Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 5, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-00415Considerations in implementation of social risk factor screening and referral in maternal and infant care in Washington, DC: a qualitative studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Arem, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. In general, I agree with the reviewers comments. I would pay particular attention to describing who participate/included and who was not. Include response rates for all levels of staff and patients. It would also be helpful if the authors provided a descriptor of the employee with the representative quote (e.g., Employee -11, Senior Leadership). Finally, add in a discussion about who was represented in the study and the implications of representativeness in interpreting the results, generalizability, and future research. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 02 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I appreciate all your work but believe you need to address some significant issues in order to receive further publication consideration. My comments follow, not in any order of priority: 1.Abstract: results section seems too long. 2.Bacjground: I suggest you start with a more expanded paragraph on the problem with worldwide. U. S., and D C data on prevalence and consequences. That seems the best starting point. Then you can go to social determinants as "causes" or key factors. 3.Next you need a section titled Literature Review (LR) and a professional LR to establish your study addresses a gap in the LR. The LR should include: Research questions/hypotheses; databases and keywords used; time period covered by review; inclusion/exclusion criteria for selecting articles; total articles found; total articles reviewed; major findings , including named gaps. 4.Before Methods you need IRB approval, funding source, any researcher conflicts of interest, where and when the study was done. 5.Methods: You need citations to the five year project and when it began and current status. CBOs: spell out the full term the first time you use it. 6. Replace STUDY POPULATION with SAMPLE and SAMPLING PROCESS and better state the sample includes two subsets--employees and patiets and then for each, a better description of how you selected them--random? Seems it is convenience sampling which you should state and note also in a limitations section which you need at the end of the paper prior to any discussion. 7.Data Analysis: How did the coders resolve any differences? How did they move from coding to themes? Was anyone else involved? 8.Results: You need a subheading each for Screening and one for Referral, before the narratives on each. I actually am jot clear how relevant these results our to your core research questions. You might consider deleting them and having a very brief statement on screening and referral in the new Sampling section suggested above. 9. Results: Quantify instead of using words like Many or high proportion. 10. Results.: I suggest you have one results section on Patients; one on employees and one combined. The current format does not systematically allow an overall view and a view of each sample's perspectives. 11.As noted above, you need a Limitations section before your Discussion section. Reviewer #2: This was a compelling and well-written manuscript that used an innovated methodology to assess various perspectives on social needs screenings. The authors summarized their findings in a clear and concise way, allowing the reader to easily identify key points throughout. The manuscript is also strengthen by the populations represented--rather than only recruiting health care team members, including both the patient and CBO perspectives offers a more holistic understanding of the current state and opportunities for improvement. Because the sample size is small (which is not a limitation for this qualitative study), it would be helpful to understand more about who is included and who is not. Specifically, understanding response rates and whether the research team was able to achieve its goals of recruiting all levels of staff from each site, and whether more than 3 patients were recruited (and how many declined), would be helpful information at the beginning of the findings. Table 2 provides much of this information but it would be helpful to have some information about response rates in the body of the manuscript before findings are presented. In terms of who is not represented, it would also be worth the researchers pointing to the limitations of only recruiting English-speaking patients and potentially including a recommended next step of understanding the experiences of non-English-speaking patients in future research. This is a strong study that is ripe for publication given its methodological soundness and representation from multiple perspectives. Reviewer #3: This study presents important qualitative findings from using a multi-stakeholder design to identify the facilitators and barriers associated with social risk screening and referral processes within a single health system in a large urban setting. Intro In the sentence of paragraph 1 that refers to social needs, it may help to clarify socials needs as “…those social risk factors for which patients want help to address…” Methods In the Study Population section, in the 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence that describes the project leads, it refers to three levels, though there are only two listed: administrative and clinical. A diagram of the interview participant matrix would be helpful, to understand the various levels, clinics, specialties, and partner organizations that compose the sampling frame. In the Study Population section, in the 3rd paragraph: please clarify what type of screening for which the patient had to be eligible. For recruitment, please describe how many invites were sent and how many interviews completed. This will provide a response rate. It may be helpful to detail the social risk/need domains that were considered as part of this study. Results Adding some sub-headings to the first three paragraphs, as is done for the remainder of the results may help with clarity for readers. The results cover a wide range of domains/themes that are important. Would it be possible to list the role or department of the participant, instead of the participant ID (i.e., Employee 1)? It seems that this information may offer some context to support the response/quote. Another limitation to note is the focus on English-speaking participants Discussion The discussion nicely places the findings within the current literature and offers suggestions for future studies in this field ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Considerations in implementation of social risk factor screening and referral in maternal and infant care in Washington, DC: a qualitative study PONE-D-22-00415R1 Dear Dr. Arem, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #3: N/A Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #3: The authors have done a great job revising the manuscript based on reviewer feedback. The manuscript is quite rich with information, reflecting the value of qualitative research, and offers great insight into the processes associated with social risk screen/referral programs within a health care setting. The participant quotes offer excellent context. The authors provide a direction for future research, which is exactly what is needed on this scientific topic. Reviewer #4: This study, guided by the CFIR implementation framework, identified processes and organizational factors that were barriers or facilitators of implementation of screening and referral for social needs within maternal and infant care clinics in Washington, DC. This is a well-written manuscript that presents in-depth qualitative data on a topic of high national interest: social needs screening and referral to increase health equity. The findings of the paper are important, methods and analysis are rigorous, and conclusions follow logically from results. The authors appear to have been thoughtful and thorough in their response to the editor’s and reviewers’ prior comments. I find this revision to be polished and ready for publication. My only recommendation is that the authors consider whether they have or can follow the reporting standards from one of the two primary checklists for reporting qualitative research: COREQ (https://www.equator-network.org/reporting-guidelines/coreq/) or SRQR (https://www.equator-network.org/reporting-guidelines/srqr/). I think the authors already report all or nearly all of the checklist items. If possible, it would strengthen the paper to fulfill criteria for or the other and cite the checklist in the paper. Minor comments: 1. Just a thought for the authors to consider: I don’t think the inability to conduct interviews in person (due to COVID) was necessarily a limitation. As exemplified by this manuscript and many recent mixed-methods publications, virtually conducted interviews yield rich data and likely increase access and inclusion for diverse study participants. 2. Perhaps I missed something, but in the abstract the authors state they conducted interviews at 3 clinics and one community organization, and later 4 clinics are mentioned. Worth a double check that numbers are consistent. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #3: No Reviewer #4: No ********** |
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