February 2, 2023
Dear Editor,
Thank you very much for giving us the opportunity to revise our manuscript entitled
“Analysis of disease burden due to high body mass index in childhood asthma in China
and the USA based on the Global Burden of Disease Study 2019”. The manuscript ID is
PONE-D-22-30916. We would also like to thank the editorial board and all the reviewers
for their constructive and insightful comments, which helped us improve our manuscript.
We have ensured that all reviewer comments were adequately answered. For example,
in accordance with the suggestions given by Reviewer 1, we have enriched the content
of the “Introduction” and “Materials and methods” sections. As for the concerns raised
by the two reviewers and the editor, we have added a more in-depth discussion of the
prevalence, DALYs, and effect of the risk factor high BMI on disease burden of childhood
asthma in children in the USA. Responses to the reviewers’ comments are provided below
in a point-by-point manner. All the changes made are marked in red in the revised
manuscript. We hope that our revisions satisfactorily address all concerns raised
by the reviewers.
In addition, we reworked the files to confirm compliance with journal style requirements.
For example, our figure files have been corrected by the Preflight Analysis and Conversion
Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool. Besides, we have uploaded the data from this
study to a stable public repository. The data links are as follows: Zhang, C.Y. (Xiangya
Hospital Central South University) (2022): Epidemiological data on childhood asthma
in China and the United States. DANS. https://doi.org/10.17026/dans-zvj-qgp4.
We wish to thank you again for carefully reviewing and considering our manuscript.
Sincerely yours,
Chengyue Zhang
Response to Comments
Academic Editor
Dear authors, please revise your manuscript according to the referees’ and editor's
comments and upload the revised file. First thing is that you need to revise rationale
for a comparison of China and USA. You just mentioned that there is no such a study
and that you decided to do it, however, you have to state precisely why is it so important,
to make a comparison exactly between these two countries. Furthermore, the aims in
your Introduction section are mentioned twice and are not completely clear. Be sure
to define them accurately. Both reviewers indicated that the manuscript lacks in more
details on situation in USA. Further, try to provide more in-depth analysis throughout
the whole manuscript. Finally, please, double-check the reference number 22.
Response: Thank you for this comment. We have added a rationale for choosing China
and the USA for comparison, as well as a more in-depth discussion of the prevalence,
DALYs, and effect of the risk factor high BMI on disease burden of childhood asthma
in children in the USA. In addition, we apologize for not clearly expressing the objectives
in the “Introduction” section; thus, we have reordered the statements, expanded the
content, and optimized the “Introduction” section. For reference number 22, we apologize
for this error. We have checked the style of the cited reference and have made corrections.
Reviewer 1
Dear authors:
We are very grateful for your submission of the manuscript to Plos One. The research
topic is considered to be very interesting but the article requires an in-depth review
of the results and, in particular, a further discussion of childhood asthma in the
USA. Also, the introduction, materials and methods are not detailed enough.
Response: Thank you for your constructive comment. We have deepened the analysis of
the study results in the “Discussion” section, particularly by adding a discussion
of the disease burden of childhood asthma in American children. Our manuscript has
been revised as follows:
“Overall, the prevalence and DALYs of childhood asthma in the USA showed an increasing
trend from 1990 to 2019. Part of the reason for this is related to the significant
increase in the consumption of sugary drinks such as nutritional/energy drinks, juice
drinks, and sweet tea among American children, and sugary drinks are thought to be
associated with childhood asthma [1]. However, the upward trend of both indicators
from around 2010 to 2019 was significantly reduced compared to that in the period
from 2005 to 2009. The prevalence and DALYs of childhood asthma decreased in children
aged 1-4 years between 2010 and 2019. This may be related to the enactment of the
Clean Air Act amendments in 2011 and the Clean Power Plan in 2015 in the USA. In particular,
the Regional Greenhouse Gas Initiative (RGGI) has contributed significantly to the
reduction of greenhouse gases in the power sector and toxic air pollutants associated
with the onset of asthma, such as PM2.5, over the past decade [2]. Another possible
reason is that most US states enacted a tax on sugar-sweetened beverages (SSB) by
2010, which plays a role in reducing SSB-induced high BMI [3]. The prevalence and
DALYs of asthma were higher in children in the USA than in those in China. The main
reason may be related to the health hypothesis, indicating that less exposure to infection
during childhood may result in a greater chance of developing asthma later in life
[4]. YLLs in children in both countries account for a minimal proportion of DALYs,
and are associated with a very low mortality rate in children with asthma [5].
