Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 31, 2021 |
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PONE-D-21-03374 Prescribing errors in a Brazilian teaching hospital: causes and underlying factors from the perspective of junior doctors PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bonella, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 11 2021 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include a copy of the interview guide used in the study, in both the original language and English, as Supporting Information, or include a citation if it has been published previously. Additional Editor Comments : Dear Authors Please include a section on how the rigor of the data analysis was ensured , and each quotes should have an anonymized details [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #2: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Originality: Analysis of prescribing errors caused by junior doctors have not been adequately evaluated in Brazil, therefore this study is original. Significance: Determining the burden and characteristics of prescribing errors is fundamental to designing appropriate measures in order to mitigate the risks and harms to the patients, especially a large number of violation errors were detected in this study. I agree that pharmacists’ perceptions during the support in clinical decisions when prescribing can increase the safety of medication uses. Methodology: There are some suggestions in methodology: (1). This study was conducted in one teaching hospital as compared with seven teaching hospitals as performed by Lewis PJ and Ashcroft DM et al. (2014) in UK, more similar study sites should be recruited to increase the generalizability. (2). Selection bias was likely to occur due to the no responses from the 632 junior doctors. The low response rate for the recruitment can be reduced when more study sites are employed. Also, surface mail for the invitation may be the other solution. (3). Independent assessors, both authors G and L were involved in the semi-structured interview that selection bias may occur. Instead, well-trained independent interviewers should be employed. Also, third external independent assessor should be used if there are discrepancies between authors G and L regarding the classifications of different types of prescription errors, unsafe acts and the latent and error-producing conditions. Accuracy and quality of results: Well organized table and figures were used for the data presentation. Annotation of the abbreviations of KBM and RBM should be used for Figure 1. Clarity and lucidity of presentation: The authors were able to provide plausible explanation for the results of this study. Since electronic prescription system constituted a remarkable number (n=29) of the error-producing conditions reported by junior doctors, enhancement of the prescription and electronic medical records can be mentioned at the discussion part. Adequacy of references: The references included are adequate. However some incorrect referencing numbers are found. Reviewer #2: Thank you for inviting me to review this manuscript which describes the prescribing errors in a brazilian teaching hospital. Overall, I find the manuscript somewhat confusing. The authors have used a qualitative approach to explore the causes of medication prescribing errors among junior doctors. However, the results presented are very quantitative. Table 1 and 2. The manuscript is also very wordy. The authors should consider cutting down on the number of words, and make their writing more concise. Introduction I like the model (i.e. Figure 1) which is used to explain the conceptual framework of this study. However, the authors tend to repeat what is in the figure as text. Please avoid this. Conceptual framework should be summarised, and jusitification for selecting this theory should be provided The authors should provide a stronger justification on why this work is needed. Note, that any abbreviations used in the figure (e.g. KBM) should be explained as a footnote. Aim should be changed to explore .... (rather than investigate - which is very quantitative) Methods Should use more subheadings in this section to aid reading. How was the topic guide developed? should include the questions asked as a table. Where's the rigour and reflexivity sections? Results Lines 235-242 should be presented as a table to decrease the number of words. Table 2: how did the authors collect this data? Did they use a survey form? Very quantitative results For a qualitative paper, I do not see what themes emerged from the participants. I only see a repetition of the conceptual framework (i.e. results are presented according to the conceptual framework). As such, I don't think the authors actually explored why the junior doctors made the prescribing errors. Also, the quotes do not have the annonymised details of the junior dr. My general impression is that the authors have not analysed their data in depth sufficiently for a qualitative study. Discussion Too wordy. Needs to be summarised. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: CHUI Chun Ming William Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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PONE-D-21-03374R1Prescribing errors in a brazilian teaching hospital: causes and underlying factors from the perspective of junior doctorsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Bonella, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 30 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Kind regards, Syed Ilyas Shehnaz Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: N/A Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. On the style of writing – agree with Reviewer 2 that the writing is lengthy while at the same time not easy to digest the messages that the investigators are trying to put across to readers. 