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Original SubmissionJuly 5, 2022
Decision Letter - Ahmet Murt, Editor

PONE-D-22-18719Somatic burden in Russia during the COVID-19 pandemicPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: I think it is a good article evaluating the somatic burden.

Minor Points

- In Table 1, I think that it is not necessary to give all the cities where the participants in the study live. The table seems too long.

- Table 1 presents data on the results of the Fear of COVID-19 Scale and the СOVID-19 Preventive Behavior Index. Therefore, it would be more appropriate to give Table 1 after the explanations of these scales.

-Typos should be corrected.

Reviewer #2: In this article, authors have researched the somatic burden of Russian population during COVID-19 pandemic. The scales and number of participants are acceptable.

However, the paper needs some modifications before it can proceed to the publication stage:

1- Why didn't the authors exclude any patients with any previous psychological or psychiatric illnesses?

2- Do we have any information about previous health problems of the participants? There might appear a difference between those who have and those who don't have.

3- In somatic symptom scale, authors state that there are 4 levels of symptoms: minimal, low, medium, high, very high. However in latent profiles there are only low, medium and high levels. Can the authors explain why they reduced the number of profile classes?( (It's stated that goodness for fit model does not indicate the superiority of any other)

4- Although females are given and discussed as higher somatizers, it is said in associated factors of somatic burden that 'low somatisers were more often females'. This should be corrected.

5- Authors should explain their selection criteria for the multinomial regression model.

6- May authors also discuss the reasons for differences between different cities or regions? Do any of these regions have any specific characteristics?

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Revision 1

Dear Reviewers,

Thank you for your help in improving our manuscript. We have made the modifications following your suggestions:

In Table 1, I think that it is not necessary to give all the cities where the participants in the study live. The table seems too long.

Thank you, for brevity we have excluded the list of cities from Table 1.

Table 1 presents data on the results of the Fear of COVID-19 Scale and the СOVID-19 Preventive Behavior Index. Therefore, it would be more appropriate to give Table 1 after the explanations of these scales.

Thank you for these suggestions, we moved Table 1 to the Results section, so that readers can see the descriptive statistics for these instruments after they read their descriptions in Methods.

Typos should be corrected.

Thank you for this suggestion. We have proofread the manuscript and had the text proofread by a native English-speaking editor who used British spelling.

Why didn't the authors exclude any patients with any previous psychological or psychiatric illnesses?

Indeed, we did not specifically exclude patients with any prior psychological or psychiatric illnesses for several reasons. Firstly, The Somatic Symptom Scale-8 used in our study fairly accurately assesses the DSM-5 somatic symptom disorder (AUC = 0,71; 95% CI = 0,66-0,77, according to Toussaint et al., 2020). This implies that more than a third of our sample (37% of participants) meet the criteria for somatic symptom disorder. Moreover, a meta-analytic review has shown that at least a third of patients with somatoform disorders have comorbid anxiety and depressive disorders (Henningsen et al., 2003). Given this, somatic symptoms and mental disorders emerge as quite difficult to differentiate, and we believe that doing it would make the sample of individuals with somatic symptoms less representative.

Secondly, our study was carried out in an online setting, where we could not be sure that the participants would objectively assess their psychological state or honestly report a psychiatric diagnosis. And, finally, there is evidence indicating that many disorders are diagnosed in Russia extremely rarely: for instance, only 1-4% of cases of bipolar affective disorder, depression, anxiety disorders are diagnosed by specialists (Martynikhin, 2021): as a result, most Russian participants with mental comorbidities would probably never be aware of the fact.

However, we totally agree with you that excluding patients with a history of psychiatric illnesses could affect our findings and we described this as a limitation of the current study (“The online survey limits our ability to highlight possible physiological causes of reported somatic symptoms, which may be associated with mental and physical disorders”) and a prospect for future research (“Future studies should rely on objective characteristics (medical records, laboratory tests, physician evaluations, etc.)”).

Henningsen P., Zimmermann T., Sattel H. (2003). Medically unexplained physical symptoms, anxiety, and depression: a meta-analytic review. Psychosomatic Medicine, 65, 528–533. https://doi.org/10.1097/01.psy.0000075977.90337.e7

Martynikhin, I. A. (2021). The use of ICD-10 for diagnosing mental disorders in Russia, according to national statistics and a survey of psychiatrists’ experience. Consortium Psychiatricum, 2(2), 35-44. https://consortium-psy.com/jour/article/view/69/pdf

Toussaint A., Hüsing P., Kohlmann S., & Löwe B. (2020). Detecting DSM-5 somatic symptom disorder: criterion validity of the Patient Health Questionnaire-15 (PHQ-15) and the Somatic Symptom Scale-8 (SSS-8) in combination with the Somatic Symptom Disorder – B Criteria Scale (SSD-12). Psychological Medicine 50, 324–333. https://doi.org/10.1017/S003329171900014X

Do we have any information about previous health problems of the participants? There might appear a difference between those who have and those who don't have.