High BMI is a risk factor of great concern for childhood asthma [6]. Our study found
an increasing trend in DALYs due to high BMI and the ratio of DALYs rates to DALYs
rates due to high BMI in Chinese and American children with asthma. One reason for
this is that certain parents of children with asthma are concerned about exercise-induced
bronchoconstriction (EIB), and thus impose restrictions on the physical activities
of their children, consequently affecting weight management [7]. However, in reality,
exercise can increase lung function, promote cardiopulmonary fitness, and control
asthma [8]. Adequate warm-up before exercise is also recommended [9]. Another reason
is that children with high BMI are more inclined to consume a high-fat diet, which
can increase bronchial hyperresponsiveness and exacerbate the symptoms of asthma [10].
Positive effects of weight loss on asthma-related outcomes have been demonstrated
[11]. The latest Global Initiative for Asthma (GINA 2021) lists obesity as a modifiable
risk factor [6]. Since the global prevalence of high BMI is constantly rising, increasing
exercise and reducing high-fat food intake to control high BMI are necessary to reduce
the risk of asthma [12]. Although the DALYs rates due to high BMI and the ratio of
DALYs rates to DALYs rates due to high BMI were both higher in American children than
in Chinese children, the increasing trend of both indicators was significantly higher
in Chinese children of almost all ages than in American children. Chinese boys of
all ages had a higher percentage of high BMI than girls, which is consistent with
the findings of Guo et al. [13]. A study of disease burden, injury, and risk factors
by state in the USA from 1990 to 2016 found that high BMI was the most important risk
factor in the USA, and that exposure was steadily increasing [14]. They believe that
renewed efforts to control weight at the community level are important, and that controlling
high BMI needs to be a priority for all stakeholders such as physicians, nurses, policy
makers, patients, and families. Liu et al. found that the American government partially
eliminated the adverse effects of obesity on asthma by imposing a high-calorie tax,
increasing the proportion of nutritious food advertisements, banning the sale of soft
drinks, increasing opportunities and venues for physical activity, and implementing
better health care policies [15]. Therefore, it is recommended that high BMI be taken
more into account in the future development of policies for the prevention, control,
and treatment of childhood asthma. Moreover, we recommend that children reduce their
BMI by increasing physical activity and eating a healthy diet, which parents should
encourage and safeguard [16].
The prevalence, DALYs and DALYs due to high BMI were higher in boys than in girls
across all age groups in both countries. Boys also have a relatively narrow airway,
and are more inclined to vigorous exercise with their greater range of motion, and
thus, are more likely to get exposed to allergens. This corroborates the findings
of Ellie et al. that boys are more likely to develop allergic diseases than girls
based on blood-specific IgE assays and skin prick tests for common allergens [17].
In both China and the USA, the prevalence and DALYs were highest in the 5-9 years
age group. This could be due to the fact that children in this age group are at high
risk of upper respiratory tract infections because of their low self-management skills
and immune levels [13]. In addition, upper respiratory tract infections are important
triggers for asthma in children. Moreover, the YLLs for girls aged 10-14 years in
the USA have the highest levels than that for girls in the other groups, which is
considered to be associated with the increased levels of estrogen and progesterone
during the luteal phase in girls of this age group, resulting in increased inflammation
of the airway wall [18].” (Page 22, Line 249-261; Page 23, Line 262-283; Page 24,
Line 284-305; Page 25, Line 306-322)
In addition, we have expanded the “Introduction” and the “Materials and methods” sections.
Modifications in the “Introduction” section:
“Asthma is one of the most common chronic diseases in children, with wheezing, coughing,
and airflow restriction as clinical manifestations, affecting children's daily life
[19]. The incidence, prevalence, and medical costs of this disease have been increasing
in recent years [4, 20]. A survey revealed that the prevalence of asthma in Chinese
children increased from 0.91% to 2.12% between 1990 and 2010 [21]. Respiratory health
during early life may have a lifelong impact on lung health and life expectancy; thus,
prevention and control of childhood asthma is particularly crucial to promote individual
health and reduce the societal burden of the disease [22].
