Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 9, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-25165 Time to Diabetic Neuropathy and Its Predictors among Adult Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus Patients in Amhara Regional State Comprehensive Specialized Hospitals, Northwest Ethiopia, 2022: A Retrospective Follow up Study PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Alamneh, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 05 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The problem statement and rationale of the study were clear. The length of the introduction was appropriate compared to the length of the manuscript. Methods: The study design matches the study objectives. However, the time frame for participant enrolment and time frame for follow up need to be clearly stated. The type of oral antidiabetic therapy used to treat the patients should be specified bearing in mind that some antidiabetic drugs (e.g., metformin) promote development of neuropathy on chronic use. It is not clear why co-morbidities and biochemical markers such as blood glucose, cholesterol, and creatinine were only measured at baseline. Please provide justification for this! There was no mention of measurement of long-term glycemic control during the follow up period for a project that lasted more than 10 years!! Results: Table and figure titles should be separated from main text. In table 3, what is the basis for categorizing FBS based on a value of 200 mg/dl, cholesterol 200 mg/dl, and LDL 100 mg/dl? In table 3 still, total number with “proteinuria” was 145, while total number with “albuminuria” was 109. How did you distinguish between proteinuria and albuminuria? In table 4, explain RSMT (restricted mean survival time) as a footnote. Discussion: Interpretations of the findings and conclusions to be drawn from the data presented should consider the concerns raised in this review. References: Your list of references did not comply with PLOS One specifications (Vancouver style) and there are obvious errors in many of the entries. Reviewer #2: Overall interesting study. Time to Diabetic Neuropathy and Its Predictors among Adult Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus Patients in Amhara Regional State Comprehensive Specialized Hospitals, Northwest Ethiopia, 2022: A Retrospective Follow up Study. However, the manuscript does not provide a clear overview of their work. • Please make sure that the structure for citing published literature in the text, as well as the style of references in the References section, are consistent with the journal's style (see Instructions to Authors). • English language needs revision for style and syntax. • Abstract must be rewritten. I suggest focusing the abstract on your study and your results. • Include more characteristics of participants. • Please specify inclusion/exclusion criteria. The experimental protocol is not clear. • Please add the originality of the study and add hypothesis at the end of the introduction section. Be please be more specific. • Did authors perform other statistical analysis? Further details on statistical analysis are needed. Please be more specific. • Figure 2 (axis) not clear. Tables must be more representative • Please discuss the results of the study in relation to the previous studies. Reviewer #3: The study by Alamneh et al., titled ‘Time to diabetic neuropathy and its predictors among adult type 2 diabetes mellitus patients in Amhara Regional State Comprehensiv Specialized Hospitals, Northwest Ethiopia, 2022: A retrospective follow up study’ aimed to evaluate the time to diabetic neuropathy and its determinants. The authors analyzed data of 669 newly diagnosed with T2D during the 5 year enrollment period and followed up for a median 125 month. They found the overall incidence rate of diabetic neuropathy as 2.1 cases per 100 persons-year. They identified age (>60 years), diabetic retinopathy, anemia, hypertension, and hyperglycemia (FPG>200 mg/dl) as predictors of incident diabetic neuropathy. Major comments: 1. The manuscript should be written in a more fluent fashion and be more concise and comprehensive. There are too unnecessary repetitions, many grammatical errors, irrelevant decimals (for example instead of 179,45 months, an expression of 179 months may be easier and better for the reader). Overall, it needs an extensive editing 2. It seems that the definition of diabetic retinopathy is based on subjective, but not objective criteria (such as EMG). 3. What kind of anemia? Iron deficiency? Vitamin B 12 deficiency? Folate deficiency? Chronic disease anemia? Thalassemia trait? Sickle cell trait? 4. Were vitamin B12 levels measured? 5. What kind of oral treatments were used? Metformin? Sulfonylureas? Pioglitazone? SGLT2 inh? DPPIV inh.? 6. Was not Injectable GLP-1 analogues available during the study period? 7. What kind of insulins were used? Basal, basal-bolus, mixed? 8. Did the authors monitor glycemic status of the patients? For example, glycemic fluctuations are one of the major contributors to the diabetic neuropathy development. Was there hypoglycemia episodes during the study, did the authors consider this parameter when performing the analysis? ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Christian Chinyere Ezeala Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Time to Diabetic Neuropathy and Its Predictors among Adult Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus Patients in Amhara Regional State Comprehensive Specialized Hospitals, Northwest Ethiopia, 2022: A Retrospective Follow up Study PONE-D-22-25165R1 Dear Dr. %Bekalu Endalew Alamneh%, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, James Nyirenda Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-25165R1 Time to Diabetic Neuropathy and Its Predictors among Adult Type 2 Diabetes Mellitus Patients in Amhara Regional State Comprehensive Specialized Hospitals, Northwest Ethiopia, 2022: A Retrospective Follow up Study Dear Dr. Alamneh: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. James Nyirenda Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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