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Journal Requirements: Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: Dear Dr. Astawus, Thanks for submitting the revised manuscript! Before I make the final decision regarding your manuscript, I request that you address the following. 1. Your responses to the Financial Disclosure query was inadequate. Based on the statement you provided in the financial disclosure, it needs to be clarified whether the authors' views, the institutional views, or both were reflected in the manuscript. Suppose the institution provided funds for the study and did not influence methods and participant selection, analysis, interpretation, and conclusion; it can be assumed that the views are of the authors and that there was no conflict of interest in the study. However, you stated that the funder, the institution in your particular case, played in all critical phases of the study – which shows it had a substantial influence in the study, leading to the assumption that there was a conflict of interest. If the statement was inserted by mistake, please revise it or state the institution's positions (including the formal statements, citations, or policy documents) about the study subject and how it impacted the findings, interpretations, and conclusion. 2. You added a new author to the manuscript. Please provide justifications and how the new author meets the authorship criteria. 3. Page # I agree with Reviewer 2 that you should discuss the findings/ relationships between family size and occupation of pregnant women by leaving out the novelty concern, which is debatable. Your study had only 6 people in the “good” category, which is insufficient to make such a bold statement. Since you had a small sample size in that category, it could have been merged with the other category (5-9 people). Besides, Page# 13, lines 230-232, is unclear – the language needs improvement. Please rephrase it to convey the message. 4. In the abstract, methods section, discuss/ describe how you measured the outcome variable 5. Your manuscript needs proofreading and grammar check. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Determinants of WHO recommended COVID-19 prevention measures among pregnant women attending antenatal care during the third wave of COVID-19 in eastern Ethiopia, 2021 PONE-D-22-07011R3 Dear Astawus Alemayehu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Bereket Yakob, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-07011R3 Determinants of WHO recommended COVID-19 prevention measures among pregnant women attending antenatal care during the third wave of COVID-19 in eastern Ethiopia, 2021 Dear Dr. Alemayehu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Bereket Yakob Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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