Peer Review History
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PONE-D-22-27493Fluoropyrimidine combination therapy versus fluoropyrimidine monotherapy for gemcitabine-refractory advanced pancreatic cancer: a meta-analysis of randomized controlled trialsPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 19 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Wang et al report a study-level meta-analysis of 6 RCTs, in second-line treatment of pancreas cancer, comparing fluoropyrimidine alone (either 5FU or S-1; note capecitabine was not included), with the same FP in addition to another chemotherapy agent (oxaliplatin (2 studies), irinotecan (2 studies), Nal-Iri – a modified formulation of irinotecan (one study) – or oxaliplatin plus irinotecan (one study)). The MA design is reasonable and the search seems to have been done well, revealing only 6 eligible studies. There is limited information in this paper on the characteristics of each of the 6 papers, and the patients therein. For example, there is not a description of how each study defined “gemcitabine refractory advanced pancreatic cancer” , whether some were limited to disease progression during gemcitabine treatment, whether a time limit after gem treatment was specified as part of a definition of gem-refractory disease. Revise. 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Reviewer #2: In this study “Fluoropyrimidine combination therapy versus fluoropyrimidine monotherapy for gemcitabine”, the authors conducted a meta-analysis study of RCTs to compare fluropyrimidine based therapy. While studies have been accumulating with such evidence, similar review of meta-analysis have been reported by Yang et al 2015 that included demographic data, treatment response, objective response rate (ORR), progression-free and overall survival (PFS and OS, respectively), and toxicities. While it is interesting, this meta-analysis provides just another addition to the study pool but derived from just a handful of 6 study trials. As such comparative meta-analysis study from larger study trials with multiple locations, demographic group, age etc will make the conclusion stronger. Although, the written text is alright I find the result difficult to compare with the poor-quality figures presented with no legends and explanation. I encourage the authors to include all abbreviations, legends, labels and explanation of the figures and here’s my comments- Table1: Please explain the abbreviation used for search strategy. Readers find it difficult in understating what is meant by “$” or “mp” etc. While this may be familiar for clinical researchers, simply putting a table of keyword used for the search lacks clarity. Please provide high resolution figure and all the figure legends Fig 6- Label axes properly and explain the funnel plot in legend, what the circles meant etc Table2- What is S-1? Reviewer #3: PONE -D- 22-27493 – Wang et al - MA of FP alone vs FP-combination Wang et al report a study-level meta-analysis of 6 RCTs, in second-line treatment of pancreas cancer, comparing fluoropyrimidine alone (either 5FU or S-1; note capecitabine was not included), with the same FP in addition to another chemotherapy agent (oxaliplatin (2 studies), irinotecan (2 studies), Nal-Iri – a modified formulation of irinotecan (one study) – or oxaliplatin plus irinotecan (one study)). Overall Comments: The subject of this MA is relevant, as recurrent pancreas cancer after first line chemotherapy is a serious issue, now with several possible treatments. The MA design is reasonable and the search seems to have been done well, revealing only 6 eligible studies. The first author does not seem to have provided an ORCID. There are multiple minor grammatical errors throughout, such as Line 126: are shown, and Line 143 uses the incorrect tense. More information about how data was analysed would be valuable. For example, were medians compared? How were confidence intervals managed or data ranges managed? There are already 4 papers titled meta-analysis in the 2L treatment of pancreatic cancer (Lu W, J Int Med Res, 2022; Wainberg Z BMC Cancer 2020; Sonbol MB, Cancer 2017; Zhong S, Medicine (Baltimore) 2017.) What will this paper add to the literature? Major Comments: There is limited information in this paper on the characteristics of each of the 6 papers, and the patients therein. For example, there is not a description of how each study defined “gemcitabine refractory advanced pancreatic cancer” , whether some were limited to disease progression during gemcitabine treatment, whether a time limit after gem treatment was specified as part of a definition of gem-refractory disease. The description of patient characteristics is not as extensive as, for example, in the tables of the Ohkawa paper. The primary and secondary outcomes, and how each study defined them, are not explained in detail. How were PFS and ORR defined? (were there differences in definition between papers?). ORR requires an assessment of response, usually with CT scans, but the frequency and veracity of scans (independent expert reporting, or a potentially biased investigator) can affect the ORR. Since this is a retrospective study-level meta-analysis, it is possible that data elements are recorded differently in each paper, and that some data elements are missing. There is no consideration in Methods about how missing or “difficult to determine” data was dealt with. How did the 2 data collectors work together? How were inconsistencies, missing data and differences in interpretation dealt with? Is there missing data in any of the studies (there is some data inconsistencies in the paper of Ohkawa)? What is the duration of followup (median and range) in each paper and is it important? There is not data about dose-intensity for each study – the doses referred to are intended; there is no consideration of doses actually received, or to duration of treatment in each study. This may be important as oxaliplatin neuropathy is a function of total dose over time. I note Wang-Gillam et al has 117 and 149 patients in the 2 arms of their study; this suggests that there was some imbalance in the randomisation. This is not discussed. Two studies are called phase II and 4 are called phase III – What is the difference here? Table 3 has a column called “allocation concealment” (4 yes, 2 not clear) – what does this mean? I note that all studies are said in the text to be “open label” – this usually means there is no blinding of treatment so no allocation concealment. Minor Comments: Abstract: the second sentence in Conclusion is not based on any data in the rest of the abstract. The abstract needs revision after the paper itself is revised, to ensure consistency and so the Abstract can stand alone but still be a fair summary of the paper. Figures: The Forest plots need more annotation and the terms which appear need to be all defined, including IV and M-H. What does the size and length of the diamonds represent. Why is the number at risk or observed/expected not reports in the figures? The direction of the figure (favours monotherapy vs favours combination) is switched between fig 3 and 4. These should be consistent. Fig 4 has a typographical error (momotherapy). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Fluoropyrimidine combination therapy versus fluoropyrimidine monotherapy for gemcitabine-refractory advanced pancreatic cancer: a systematic review and meta-analysis of randomized controlled trials PONE-D-22-27493R1 Dear Dr. Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Alberto Meyer, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Authors, Thank you for accepting our recommendations for revision and incorporating the relevant changes. I am satisfied with your response and thus happy to recommend in favour of publication of your study. Kind regards Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-22-27493R1 Fluoropyrimidine combination therapy versus fluoropyrimidine monotherapy for gemcitabine-refractory advanced pancreatic cancer: a systematic review and meta-analysis of randomized controlled trials Dear Dr. Wang: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Alberto Meyer Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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