Peer Review History

Original SubmissionAugust 4, 2022
Decision Letter - Alireza Badirzadeh, Editor

PONE-D-22-17517Evaluating leishmanicidal activity of Lucilia sericata larval products in combination with Apis mellifera honey using an in vitro modelPLOS ONE

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Alireza Badirzadeh

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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“MSD has received a grant (Grant no: Med/8288) from Tarbiat Modares University, Tehran, Iran

https://www.modares.ac.ir/en

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Reviewers' comments:

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1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: No

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5. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: Dear authors;

First of all, I congratulate you on carrying out this valuable study. But in my opinion, some improvements are necessary to enrich the manuscript. So, I have listed my comments.

1. The title should be more impressive. Therefore, I suggest “Leishmaniacidal potential of Lucilia sericata products and Apis mellifera honey combination: an in vitro evaluation.”

2. Language editing in the text of the manuscript is required.

3. Please employ MeSh to check your keywords; I think J744 is not an appropriate keyword.

4. In the introduction, you mentioned the existence of three forms of the disease, but it is better to say that there are three main forms of the disease.

5. According to your manuscript, new cases of CL have been estimated at 1.2 million. Still, the website of WHO says,” It is estimated that between 600 000 to 1 million new cases occur worldwide annually”.

6. Although in lines 210 and 216, you indicate the treatment of honey plus Glucantime, I could not find more information in “Material and Method” and table 1. Please clarify the treatment.

7. Despite only one table in the manuscript, you named it “Table 2”! Please correct it.

8. You have mentioned further studies are needed to detect the active components of larval ES and honey. Please mention probable active ingredients, and discuss them in brief.

Best wishes

Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled " Evaluating leishmanicidal activity of Lucilia sericata larval products in combination with Apis mellifera honey using an in vitro model" describes the effects of larval products of L. sericata mixed with honey on Leishmania major promastigotes and infected macrophages. The following contains some point that should be addressed by the authors.

The Leishmania species (major) used in this study should be included in the title.

The authors should describe the experimental processes to check the purity of the

two fractions of ES (>10 and <10 kDa).

Figure is not necessary.

The viable amastigotes were not evaluated, only % of infected macrophages and number of intracellular amastigotes in J774 macrophage cultures.

A screening for lipopolysaccharide (LPS/endotoxin) contamination in larval products and honey should be performed

Images of treated and untreated promastigotes and infected macrophages could be included in the manuscript.

The authors suggested further studies to detect the active components of larval ES and honey as well as the mechanism of inhibition on the Leishmania parasite (line 314). Some suggestion that these issues could be discussed in the manuscript.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

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Revision 1

Journal Requirements:

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Our response:

We did the required modification according to PLOS ONE style patterns. Thanks.

2. Please provide additional details regarding participant consent. In the ethics statement in the Methods and online submission information, please ensure that you have specified (1) whether consent was informed and (2) what type you obtained (for instance, written or verbal, and if verbal, how it was documented and witnessed). If your study included minors, state whether you obtained consent from parents or guardians. If the need for consent was waived by the ethics committee, please include this information. If you are reporting a retrospective study of medical records or archived samples, please ensure that you have discussed whether all data were fully anonymized before you accessed them and/or whether the IRB or ethics committee waived the requirement for informed consent. If patients provided informed written consent to have data from their medical records used in research, please include this information.

Our response:

Our study did not involve human or animal specimens. However, the undertaken methodologies of the study were approved by the Ethics Committee of Tarbiat Modares University.

3. Thank you for stating the following financial disclosure:

“MSD has received a grant (Grant no: Med/8288) from Tarbiat Modares University, Tehran, Iran https://www.modares.ac.ir/en No” Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: "The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript."

If this statement is not correct you must amend it as needed.

Please include this amended Role of Funder statement in your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf.

Our response:

Thanks for your suggestion. The sentence was edited, and included in the cover letter as instructed.

4. Thank you for stating the following in the Acknowledgments Section of your manuscript:

“The authors would like to thank all staff of the Department of Parasitology and Medical Entomology and the Student Research Committee as well as the Faculty of Medical Sciences of Tarbiat Modares University for their support.”

