Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 12, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-31269Do political incentives promote or inhibit corporate social responsibility? The role of local officials’ tenurePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: The reviewers are experts in the area and have prepared a careful and fair review. I do appreciate your efforts in writing the manuscript and I find the topic interesting and worth pursuing. The paper is generally well written, and analyses have been conducted properly. However, there are some places highlighted by reviewers that you should carefully address before publication. Please find all comments in the review reports. I will not repeat them here to avoid your confusions. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 16 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a very interesting article, the analysis is sound, and the results are convincing. It is well embedded in the literature and its contribution is significant. The author applies the Heckman method to eliminate selection bias and instrumental variables to handle further endogeneity concerns. I suggest minor improvements on two points: 1. Present the size effect. Show that the coefficients are not only statistically significant but also economically significant. It might be worthwhile to plot the U-curve as a function of the moderating factors. 2 Explain in more detail how the CSR indicator is calculated. Support that the CSR measure is a good proxy for the latent variable. In this context, consider that firms have an interest in hiding CSR problems or in presenting themselves in a better light than they actually are (greenwashing). The less free the media (e.g. in some rural regions), the greater this type of bias may be. I recommend the following two articles on this issue: Berlinger, E., Keresztúri, J. L., Lublóy, Á., & Tamásné, Z. V. (2022). Press freedom and operational losses: The monitoring role of the media. Journal of International Financial Markets, Institutions and Money, 77, 101496. You, J., Zhang, B., & Zhang, L. (2018). Who captures the power of the pen?. The Review of Financial Studies, 31(1), 43-96. Reviewer #2: Summary This paper estimates the relationship between the political incentives of local government officials (proxied by their tenure) and corporate social responsibility (CRS) of firms located within their jurisdiction in China. The paper hypothesizes that, under the institutional circumstances in which businesses operate, the relationship between the tenure of local officials and CRS is U-shaped, along with other hypotheses. Using data from 985 firms covering the period 2009-2019, the paper finds a U-shaped relationship between the tenure and CRS performance. By contrast the paper finds no evidence that party officials’ tenure has any effect on firms’ CRS. General Comments This is a well written paper which addresses a very important policy-return issue that speaks to literature in many fields The author has painstakingly explained the hypotheses being tested, the methods and the analysis. The author also tries to identify and address the potential methodological challenges with the data and its estimation. In spite of this, there are some important issues to be addressed before the paper can be considered for publication in a journal. Specific Comments Conceptually, the link between the political incentives of local officials and corporate social responsibility of firms is not well established in the paper. The author indicates [page 4 lines 78 79] that the local government’s control of critical resources could dramatically affect a firm’s competitive position. However, that actions of the local officials could somehow induce CSR from firms a jump. Even though the author also indicates that the firms’ CSR investment has a weight in the evaluation criteria of local officials, how much is this weight? More generally, the author should provide specific channels through which the tenure of the local officials could influence CRS especially that of private firms. On the methodology, the decision to restrict the study sample to only firms that engaged in CRS and exclude those that did not (page 16 lines 307-308) is questionable. I would have expected that all firms would be included so that for years in which firms did not engage in CRS, they are marked as zero. The author has employed the Heckman two-stage selection approach to address the resulting sample selection problems inherent in their approach but it seems strange to impose this restrict and use a sample selection to address it. At the very minimum, I expect the author to rerun the analysis where firms that are not engaged in CRS are included to see whether the results will remain the same. Otherwise, the author should provide a strong justification for not using that approach. Minor comments Some of the variable names are not self-explanatory. For instance, “nature” is a dummy for being state-owned. It is important for the author to add sufficient notes to the descriptive table, (Table 2) including variable definitions to make the tables self-contained. Also, it is not too clear how the standard errors are treated in the empirical estimation but is seems that the author may have to adjust for correlation among firms located in the same province/locality. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Do political incentives promote or inhibit corporate social responsibility? The role of local officials’ tenure PONE-D-22-31269R1 Dear Dr. Wu, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: All my comments have been properly addressed and the paper has been significantly improved, therefore, I recommend the acceptance of the paper. I congratulate the authors(s). Reviewer #2: The author(s) have carefully and dutifully addressed all my comments. I do not have any additional comments. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-31269R1 Do political incentives promote or inhibit corporate social responsibility? The role of local officials’ tenure Dear Dr. Wu: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Vu Quang Trinh Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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