However, the etiology of childhood asthma is yet to be elucidated. Therefore, identifying
its risk factors and exploring possible mechanisms is necessary for early detection
and intervention to prevent further adverse outcomes [23]. Currently, reported risk
factors for asthma include genetic factors, tobacco exposure, dampness/humidity, animal
contact, climate, and inhalation of small particles [17, 23, 24]. High body mass index
(BMI), which is considered as the seventh-leading level 2 risk factor for attributable
disability-adjusted life years (DALYs) of diseases in 2019, is also a risk factor
for asthma [25]. It is thought to be associated with dietary habits, lifestyle, and
food intake [26].
There are differences in the prevalence and disease burden of asthma between developing
and developed countries [4]. The direct and indirect economic costs of childhood asthma
are high, and there is a link between the disease burden of asthma and the economic
level of the country [27]. It is well known that China is the largest developing country
in the world and that the United States of America (USA) is the major developed country
[28, 29]. However, to the best of our knowledge, there has been no comparative analysis
between China and the USA in these areas.
Thus, this study aimed to investigate the prevalence of asthma, DALYs, and the effect
of the risk factor high BMI on disease burden in children aged 1-14 years in China
and the USA, to compare and analyze the differences between them, to provide information
for resource allocation, and to learn from the prevention and control strategies of
developed countries such as the USA, which can provide some prevention and control
strategies to reduce the disease burden of childhood asthma in developing countries
such as China.” (Page 4, Line 48-68; Page 5, Line 69-85)
Modifications in the “Materials and methods” section:
“The GBD estimation process uses 86,249 sources that are broad and representative,
including censuses, household surveys, health service use, civil registration and
vital statistics, air pollution testing, etc.” (Page 6, Line 97-100)
“In this study, we obtained data on the prevalence, DALYs, YLDs, YLLs, and DALYs due
to high BMI of childhood asthma in children aged 1-14 years in China and the USA from
GBD 2019.” (Page 6, Line 106-108)
“All epidemiological data obtained were age-standardized to match the characteristics
of the different national reference populations and finally expressed in terms of
100,000 population [30].” (Page 6, Line 112; Page 7, Line 113-114)
“Comparing AAPC with 0, the curve shows an increasing or decreasing trend with 95%
CI not including 0 when the AAPC value is positive or negative. When the 95% CI of
AAPC includes 0, the value is stable.” (Page 7, Line 130-132)
Reviewer 2
General Comment
The authors have chosen an interesting study topic to quantify the disease burden
due to high body mass index in childhood asthma. The GDB methodology is currently
a very important approach to global descriptive epidemiology with the intention of
knowledge translation. Hence, the results of the GBD studies should be understandable
not only to the academic audience but also to the stakeholders and decision-makers
in the health policy domain. In this sense, all improvements to the text should enable
the achievement of these goals. There are no ethical issues concerning this paper.
Response: Thank you for this comment. We have added a more in-depth analysis of the
discussion, particularly on the disease burden of asthma in children in the USA. In
addition, we have added a description of American policies to prevent and control
childhood asthma and provided relevant recommendations for policy development in the
field of public health and for children's own measures to prevent the disease. Our
manuscript has been revised as follows:
“Overall, the prevalence and DALYs of childhood asthma in the USA showed an increasing
trend from 1990 to 2019. Part of the reason for this is related to the significant
increase in the consumption of sugary drinks such as nutritional/energy drinks, juice
drinks, and sweet tea among American children, and sugary drinks are thought to be
associated with childhood asthma [1]. However, the upward trend of both indicators
from around 2010 to 2019 was significantly reduced compared to that in the period
from 2005 to 2009. The prevalence and DALYs of childhood asthma decreased in children
aged 1-4 years between 2010 and 2019. This may be related to the enactment of the
Clean Air Act amendments in 2011 and the Clean Power Plan in 2015 in the USA. In particular,
the Regional Greenhouse Gas Initiative (RGGI) has contributed significantly to the
reduction of greenhouse gases in the power sector and toxic air pollutants associated
with the onset of asthma, such as PM2.5, over the past decade [2]. Another possible
reason is that most US states enacted a tax on sugar-sweetened beverages (SSB) by
2010, which plays a role in reducing SSB-induced high BMI [3]. The prevalence and
DALYs of asthma were higher in children in the USA than in those in China. The main
reason may be related to the health hypothesis, indicating that less exposure to infection
during childhood may result in a greater chance of developing asthma later in life
[4]. YLLs in children in both countries account for a minimal proportion of DALYs,
and are associated with a very low mortality rate in children with asthma [5].