We note that you have provided additional information within the Acknowledgements Section that is not currently declared in your Funding Statement. Please note that funding information should not appear in the Acknowledgments section or other areas of your manuscript. We will only publish funding information present in the Funding Statement section of the online submission form.

Please remove any funding-related text from the manuscript and let us know how you would like to update your Funding Statement. Currently, your Funding Statement reads as follows:

“MSD has received a grant (Grant no: Med/8288) from Tarbiat Modares University, Tehran, Iran https://www.modares.ac.ir/en

No” Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf.

Our response:

Thanks for your assistance. The statement was included in the cover letter as required.

5. In your Data Availability statement, you have not specified where the minimal data set underlying the results described in your manuscript can be found. PLOS defines a study's minimal data set as the underlying data used to reach the conclusions drawn in the manuscript and any additional data required to replicate the reported study findings in their entirety. All PLOS journals require that the minimal data set be made fully available. For more information about our data policy, please see http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/data-availability.

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Our response:

The supporting data was provided as a separate file and uploaded.

6. Please amend either the title on the online submission form (via Edit Submission) or the title in the manuscript so that they are identical.

Our response:

Sure. We have done so.

7. We note you have included a table to which you do not refer in the text of your manuscript. Please ensure that you refer to Table 2 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Table.

Our response:

Thanks for your attention. We included a reference for the sole table in the main text as required.

8. Please include a copy of Table 1 which you refer to in your text on page 11. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.]

Our response:

Sure. We did so.

Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy [1] requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: No

5. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: Dear authors;

First of all, I congratulate you on carrying out this valuable study. But in my opinion, some improvements are necessary to enrich the manuscript. So, I have listed my comments.

1. The title should be more impressive. Therefore, I suggest “Leishmaniacidal potential of Lucilia sericata products and Apis mellifera honey combination: an in vitro evaluation.”

Our response:

Thanks. We agree. The title was changed as kindly suggested.

2. Language editing in the text of the manuscript is required.

Our response:

The whole manuscript has now been thoroughly revised for English style. Thank you.

3. Please employ MeSh to check your keywords; I think J744 is not an appropriate keyword.

Our response:

Thank you for your attention. We substituted it with the word “macrophage”.

4. In the introduction, you mentioned the existence of three forms of the disease, but it is better to say that there are three main forms of the disease.

Our response:

Thank you. Corrected as kindly suggested.

5. According to your manuscript, new cases of CL have been estimated at 1.2 million. Still, the website of WHO says,” It is estimated that between 600 000 to 1 million new cases occur worldwide annually”.

Our response:

Thanks for your attention. The correction was made and a new reference added.

6. Although in lines 210 and 216, you indicate the treatment of honey plus Glucantime, I could not find more information in “Material and Method” and table 1. Please clarify the treatment.

Our response:

Thanks for your attention. We are sorry for this mistake. In fact, we did not have honey + glucantime treatment, but used glucantime as the first line treatment to compare with. So, we have corrected this mistake in the main text.

7. Despite only one table in the manuscript, you named it “Table 2”! Please correct it.

Our response:

Thanks. It has been corrected.

8. You have mentioned further studies are needed to detect the active components of larval ES and honey. Please mention probable active ingredients, and discuss them in brief.

Best wishes

Our response:

Thanks. We have briefly discussed it the text.

Reviewer #2:

The manuscript entitled " Evaluating leishmanicidal activity of Lucilia sericata larval products in combination with Apis mellifera honey using an in vitro model" describes the effects of larval products of L. sericata mixed with honey on Leishmania major promastigotes and infected macrophages. The following contains some point that should be addressed by the authors.

The Leishmania species (major) used in this study should be included in the title.

Our response:

Thanks for your suggestion. We added the species name in the title.

The authors should describe the experimental processes to check the purity of the two fractions of ES (>10 and <10 kDa). Figure is not necessary.

Our response:

As kindly suggested, we have added a section to describe the evaluation method for protein band purity in the main text.