Our questionnaire contained only one question about the respondents' objective health status ("Do you think you were sick with COVID-19?"). We did not ask about chronic illnesses and other possible medical causes of somatic symptoms for the same reasons as we did not ask about psychiatric illnesses. We agree that this is a very serious question and we also noted this in the Limitations section: “”

In somatic symptom scale, authors state that there are 4 levels of symptoms: minimal, low, medium, high, very high. However in latent profiles there are only low, medium and high levels. Can the authors explain why they reduced the number of profile classes? (It's stated that goodness for fit model does not indicate the superiority of any other).

The authors of the Somatic Symptom Scale-8 distinguish five levels of somatic burden: minimal, low, medium, high, and very high (Gierk et al., 2013). In choosing the number of latent profiles, we relied on a combination of information criteria, entropy, and interpretability of the resulting classes. In particular, the 5-profile model had higher AIC and BIC values, suggesting that this number of profiles is excessive. Based on a combination of theoretical and empirical considerations, in line with some existing studies (Burri et al., 2017; Eliasen et al., 2018; Kato et al., 2010), we opted for a 3-profile model that, as we believe, is parsimonious and at the same time sufficiently theoretically clear.

Burri A, Hilpert P, McNair P, Williams FM. Exploring symptoms of somatization in chronic widespread pain: Latent class analysis and the role of personality. J. Pain Res. 2017; 10:1733–1740. https://doi.org/10.2147/JPR.S139700

Eliasen M, Schröder A, Fink P, Kreiner S, Dantoft TM, Poulsen CH, et al. A step towards a new delimitation of functional somatic syndromes: A latent class analysis of symptoms in a population-based cohort study. J. Psychosom. Res. 2018; 108:102–117. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jpsychores.2018.03.002

Gierk B., Kohlmann S., Kroenke K., Spangenberg L., Zenger M., Brähler E., et al. The somatic symptom scale-8 (SSS-8): A brief measure of somatic symptom burden. JAMA Internal Meicine, 174(3), 399–407. https://doi.org/10.1001/jamainternmed.2013.12179

Kato K, Sullivan PF, Pedersen NL. Latent class analysis of functional somatic symptoms in a population-based sample of twins. J. Psychosom. Res. 2010; 68(5):447–453. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jpsychores.2010.01.010

Although females are given and discussed as higher somatizers, it is said in associated factors of somatic burden that 'low somatisers were more often females'. This should be corrected.

Thank you so much for helping us see and correct this mistake, which was a typo. While proofreading the text, we found another similar mistake in the description of the latent profiles (‘more frequently reported history of COVID-19 disease’ instead of ‘more rarely reported history of COVID-19 disease’). All errors have been corrected.

Authors should explain their selection criteria for the multinomial regression model.

We tried to explain selection criteria for the multinomial regression model by adding the following sentence to the Introduction: ‘Specifically, we presumed that somatic burden during the COVID-19 pandemic is associated with known pre-pandemic risk factors (female gender, older age, not being in a partnership, lower education background) [18; 19; 20], but is more dependent on health- and pandemic-related risk factors (poorer self-rated health, history of COVID-19 disease, refusing vaccination against SARS-CoV-2 infection, greater fear of COVID-19 pandemic, living in regions with higher excess mortality, and preventive behavior during the COVID-19 pandemic)’. We also cited additional sources to justify the choice of predictors.

May authors also discuss the reasons for differences between different cities or regions? Do any of these regions have any specific characteristics?

We think there could be many reasons for differences between different cities or regions, as we write about in the Discussion: ‘Variation in prevalence between Russia’s regions can be related to a large number of factors such as geographic features, socioeconomic status, rates of morbidity and mortality from SARS-CoV-2 infection, residents’ attitudes toward the COVID-19 pandemic, and trust in local government authorities’. This is a very important and interesting question, which needs to be explored in the following studies, as the procedures and methods of diagnosing the COVID-19 disease, the patient routing protocols in case of positive results, and the algorithms for inpatient and outpatient treatment were the same throughout Russia (in accordance with the orders of the Ministry of Health).

Once again, we thank you for your help and we hope that we have corrected all the inconsistencies and explained all the shortcomings.

With best regards,

authors.

Decision Letter - Ahmet Murt, Editor

PONE-D-22-18719R1Somatic burden in Russia during the COVID-19 pandemicPLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Zolotareva,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: No

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Reviewer #2: The suggestions in the previous round were all applied. The authors should not forget to make the data of this study fully available.

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Revision 2

Dear Reviewers,

Thank you for your help in improving our manuscript!

We had probably included a peer-review link only. We have now replaced it with a link to our dataset in the OSF repository (https://osf.io/9hw52/) that is publicly available without restrictions.

Best regards,

the authors.

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Decision Letter - Ahmet Murt, Editor

Somatic burden in Russia during the COVID-19 pandemic

PONE-D-22-18719R2

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PONE-D-22-18719R2

Somatic burden in Russia during the COVID-19 pandemic

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