High BMI is a risk factor of great concern for childhood asthma [6]. Our study found
an increasing trend in DALYs due to high BMI and the ratio of DALYs rates to DALYs
rates due to high BMI in Chinese and American children with asthma. One reason for
this is that certain parents of children with asthma are concerned about exercise-induced
bronchoconstriction (EIB), and thus impose restrictions on the physical activities
of their children, consequently affecting weight management [7]. However, in reality,
exercise can increase lung function, promote cardiopulmonary fitness, and control
asthma [8]. Adequate warm-up before exercise is also recommended [9]. Another reason
is that children with high BMI are more inclined to consume a high-fat diet, which
can increase bronchial hyperresponsiveness and exacerbate the symptoms of asthma [10].
Positive effects of weight loss on asthma-related outcomes have been demonstrated
[11]. The latest Global Initiative for Asthma (GINA 2021) lists obesity as a modifiable
risk factor [6]. Since the global prevalence of high BMI is constantly rising, increasing
exercise and reducing high-fat food intake to control high BMI are necessary to reduce
the risk of asthma [12]. Although the DALYs rates due to high BMI and the ratio of
DALYs rates to DALYs rates due to high BMI were both higher in American children than
in Chinese children, the increasing trend of both indicators was significantly higher
in Chinese children of almost all ages than in American children. Chinese boys of
all ages had a higher percentage of high BMI than girls, which is consistent with
the findings of Guo et al. [13]. A study of disease burden, injury, and risk factors
by state in the USA from 1990 to 2016 found that high BMI was the most important risk
factor in the USA, and that exposure was steadily increasing [14]. They believe that
renewed efforts to control weight at the community level are important, and that controlling
high BMI needs to be a priority for all stakeholders such as physicians, nurses, policy
makers, patients, and families. Liu et al. found that the American government partially
eliminated the adverse effects of obesity on asthma by imposing a high-calorie tax,
increasing the proportion of nutritious food advertisements, banning the sale of soft
drinks, increasing opportunities and venues for physical activity, and implementing
better health care policies [15]. Therefore, it is recommended that high BMI be taken
more into account in the future development of policies for the prevention, control,
and treatment of childhood asthma. Moreover, we recommend that children reduce their
BMI by increasing physical activity and eating a healthy diet, which parents should
encourage and safeguard [16].
The prevalence, DALYs and DALYs due to high BMI were higher in boys than in girls
across all age groups in both countries. Boys also have a relatively narrow airway,
and are more inclined to vigorous exercise with their greater range of motion, and
thus, are more likely to get exposed to allergens. This corroborates the findings
of Ellie et al. that boys are more likely to develop allergic diseases than girls
based on blood-specific IgE assays and skin prick tests for common allergens [17].
In both China and the USA, the prevalence and DALYs were highest in the 5-9 years
age group. This could be due to the fact that children in this age group are at high
risk of upper respiratory tract infections because of their low self-management skills
and immune levels [13]. In addition, upper respiratory tract infections are important
triggers for asthma in children. Moreover, the YLLs for girls aged 10-14 years in
the USA have the highest levels than that for girls in the other groups, which is
considered to be associated with the increased levels of estrogen and progesterone
during the luteal phase in girls of this age group, resulting in increased inflammation
of the airway wall [18].” (Page 22, Line 249-261; Page 23, Line 262-283; Page 24,
Line 284-305; Page 25, Line 306-322)
Meanwhile, we have rewritten the conclusions as follows:
“DALYs rates due to high BMI and ratio of DALYs rates to DALYs rates due to high BMI
were on the rise in children with asthma in both China and USA. High BMI needs to
be taken more into account in the development of future policies for the prevention,
control, and treatment of childhood asthma. Although both indicators of asthma in
children in the USA are higher than those in China, the increasing trend is significantly
lower than that in Chinese children of almost all ages. Therefore, it is recommended
to learn from the American government to impose a high-calorie tax, increase physical
exercise facilities, and provide better health care policies. Besides, we appeal that
children increase their physical activity and maintain a healthy diet and that parents
encourage and safeguard it. Children aged 5-9 years had the highest prevalence and
DALYs in both countries. Careful attention and targeted intervention should be considered
in this population, who are particularly at high risk for asthma.” (Page 26, Line
334-348)
Specific Comment
1. The text in the Introduction (lines 57-59) needs a reference. Consider excluding
Ref 8 and deleting the sentence from P 4, line 60.
