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| Original SubmissionNovember 3, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-30373Social Preferences in the Public Goods Game – An Agent-Based Simulation with EconSimPLOS ONE Dear Dr. Christoph Bühren, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We received three reports on your manuscript, and all of them see potentiality in your work. However, they recommend improving the paper through a major revision. Please submit your revised manuscript by January 19, 2023. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors focus their study on the problem of social preferences in the public goods by introducing a reinforcement learning approach where they model an agent based simulation of a public goods game with endogenous punishments institutions. Additionally, the authors introduce an outcome based model of social preferences that is capable to determine the agents utility, the contribution, as well as the voting behavior during the learning process. The manuscript is overall well written and easy to follow and the authors have well thought out their main contributions. The provided theoretical analysis is concrete, complete, and correct and the authors have provided all the intermediate steps in order to enable the average reader to easily follow it. Furthermore, the authors have provided a very detailed set of numerical results in order to show the pure operation and the performance of the proposed framework. The authors are highly encouraged to consider the following suggestions provided by the reviewer in order to improve the scientific depth of their manuscript, as well as they need to address the following comments in order to improve the quality of presentation of their manuscript. Initially, the provided related work in section one and two, needs to be substantially revised in order to be presented by using more summative language in order to better identify the research contributions that have already been performed in the literature and the research gap that the authors try to address. In Section 1, the authors need to discuss existing approaches that have been introduced in the recent literature, such as A Paradigm Shift Toward Satisfaction, Realism and Efficiency in Wireless Networks Resource Sharing, doi: 10.1109/MNET.011.2000368 that they consider the concepts of satisfaction, humans behavior in limited information environments, and they discussed the concept of satisfaction games in order to overcome those burdens. The provided related work needs to be substantially revised in order to capture the most recent advances in the field. Furthermore, the authors need to include an additional section in their manuscript describing the implementation cost of the proposed study for the readers that are interested in reproducing the proposed model. Finally, the overall manuscript needs to be checked for typos, syntax, and grammar errors in order to improve the quality of its presentation. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript, the authors apply the reinforcement learning algorithm to model an agent-based simulation of the public goods game with endogenous punishment, as well as develop an outcome-based model of social preferences to determine the agent’s utility, contribution, and voting behavior during the learning procedure. It is found that the proposed model can replicate human behavior and has provided an important insight into understanding the underlying motives of human behavior. Besides, the proposed method can be extended to more complicated simulations. After reading the paper, I think that it is an interesting work and have some following comments. 1. It is interesting to incorporate the reinforcement learning into evolutionary game. But I think that it is necessary to clarify why agents in evolutionary games can use the learning algorithm to update their actions. In order to help readers understand this point, the authors can given some description. 2. In the subsection 3.5 and 3.6, two different types of punishment institutions are mentioned, that is, exogenous punishment institutions and endogenous punishment institutions. These two concepts of punishment institutions may be needed to be explained. Besides, it would be better to cite some related works regarding the exogenous (endogenous) punishment. For example, Journal of the Royal Society Interface, 12 (2015) 20140935; Physics Letters A, 386(2021) 126965; Europhysics Letters, 136 (2022) 68002. 3. Page 3: In the first paragraph of subsection 2.1, the description of the first equation (i.e., \\pi=…) could come first, and then write the expression of equation. For example, “In the sorting game, subjects were randomly shuffled into groups of five to play a standard one-shot public goods game…0.3.” should be changed to “In the sorting game, subjects were randomly shuffled into groups of five to play a standard one-shot public goods game. In the game, the endowment was set to 350 tokens, and the participants simultaneously decided on their individual contribution $_i $ to the public good. The marginal product of the public good is $=1.5$ and the marginal per capita return $/= 0.3$. In this case, the payoff function can be written as $pi=…$”. In addition, the digital labels should be added for the equations. 4. There exist some typos, please correct them. For example, in page 3: in the first paragraph of subsection 3.2, “public good” should be changed to “public goods”. Reviewer #3: The paper provides a simple agent-based model based on reinforcement learning and social preferences to reproduce the results of previous laboratory experiments. In my opinion, this is a nice idea, and the paper seems to be interesting and successful in reproducing experimental findings through computer simulations. However, I have some comments aimed at clarifying some of the more critical points I detected after reading the paper. Section 2. The authors introduce a previous paper on a public goods with endogenous punishment with a sorting mechanism based on participants’ previous contributions in a one-shot game. Then, they discuss how groups of agents learn something during the game (just before Subsection 2.1). It is not clear to me if we are still referring to a one-shot game or a repeated one. In Subsection 2.1, a payoff function with an endowment of 350 token is commented. One may wonder if the number 350 has a particular validity within this framework. Moreover, why the choice for the marginal product of public good was a=1.5 and not another value. I am a bit confused about the difference between Sorted-Info and Sorted treatments. Please provide a clearer explanation in the text. A second payoff function is then introduced, this time with 100. Why now the number is no longer 350 but rather 100? And why that specific value? The next payoff function includes also a punishment technology. Within this setting, the authors assume that: “Every person contributing less than the maximum of 100 tokens to the public good automatically had to pay a fine of 50 under mild punishment and 90 in the severe punishment scheme.” My impression is that such an assumption is a quite strong one because it implies that contributing 99 or 1 has the same consequences for punishment. It does not make a lot of sense in my view (but under very extreme scenarios). It would be nice to provide an explanation of what EcoSim is when it is firstly introduced in the text. In Subsection 3.1, the authors provide a short explanation of the simulation software they used. Anyway, I do not see a specific reason why this kind of simulation software could be considered an effective one. Given the simplicity of the setting, this is something that one would do from the scratch or with many other programming tools. Thus, I would suggest to downsize the role of the simulation software because, at least this was my understanding, there is not a specific motivation for using this particular tool or its modular architecture. Beginning of page 7. I do not see the fundamental difference between r and q. Why using q in relation to a(t-1) and r in relation to a(t)? Last equation of page 7. The equation is not for defining the interval between the minimum and maximum temperature as maintained by the authors. Rather, it is about the evolution of the temperature within a given interval. Moreover, it is not so clear the comment about when the update scheme is active or not. In my view, Section 3.4 is too much long and contains comments that can be condensed in less lines. Mostly important, the results should be presented in a more organized and schematic way. I did not understand why one should normalize utilities to a range from 0 to 100 when higher values can occur and, indeed, they are commented in subsequent lines and sections. Page 12. “This is because the Nash Equilibrium does not change with mild punishment.” I guess this is not a general result as it may depend on the definition of a ‘mild’ punishment institution (basically the values of fees and sanctions). Table 3. It would be interesting to understand why a specific choice of weights is proposed to characterize a type of agent. Table 4. Many parameters feature the learning algorithm. The choice of specific values should be motivated, based on the literature or perhaps the empirical and/or experimental evidence. In general, the authors should perform some sensitivity analyses on single parameters as well as on their combinations in order to understand their role in shaping simulation results. The graphical analysis proposed in Figures at pages 24 and 25 is quite rough and could be refined, also including some statistics on the simulation results. Moreover, the paper would gain in readability from a better organization and a more schematic presentations of results. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed in detail the reviewers' comments. A very detailed revision of the paper has been performed and detailed answers to the reviewers' comments have been provided. This reviewer has no further concerns about this paper. Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed my comments accordingly and I would like to recommend the publication of the work in PLoS ONE. Reviewer #3: I am satisfied with the revision of the paper in response to the points I raised during the first round of the reviewing process. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** |
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