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PONE-D-22-29695Social perception of mesocarnivores within hunting areas differs from actual species abundancePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Suárez de Tangil, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 17 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include captions for your Supporting Information files at the end of your manuscript, and update any in-text citations to match accordingly. Please see our Supporting Information guidelines for more information: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/supporting-information. Additional Editor Comments: Two reviewers have perused the manuscript and differ widely in their recommended decision (Reject vs. Accept). Reviewer 1 in particular has excellent comments and suggestions. I therefore invite you to address all the comments of the reviewers as well as my comments below in a revised manuscript. Some of the targeted taxa are not mesocarnivore - they are small carnivores (e.g., de Satge et al. 2017 Oecologia 184(4):873-884). They should be classified accordingly throughout the manuscript. European rabbit vs. Iberian hare - can you tell the difference from tracks? I disagree that no studies have linked social and ecological data on carnivore distribution in conflict areas. There are many examples of socio-ecological systems and using traditional knowledge in conjunction with species distribution modelling for conflict-prone carnivores. Please add some citations to this effect. It would be very useful to add information on size of hunting areas and survey effort in a table. The calculation of the relative abundance does not seem to be the most appropriate - see for example comments from Reviewer 1. Please also consider changing the standardization of indices (see Reviewer 1's recommendations). Even better, if the data allow an occupancy analysis approach (incorporating detection probability), please replace the relative abundance indices calculations with occupancy analysis. A less favored alternative would be to keep the relative abundance indices, but to acknowledge their limitations. Records should not be pooled across field methods (e.g., in Table 2). Add scale bar (km) to panels in Fig. S2. This figure is important as it shows the sampling units and should be moved to the main manuscript. It shows a gradient of habitat types - from relatively intact habitats to agricultural areas - have you considered incorporating habitat types in the analysis as this will influence carnivore distribution? Fig. S4 (panel A) is also important to include in the main manuscript. Please credit the background satelite image in Fig. 1. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I have reviewed the manuscript entitled: “Social perception of mesocarnivores within hunting areas differs from actual species abundance”. The manuscript covers a very important topic in wildlife management and conservation. I have several concerns regarding the underlying assumptions and methodology though. These concerns are raised below. For the manuscript in question to make the claims it does, we need to know how reliable the so-called “real abundance” estimates are. This is because the study does not aim, for example, to compare two methods of detecting a species’ presence, but instead aims to examine how closely people’s perceptions of a species’ abundance match reality. Understandably, robust estimates of population abundance or density are not feasible for these species. Therefore, the use of a proxy is required. For the study in question, the authors use the number of detections (track, scat, or visual/opportunistic) as the basis for their relative abundance index. However, relative abundance indices that do not account for imperfect detection are known to be flawed measures that may produce biased or even spurious results. Since the underlying thesis of this study depends on the reliability of the field-sampling based abundance estimates, one must appreciate this limitation severely hinders the manuscript in question. On this criticism alone I would say the manuscript is dead-on-arrival. If I may ask, are the field data wholly unsuitable for occupancy analysis? Using occupancy probabilities derived from a model that accounts for imperfect detection to rank-order species would be better. Moving beyond the quality of the data, there is the issue of how the authors produced the relative abundance scores. The approach used seems arbitrary and I can imagine the study’s results will probably be sensitive to the scoring system used. Currently, the authors sum up the number of detections within a given hunting area and then divide each area’s total by the total number of detections within hunting area with the most detections. I imagine the authors could just as easily divide each hunting area’s total by the total number of detections from all hunting areas combined and that would presumably yield different results (though perhaps not that different since most detections come from one or two hunting areas). Likewise, the authors could easily average the number of detections across surveys within each hunting area and use hunting area averages instead of hunting area totals. I’m sure we can think up countless ways to score a species’ relative abundance, but I bring up the use of averages specifically for a reason. By totaling the number of detections across multiple surveys, the authors unintentionally bias their relative abundance estimates towards hunting areas with more surveys. Now this may not seem like an issue at first glance, since total population sizes likely scale with habitat area overall. However, population density does not necessarily scale with habitat