Response: Thank you for this comment. We apologize for the error. We have cited Ref
8 in the original lines 57-59 and deleted the sentence in the original line 60:
“High body mass index (BMI), which is considered as the seventh-leading level 2 risk
factor for attributable disability-adjusted life years (DALYs) of diseases in 2019,
is also a risk factor for asthma [25].” (Page 4, Line 66-68)
2. Also, the authors should include an additional reference which is recently published
on this topic (Jin Liu, Maobo Yuan, Yuqian Chen, Yan Wang, Qingting Wang, Qianqian
Zhang, Limin Chai, Danyang Li, Yuanjie Qiu, Huan Chen, Jian Wang, Xinming Xie, Manxiang
Li. Global burden of asthma associated with high body mass index from 1990 to 2019,
Annals of Allergy, Asthma & Immunology 2022; 129:6, 720-730)
Response: Thank you for this comment. We have studied this in depth and cited this
reference in our discussion. The revisions are as follows:
“Liu et al. found that the American government partially eliminated the adverse effects
of obesity on asthma by imposing a high-calorie tax, increasing the proportion of
nutritious food advertisements, banning the sale of soft drinks, increasing opportunities
and venues for physical activity, and implementing better health care policies [15].”
(Page 24, Line 294-297)
3. The Protocol for the global burden of diseases, injuries, and risk factors study
(Institute for Health Metrics and Evaluation, 2018) should be the reference added
(and used) to the Method section.
Response: Thank you for this comment. We have added a relevant reference for the GBD
protocol to increase the introduction to the GBD database:
“The Global Burden of Disease (GBD) 2019 is a cross-border collaborative project covering
204 countries and regions. It collected data from disease surveillance sites, surveys
of the National Health Service, and published literature data to estimate descriptive
epidemiological information on the incidence, prevalence, disability-adjusted life
years (DALYs), years of lost due to disability (YLDs), and years of life lost (YLLs)
for 369 stratified diseases and injuries using the DisMod-MR 2.1 as a Bayesian meta-regression
model [30, 31].” (Page 6, Line 92-97)
4. The results are extensive. However, it seems difficult for authors to extract a
meaningful message from the results section to emphasize the rationale for comparing
the findings from China and USA. They haven’t concluded anything about disease burden
due to the high body mass index in childhood asthma in the USA (P 29, lines 261-269).
Thus, I suggest rewriting of the conclusion section.
Response: Thank you for this comment. In the “Discussion” section, we have further
analyzed meaningful results and added a discussion of the disease burden of childhood
asthma in American children, particularly that resulting from high BMI. Our manuscript
has been revised as follows:
“Overall, the prevalence and DALYs of childhood asthma in the USA showed an increasing
trend from 1990 to 2019. Part of the reason for this is related to the significant
increase in the consumption of sugary drinks such as nutritional/energy drinks, juice
drinks, and sweet tea among American children, and sugary drinks are thought to be
associated with childhood asthma [1]. However, the upward trend of both indicators
from around 2010 to 2019 was significantly reduced compared to that in the period
from 2005 to 2009. The prevalence and DALYs of childhood asthma decreased in children
aged 1-4 years between 2010 and 2019. This may be related to the enactment of the
Clean Air Act amendments in 2011 and the Clean Power Plan in 2015 in the USA. In particular,
the Regional Greenhouse Gas Initiative (RGGI) has contributed significantly to the
reduction of greenhouse gases in the power sector and toxic air pollutants associated
with the onset of asthma, such as PM2.5, over the past decade [2]. Another possible
reason is that most US states enacted a tax on sugar-sweetened beverages (SSB) by
2010, which plays a role in reducing SSB-induced high BMI [3]. The prevalence and
DALYs of asthma were higher in children in the USA than in those in China. The main
reason may be related to the health hypothesis, indicating that less exposure to infection
during childhood may result in a greater chance of developing asthma later in life
[4]. YLLs in children in both countries account for a minimal proportion of DALYs,
and are associated with a very low mortality rate in children with asthma [5].
High BMI is a risk factor of great concern for childhood asthma [6]. Our study found
an increasing trend in DALYs due to high BMI and the ratio of DALYs rates to DALYs
rates due to high BMI in Chinese and American children with asthma. One reason for
this is that certain parents of children with asthma are concerned about exercise-induced
bronchoconstriction (EIB), and thus impose restrictions on the physical activities
of their children, consequently affecting weight management [7]. However, in reality,
exercise can increase lung function, promote cardiopulmonary fitness, and control
asthma [8]. Adequate warm-up before exercise is also recommended [9]. Another reason
is that children with high BMI are more inclined to consume a high-fat diet, which
can increase bronchial hyperresponsiveness and exacerbate the symptoms of asthma [10].
