Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 21, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-26266Depression in association with neutrophil-to-lymphocyte, platelet-to-lymphocyte, and advanced lung cancer inflammation index biomarkers predicting lung cancer survivalPLOS ONE Dear Authors, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Dec 08 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study aims to assess depression in association with neutrophil-to-lymphocyte, platelet-to-lymphocyte, and advanced lung cancer inflammation index biomarkers predicting lung cancer survival. The manuscript could be improved based on the following comments. Measures Page 8, typo error 'following ace[ted' Page 8, the sentence ‘income level, and ever smoker (Y/N) as self-reported by patients; lung’ requires revision. Statistical Analysis The level of accepted statistical significance to be stated. The proper citation for the R software to be stated. Results The results of identification of potential covariates using correlation or chi-square test to be presented. Page 12, if 1 decimal point is used for the percentage figure, ensure all are standardized throughout the manuscript. Likewise with 95%CI, two vs three decimal points. Page 12, for ‘and treatment received.’ it is to be written as ‘and treatment received at baseline.’ (as stated in Table 2 footnote) Page 13, the word ‘95%CI’ was missing for some CI figures. Page 13 , for ‘The log rank test yielded p<0.0051.’ is the result correct? Please double-check others as well with Figure 2. Page 13, log rank for ALI to be stated. Page 14, the statement on adjustment of covariates in the text and Table 3 footnote is different. Page 14 Table 3 footnote, typo error ‘covariates save BMI’. Figure 1, 2 and 3 in the PDF form are not very clear and difficult to visualize (photos in tiff format are fine). Figure 2, the p value to be denoted in the figure footnote. If the p values here are log rank p values, ensure the p values are similar to those cited in Page 13. Figure 3 the error bar to be clearly denoted in the figure footnote. Figure 3 footnote, typo Fig 35B, Fig 35C. The citations in text and list of references were not conformed to the journal format. Reviewer #2: Thank you for possibility to review this interesting paper. The study points out important issues related to problems occurring together with lung cancer diagnosis and treatment. The paper is well written, though it includes several typos, which should be corrected. The study design is pretty good, though some details might have been added to strengthen it. My comments come as follows: 1. the introduction section is too long and contains some parts which further occur in the Discussion. It should be shortened. 2. Methods it is unclear if the patients had reactive depression related to the diagnosis or previously existing, or both subgroups are included. Moreover, it seems that the study comprises patients at different days after getting diagnosis - I suppose that the depression intensity may be different at first days and some people may or not develop improvement or worsening after some period of time 3. My largest concern, and I do not know if it is able to solve that item, is the question if the inflammatory intensity was related to the cancer stage/advancement/influence at other organs, or depression itself. Please comment on this, at least for the reviewer answer 4. do the authors suggest that inflammatory response was the result of depression or depression resulted (In part) from the inflammation. 5. The figures and tables are of poor quality ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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Depression in association with neutrophil-to-lymphocyte, platelet-to-lymphocyte, and advanced lung cancer inflammation index biomarkers predicting lung cancer survival PONE-D-22-26266R1 Dear AUTHORS, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Tomasz Urbanowicz Academic Editor PLOS ONE ********** |
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PONE-D-22-26266R1 Depression in association with neutrophil-to-lymphocyte, platelet-to-lymphocyte, and advanced lung cancer inflammation index biomarkers predicting lung cancer survival Dear Dr. Carson: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of MR Tomasz Urbanowicz Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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