Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-24696Recreational opium use as a risk factor for coronary artery disease: results from the premature coronary artery disease Milano-Iran (MIran) studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Maino, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 28 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript: A rebuttal letter that responds to each point raised by the academic editor and reviewer(s). You should upload this letter as a separate file labeled 'Response to Reviewers'.
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Distinction between cases and controls’ criteria and the justification behind choosing such factors is not clear. Effect modifiers like socioeconomic factors and personality trait etc. are not taken into account which might have skewed the result. Must follow STROBE guideline, since this is a case-control study. Also, variable selection for regression model using directed acyclic graph (DAG) analysis might avoid common pitfalls like treating a colloider variable as confounding variable and thus unintentionally introducing bias into the model. Reviewer #2: I would like to congratulate you on this manuscript. However, you should try to make it better before it could be published 1. Please include the IRB number. 2. Most likely CAG instead of CA, please check the international approach to the write. 3. Authors should improve their style of scientific writeup throughout the manuscript. English language correction is deemed necessary. Abstract: Pose-poses other cardiovascular risk- other cardiovascular risks Introduction: non-medical purpose- non-medical purposes demand for non-medical purpose- demand for non-medical purposes increase in their incidences- increase in their incidences Patient: belongs from- belong to Clinical variables data were- data was and from a confidential- and from a confidential one year habitually on- one year habitually at For the purpose of the present study- For the purpose of the present study Discussion: various routs of use- various routes of use Since the relative risk of CAD for hypertensive subject- Since the relative risk of CAD for the hypertensive subjects Conclusion: should help implementing- should help implement A. Introduction: 1. In 2016, according to the last World Drug Report- Any new update on 2021 or 2022 report, if present added this 2. In this line “There were about 19.4 million opiates users worldwide in 66 2016, roughly 0.4% of the population aged 15 to 64 years, with more than half of the 67 estimated number of annual opiate users residing in Asia” compare with latest WHO report of worldwide and check any more current update 3. Give some relationship between homocysteine, Increased plasma fibrinogen, plasminogen activator Inhibitor-1 (PAI-1), and opium and CVD. 4. The number of cardiac patients in Iran and around the world since the introduction and description are both compared in this part. B. Result: 1. To add how the current sample size was computed and details of the sampling procedure used and also the selection of control details. 2. To describe briefly how to select the variables for computing the logistic regression model. 3. How Confounders were identified? 4. Better to rework the result part. C. In the discussion part: 1. Add- the cardiovascular impact of opium and potential mechanisms of action, Compare this study with other studies from Europe, the Middle East, and Asia. 2. More work have to do also in the discussion part. Other comments: 1. Which Opium types are included (e.g: teriak, Sukhteh, and Shireh) all kindly give a slight description of this. 2. Any internal validation study has been performed in this population. 3. Any data for liver function tests that are available, if any, should be compared in the analysis. 4. The age group, BMI, and other relevant group relationships should be classified, if at all possible. Reviewer #3: Many studies have already found that opium use significantly increase cardiovascular events. The authors of the study featured an association of its use and CAD. The reviewer found that there are structural problems. Specific comments: 1. The analysis was performed after confirmation of CAD. Therefore, the study cannot show the relationship between CAD and opium intake. If the authors want to show that opium use might be a risk factor for CAD, they should prospectively collect data on differences in incidence of CAD between no-CAD subjects with and without opium intake, 2. The authors described that opium use is believed to protect from cardiovascular disorders in some areas of Asia. Please add references. Ref 7 (Gen Thorac Cardiovasc Surg. 2010;58:62) suggests that continued use of opium significantly predicts re-hospitalization with a cardiac cause after CABG surgery but not that opium use prevents CV events. 3. There are some spelling mistakes in the text (ex. line 192 ‘ischaemic hearth disease’). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Hideki ISHII ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. 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PONE-D-22-24696R1Recreational opium use as a risk factor for coronary artery disease: results from the premature coronary artery disease Milano-Iran (MIran) studyPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Maino, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ACADEMIC EDITOR: The authors are thanked for this submission to PLOS ONE. After a critical external peer review by three experts, I reinforce improving the clarity and presentation of your paper. Please see the attached reviewer comments detail below.
Please submit your revised manuscript by Feb 25 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Redoy Ranjan, MBBS, MRCSEd, Ch.M., MS (CV&TS), FACS Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: No ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: I Don't Know ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #4: This revised version has substantial improvements according to previous comments. I can make a number of specific comments: - Considering that opium, at least in Latin America, is considered a serious drug, in my opinion the term recreational for this kind of drug is dangerous and should be used. - I also contend the use of the term “premature”, since invasive detection of >50% stenosis does not represent premature disease. - I don’t understand the need for discrimination between logistic regression models 2 and 3. Indeed, regarding the models created, I suggest revision by an expert. Please provide a table with the results from the multivariate analysis using the different models and the HR of each variable within the model. - If you calculated a sample size for the control group of 1000 patients. Why did you include 2002? - In my opinion, the design of the study is somewhat odd, since you cannot be sure whether the subjects within the control group are free from CAD. Aside from that, why didn’t you match age and sex between groups? P values or confidence intervals should be provided for Table 1. - I believe that given such limitations regarding comparisons between groups, it might have been more appropriate using other design, maybe including only patients with suspected CAD within the MIran cohort and discriminating them according to extension indexes such as Leaman or Duke CAD indexes; or even evaluating opium use among patients with acute vs. stable coronary syndromes. - Please explain why the prevalence of opium consumption was so much higher than expected in the power calculation. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Saumitra Chakravarty Reviewer #2: Yes: Mohammad Ashraful Amin Reviewer #4: Yes: Gaston Rodriguez-Granillo ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. 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Opium as a risk factor for early-onset coronary artery disease: results from the Milano-Iran (MIran) study PONE-D-22-24696R2 Dear Dr. Maino, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Redoy Ranjan, MBBS, MRCSEd, Ch.M., MS (CV&TS), FACS Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors are thanked for this submission to PLOS ONE. After a critical external peer review by the experts and considering the overall reviewers' comments and authors' responses, your manuscript meets PLOS ONE's publication criteria; fulfils the methodological rigour and ethical standards. Reviewer's Responses to Questions 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed |
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PONE-D-22-24696R2 Opium as a risk factor for early-onset coronary artery disease: results from the Milano-Iran (MIran) study Dear Dr. Maino: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Redoy Ranjan Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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