Positive effects of weight loss on asthma-related outcomes have been demonstrated
[11]. The latest Global Initiative for Asthma (GINA 2021) lists obesity as a modifiable
risk factor [6]. Since the global prevalence of high BMI is constantly rising, increasing
exercise and reducing high-fat food intake to control high BMI are necessary to reduce
the risk of asthma [12]. Although the DALYs rates due to high BMI and the ratio of
DALYs rates to DALYs rates due to high BMI were both higher in American children than
in Chinese children, the increasing trend of both indicators was significantly higher
in Chinese children of almost all ages than in American children. Chinese boys of
all ages had a higher percentage of high BMI than girls, which is consistent with
the findings of Guo et al. [13]. A study of disease burden, injury, and risk factors
by state in the USA from 1990 to 2016 found that high BMI was the most important risk
factor in the USA, and that exposure was steadily increasing [14]. They believe that
renewed efforts to control weight at the community level are important, and that controlling
high BMI needs to be a priority for all stakeholders such as physicians, nurses, policy
makers, patients, and families. Liu et al. found that the American government partially
eliminated the adverse effects of obesity on asthma by imposing a high-calorie tax,
increasing the proportion of nutritious food advertisements, banning the sale of soft
drinks, increasing opportunities and venues for physical activity, and implementing
better health care policies [15]. Therefore, it is recommended that high BMI be taken
more into account in the future development of policies for the prevention, control,
and treatment of childhood asthma. Moreover, we recommend that children reduce their
BMI by increasing physical activity and eating a healthy diet, which parents should
encourage and safeguard [16].
The prevalence, DALYs and DALYs due to high BMI were higher in boys than in girls
across all age groups in both countries. Boys also have a relatively narrow airway,
and are more inclined to vigorous exercise with their greater range of motion, and
thus, are more likely to get exposed to allergens. This corroborates the findings
of Ellie et al. that boys are more likely to develop allergic diseases than girls
based on blood-specific IgE assays and skin prick tests for common allergens [17].
In both China and the USA, the prevalence and DALYs were highest in the 5-9 years
age group. This could be due to the fact that children in this age group are at high
risk of upper respiratory tract infections because of their low self-management skills
and immune levels [13]. In addition, upper respiratory tract infections are important
triggers for asthma in children. Moreover, the YLLs for girls aged 10-14 years in
the USA have the highest levels than that for girls in the other groups, which is
considered to be associated with the increased levels of estrogen and progesterone
during the luteal phase in girls of this age group, resulting in increased inflammation
of the airway wall [18].” (Page 22, Line 249-261; Page 23, Line 262-283; Page 24,
Line 284-305; Page 25, Line 306-322)
Meanwhile, we have rewritten the conclusions as follows:
“DALYs rates due to high BMI and ratio of DALYs rates to DALYs rates due to high BMI
were on the rise in children with asthma in both China and USA. High BMI needs to
be taken more into account in the development of future policies for the prevention,
control, and treatment of childhood asthma. Although both indicators of asthma in
children in the USA are higher than those in China, the increasing trend is significantly
lower than that in Chinese children of almost all ages. Therefore, it is recommended
to learn from the American government to impose a high-calorie tax, increase physical
exercise facilities, and provide better health care policies. Besides, we appeal that
children increase their physical activity and maintain a healthy diet and that parents
encourage and safeguard it. Children aged 5-9 years had the highest prevalence and
DALYs in both countries. Careful attention and targeted intervention should be considered
in this population, who are particularly at high risk for asthma.” (Page 26, Line
334-348)
5. In the Discussion section, I suggest that authors delete the sentence (P 22, lines
237-239); it is irrelevant to this paper.
Response: Thank you for your comment. We have deleted the relevant sentence.
6. I am confused with the text in the Reference section (lines 360-457). Please, check
if it is an addition of ref. 22, and, is it necessary.
Response: Thank you for your comment. We apologize for the mistake of Ref. 22. We
have checked the style of the cited references and made corrections as follows:
“31.Reddel HK, Bacharier LB, Bateman ED, Brightling CE, Brusselle GG, Buhl R, et al.
Global Initiative for Asthma Strategy 2021: executive summary and rationale for key
changes. Eur Respir J. 2022;59(1). doi: 10.1183/13993003.02730-2021.” (Page 33, Line
445-447)
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