Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 28, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-02801Study on energy rebound effects of China’s industriesPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please address each reviewer comment carefully. In particular, you will find that the reviewers have some concerns about the motivation, the data and methods, and the discussion of the results. Please make sure that you provide a point-by-point response to the reviewers' comments. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 19 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Energy rebound effects exist popularly and play important roles in reality. Therefore, this article addresses an interesting issue. Conclusions are interesting and robust. This is a well organized paper and I recommend to publish it with modification. Minor remarks 1. Authors should explain the reason to adopt data between 2005 -2017. There is new data about this research. 2. More recent papers about rebound effects should be addressed. [1]Miao, Z., & Chen, X. (2022). Combining parametric and non-parametric approach, variable & source-specific productivity changes and rebound effect of energy & environment. Technological Forecasting and Social Change, 175, 121368. [2]Wang, C., & Nie, P. Y. (2018). How rebound effects of efficiency improvement and price jump of energy influence energy consumption?. Journal of Cleaner Production, 202, 497-503. Reviewer #2: This paper utilized the Chinese statistic yearbook data to estimate the energy consumption rebound effects of the domestic overall and different industries. The methodology, evidence, and results are clear. The manuscript is also written in a structured and clear manner. I appreciate the efforts that the authors spent on putting this together. However, I still have several concerns and this paper could be improved further. My detailed comments and concerns are as follows: Major comments: • The motivation of this paper is not discussed in a clear way in the introduction. This paper mentions that many studies have predicted carbon emissions of the economy in China under different scenarios but these studies have not taken into account the impact of energy rebound effect when predicting carbon emissions (lines 20-25). I do not fully understand this argument as a reader. For the existing literature, how did they predict carbon emissions and how did they omit the energy rebound effects? From my perspective, if researchers predict future GDP growth and future energy intensity (determined by technological progress), they can naturally obtain future energy consumption and related emissions, in which they have taken the energy rebound effect into account. Thus, I think the authors must clarify this very first argument. In addition, the authors should also discuss how should we use the results of this paper to better predict carbon emissions (at least in the discussion section)? How should we apply the finding of this paper to future studies? • I do not fully understand the theoretical model derivation. I have three concerns: First, following the fundamental definition of energy rebound effects, this paper should show the equations/functions of actual savings and theoretical savings. The authors have shown the function form of theoretical savings but not the actual savings. For me, it is not clear what the function of actual savings looks like in this paper. Second, from my understanding, theoretical saving is based on an assumption that demand does not change. In this meaning, the base year in equation (3) should be Yt instead of Yt+1. Third, this paper uses the ratio of GTFP (growth of TFP) to the growth of economy to measure the contribution of technological progress to economic growth (line 160, equation 11). I am not sure whether this measurement is reasonable or not. The authors need to clarify this argument. What are the assumptions and limitations? • This paper is focused on carbon emission reductions (addressing negative externalities) when discussing the impact of energy rebound effect. This may not be the whole picture if we consider the comprehensive welfare effects of energy rebound. On the other hand, “the macroeconomic price effect of an energy efficiency improvement arises from reaching equilibria in markets, which improves welfare. Sectoral reallocation leads to more efficient production in an economy, improving welfare. If the energy efficiency improvement induces innovation, this would also improve welfare” (Gillingham, Rapson, & Wagner, 2016). I suggest that this paper should discuss the energy rebound effect comprehensively. Minor points: • Table 2 can also show the descriptive statistics by different sectors or industries. • On line 438, this paper mentions “the long-term energy efficiency policy that focuses on the high-energy-consuming industry should be shifted toward the low energy-consuming industry.” It could be much better to lay out specific policy suggestions for the low-energy-consuming industry. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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