2. Methodology – despite reading the article, it is not apparent from the account on the timeframe during which the interview with the junior doctors was performed. Was it over a year and the number of errors committed an annual figure? 3. Due to the initial nil response rate on the investigators’ email invitation, they elected to recruited interviewees at their workplace in person or by telephone. Was it a random selection taking into account only the recruitment of doctors from as diverse a background as possible? Otherwise, it could be argued that despite their busy work schedule, only those who have a lot of grievances to air would choose to be interviewed. 4. Was the reporting of errors by recalling from memory by the junior doctors or their peers only? This is subject to recall bias, and the number might not reflect the true magnitude. 5. What about reporting by other healthcare professionals such as nurses and pharmacists? 6. There were reports of many ‘Violations’ – defined as voluntary actions in which rules are ignored, such as not evaluating the patients before copying and repeating the last prescriptions. While this situation is definitely unsatisfactory, these were forced upon the junior doctors from insufficient allowance of adequate time for them to perform the many duties that they had to perform. Is it appropriate to talk about reprimanding the doctors rather than rectifying the work conditions? 7. Many comments from the junior doctors were included in the text. They were, however, shown as disjointed messages. By such presentation to the readers, not only that there seems a risk the comments were taken out of context, sometimes the messages themselves were not entirely clear in meaning. The investigators could just describe a system through which they would categorize these comments and present the categorized results. Reviewer #3: Thanks so much for letting review this revised manuscript. I've taken the time to read your responses to the reviewers as well as the manuscript itself. Overall, I think the paper still drifts into quantitative presentation when you have used an entirely qualitative approach. I hope these points are swift to address. 1) Please clarify how the prescribing errors reported in Table 1 were identified. Were these self reported by practitioners, or were they identified through another aspect of the study 2) How were the 40 approached clinicians identified? 3) Table 2 requires only the demography, and not the wider profile of prescribing errors. These aren't important to the analysis 4) Table 3 is unnecessary. 5) I suggest you review the COREC checklist for reporting of qualitative research to guide your manuscript. Most of it is done but there are some aspects omitted. 6) An aspect of the qualitative approach is how you as the analysts would assign the prescribing errors in Table 3 to one of Reason's latent factors. e.g. were omissions an RBM, KBM, slip/lapse or violation? 7) I find it interesting that you've decided you're using a phenomenological paradigm, but then use grounded approaches to your data analysis. As I read your manuscript I very much see a well designed thematic analysis approach (particularly as you have used the Framework approach to data management and analysis.) 8) With regards your analysis, what is your unit of analysis? 9) As I read your results and analysis I wonder if the analysis has been somewhat superficial. You have made a good descriptive presentation of errors grouped using Reason's approach, but then have considered error-producing conditions almost as a separate entity - this isn't really the right way to consider it (and indeed, Lewis et al. wove these provoking events into the typology of errors to give deep insight into what was going on...) Have a look at your data again and see if there's a relationship between, say, team and environment and RBMs and violations. 10) Please review some of the language that has permeated into the analysis. Page 22, Line 479 onward, there is very clear potential for attribution bias in some of the direct quotes used, and how that has been interpretted. Demanding that the site of study should be closed down and criminal accusations... may be related to teh passion and hyperbole of the participant but isn't wise to feature in a journal article that your employers will read and want to follow up on. Please consider how these can be paraphrased to retain the relevance to the study outcomes, and not embarass the host site. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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PONE-D-21-03374R2Prescribing errors in a Brazilian teaching hospital: causes and underlying factors from the perspective of junior doctors Dear Dr. Bonella, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 20 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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PONE-D-21-03374R3 Prescribing errors in a Brazilian teaching hospital: causes and underlying factors from the perspective of junior doctors Dear Dr. Bonella: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Deema Jaber Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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