area. Using the marten as an example, we get lower scores using the current ‘totals’ approach (CRE: 1, DBO: 1, GUA: 4, MEN: 1, ROB: 1, SER: 1, SFU: 2) compared to using the alternative ‘averages’ approach (CRE:2, DBO: 4, GUA: 4, MEN: 1, ROB: 1, SER: 1, SFU: 1). Why might this matter? For starters, the results of the author’s analyses will clearly be different (I cannot say how different though, perhaps only a little, perhaps a lot). This goes for both the distance analysis and simple comparisons such as L. 363-364. Second, the answers people provide during interview surveys are likely to be influenced by what they experience during their daily lives. Thus, we would expect there to be some spatial heterogeneity in how people score a species’ abundance. In other words, if someone spends most of their time in an area with many mongooses (i.e., a high local density), then they will probably rate mongooses as being very common even if that species is rare across the landscape overall. On this final note, why do the authors not present any results summarizing (1) interview-derived abundances broken-down by hunting area or (2) distance results broken-down by hunting area? Did the people in each hunting area differ in how they ranked a species’ abundance? Currently, the authors only compare hunters to non-hunters, and this may leave the reader wanting. The scoring system used to score interview-based abundances is similarly arbitrary and the results will also probably be sensitive to the scoring system used. Regarding the analyses. The use of Gower’s distance is an interesting choice considering the two abundance indices are (1) on relative scales and thus not directly comparable and (2) and their abundance values are sensitive to the rules used to assign abundance scores (which I noted previously). I think a rank-based correlation analysis (Spearman/Kendall) would overcome (1) and be more robust to (2). Was there any link between perceived abundance and attitude? In the abstract the authors mention an inverse relationship between relative abundance and human attitude, but I did not see this comparison during my reading of the manuscript. This comparison would be interesting, but I’m guessing there is little to no relationship here considering 93% of respondents said hunting was compatible with conservation and 86% agreed with mesocarnivor control. So I am confused by the statement in the abstract. Reviewer #2: This is an excellent paper and I am pleased to have been asked to review it. The level of prejudice surmised from the data is consistent with what has been reported elsewhere, namely in North America. I have a few comments that the authors may want to address: Line 177 - "local people were people inhabiting villages nearby the hunting areas". There could be a conflict of interest in these people's responses due to economic advantages associated with hunting. This might explain (in part) why the respondents considered that hunting was compatible with nature conservation (line 414). Lines 185-186 - Was consent given before answering the questions? If it was given or withheld afterward, then there is possibility of a bias. For example, if someone reviews the questions and realizes he/she cannot answer them, he/she may withhold his/her consent. So, the lack of knowledge may be higher than what is reported by the researchers. Statistical methods - what was the level of significance used? 0.05? Data reporting - Some graphic representation of the main results would be interesting, e.g., a comparison of hunters vs respondents, a comparison of observed vs expected data, etc. Line 414 - "respondents considered that hunting was compatible with nature conservation" = I think that the proportion of people agreeing with this conclusion would change if the survey for non-hunting respondents had been conducted in an area far from the hunting grounds, e.g. Madrid. However, the lack of ability in recognizing wildlife species may have been the same or lower. Lines 456-458 - This leads me to believe that the development of management programs should b conducted by wildlife professionals (namely biologists) who are aware of socio-economical realities. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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PONE-D-22-29695R1Social perception of mesocarnivores within hunting areas differs from actual species abundancePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Suárez de Tangil, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 17 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Social perception of mesocarnivores within hunting areas differs from actual species abundance PONE-D-22-29695R2 Dear Dr. Suárez de Tangil, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Bogdan Cristescu Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Congratulations on your paper. I have one comment that you can address at the proofs stage. Please ensure that the data in Table 3 is standardized per 4 km2 sampling unit. Modify the caption of Table 3 to make it clear that the data is presented per standardized sampling unit (4 km2). The caption of that table was a bit confusing, hence my earlier recommendation to ensure standardization. Reporting the data in the table per 4 km2 sampling unit, and specifying clearly in the table caption that reporting was done per 4 km2, will ensure clarity. |
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PONE-D-22-29695R2 Social perception of mesocarnivores within hunting areas differs from actual species abundance Dear Dr. Suárez de Tangil: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Bogdan Cristescu Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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