The viable amastigotes were not evaluated, only % of infected macrophages and number of intracellular amastigotes in J774 macrophage cultures.

Our response:

Yes. We did not check the amastigote viability as correctly noticed. But we checked the percentage of growth inhibition, and the infection rate which presented in both Table 1 and Figure 5. So, the necessary corrections have now been introduced.

A screening for lipopolysaccharide (LPS/endotoxin) contamination in larval products and honey should be performed Images of treated and untreated promastigotes and infected macrophages could be included in the manuscript.

Our response:

Thanks for the suggestion. As the ES products and honey, used in this study, were freshly prepared and immediately applied to perform the experimentations, we did not attempt to test LPS contamination. In fact, such tests had not been undertaken by many references which were examined for this paper such as no. 37 and 49. In addition the recent profiling of ES proteins and peptides of Lucilia sericata did not report any LPS trace as an integral component, rather they proved the suppressive action of ES to bacterial LPS. The same was reported by many recent researches for honey being protective against LPS. However, as the respected reviewer has rightly mentioned, the LPS role as an exogenous contaminant may not be ruled out. This is particularly important when any ES products are to be developed as prescription drugs. We will surely consider the suggestion in our future researches. Many thanks.

The authors suggested further studies to detect the active components of larval ES and honey as well as the mechanism of inhibition on the Leishmania parasite (line 314). Some suggestion that these issues could be discussed in the manuscript.

Our response:

Many thanks. Some explanations were added in the discussion section.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

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Decision Letter - Alireza Badirzadeh, Editor

PONE-D-22-17517R1Evaluating leishmanicidal effects of Lucilia sericata products in combination with Apis mellifera honey using an in vitro modelPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Saaid Dayer,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Please submit your revised manuscript by 3/28/2023. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.

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We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

Alireza Badirzadeh

Academic Editor

PLOS ONE

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.

Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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6. Review Comments to the Author

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #1: Dear authors;

First, I congratulate you due to carrying out this valuable rearch, and thank you to apply all comments.

Sincerely yours

Reviewer #2: There is no satisfactory section to describe the evaluation method for protein band purity in the revised text.

In addition, figure 1 show only a bovine serum albumin standard curve not a concentration of L. sericata larval products curve. The authors describe in the text: the average net absorbance at 595 nm for seven standard dilutions from low to high…. Average protein concentrations for the crude ES, ES >10 kDa, and ES <10 kDa were 809.8, 680.6, and 385.3 µg/ml …(Figure 1) (lines 175-180).

Please rewrite this section and consider do not show a BSA standard curve to describe protein concentrations of larval products. A table or just the description in the text are good options.

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7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

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Revision 2

Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.

Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

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Sincerely yours

Our response:

Thanks you so much.

Reviewer #2: There is no satisfactory section to describe the evaluation method for protein band purity in the revised text.

Our response:

Thank you for the comment. We have added a section describing the evaluation method of protein purity as we did in our earlier study.

In addition, figure 1 show only a bovine serum albumin standard curve not a concentration of L. sericata larval products curve. The authors describe in the text: the average net absorbance at 595 nm for seven standard dilutions from low to high…. Average protein concentrations for the crude ES, ES >10 kDa, and ES <10 kDa were 809.8, 680.6, and 385.3 µg/ml … (Figure 1) (lines 175-180).

Please rewrite this section and consider do not show a BSA standard curve to describe protein concentrations of larval products. A table or just the description in the text are good options.

Our response:

Thank you for your attention

We have now introduced the required changes in Fig. 1. The previous graph was drawn using online site (at https://www.aatbio.com), which unfortunately did not have the ability to accommodate the results of larval products. Therefore. we have used Prism software, Saturation Binding Data Graph section, to combine and redraw the corresponding data. As shown, the graph now indicates the standard curve as well as the OD’s obtained from crude and fractionated larval extracts.The data analysis part of this point was also added.

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Evaluating leishmanicidal effects of Lucilia sericata products in combination with Apis mellifera honey using an in vitro model

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Evaluating leishmanicidal effects of Lucilia sericata products in combination with Apis mellifera honey using an in vitro model

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