Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 10, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-31018Aging decreases docosahexaenoic acid transport across blood-brain barrier in C57BL/6J micePLOS ONE Dear Dr. Dohgu, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses all the points raised during the review process. ============================== Two experts evaluated the manuscript. Both of them found the paper interesting and valuable and suggested amendments. No new experiments are needed, but new calculations/normalizations may be needed, the limitations of the methods and experiments should be addressed in details (Discussion) and the conclusions should be drawn more carefully. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 13 2023 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The paper is technically sound and interesting. The main concern is that no appropriate analytical method was used to prove that DHA is indeed in its non-esterified structure. Once living tissue is involved, either cells or in-vivo you cannot be certain that the DHA is not metabolized rapidly by secreted/cellular factors. Although the media in the cells experiments was devoid of proteins and PL and in-vivo the authors used the transcardiac brain perfusion technique, these can only increase the possibility of DHA not being esterified before the transport to/by the EC. This is of course even more important when looking at DHA levels inside the brain after it has been transported via the BBB; using radiolabeled DHA and measuring it in brain tissue doesn’t guarantee that what you “see” is NE-DHA. You can only conclude that the CPM levels were increased and assume that it is related to some form of DHA. (In which position was the DHA labelled exactly with C14?). So, the author conclusion is not based on experimental evidence rather on assumptions. Basically, the use of [14C] alone cannot inform about the physiological process of DHA uptake by the transporter: 1- Not knowing in which C position is the label, it is impossible to understand how the molecule was processed: as a structural component or as a beta oxidation substrate? 2-The labelled DHA may have gone through re-esterification in the system (in vivo or in vitro) and therefore it is no longer unesterified. Besides that, the experiments are sound and the data about mfsd2a and fabp5 levels in aging mice is interesting and important. But again, also here, the conclusions are too strong and need to be tuned down. For example, the increase in fabp4 (4 fold) is very impressive suggesting that this protein might be important in the aged brain. Is it possible that its activation is reduced with age therefore the cells increase its production? the authors need to work on a better model which is more related to the molecular events they intend to describe. In the present form, the conclusions are based on inferences rather than facts. Other issues to address: 1. Please give evidence (or at least reference) for the purification level of the isolated brain blood vessels (IBV). How can you be sure that the results obtained with IBV are not derived from contaminating non-EC cells in the BV fraction? To be more certain about the conclusions derived from experiments with BV, one should conduct parallel experiments with highly purified BEC for example. 2. How do you account for the lack of decrease in BBB permeability to mannitol with age? There is plenty of literature regarding leakiness of the BBB in normal aging, especially in the Hipp (see Zlokovic papers for example). This point needs to be better discussed. 3. Please show the plateau obtained in the uptake experiments (line 395) 4. Lines: 67-71: This statement regarding ALA is controversial. Whereas dietary maritime DHA supply has been regarded as the main efficient source of brain DHA the ability of its metabolic precursor, terrestrial ALA, to support brain DHA (as well as EPA), has rarely been examined. Recent studies have begun to indicate that ALA enrichment in adult diets and in maternal diets during fetal development and weaning increases brain DHA levels and higher expression of Mfsd2a indicating ALA ability to enable higher DHA levels and improved BBB transport. Please refer to this literature. 5. Why is sucrose used instead of mannitol? Please discuss the differences between the 2 markers and state the reason for using each marker in the different experiments 6. In the cellular uptake experiments after transfection, do you account for cellular death? Any other factors that may affect uptake which are not related to mfsd2a levels? Did you try pharmacological inhibition of the transporter? 7. References missing in line 513 regarding DHA and cognitive decline 8. When counting C14 inside the brain parenchyma, how do you make sure the C14 doesn’t originate from the BV in this tissue without BV depletion? Please describe in more details the brain perfusion technique and why do you think it provides the experimental conditions for the NE-DHA to remain NE. Is it possible that the injected DHA will be metabolized before binding to mfsd2a on the BEC? The same for the in-vitro studies. See PMID: 9886086, as an example: it is a useful reference to understand how a follow up of DHA location may be done. 9. Lines 527-529 in discussion: did you test for significance between the regions? Please do, otherwise you cant say that. 10. The term “vascular space” should be better defined 11. Lines 581-582: this conclusion doesn’t stem from your results. You didn’t check it. 12. To strengthen the conclusions derived from the in-vitro studies one should add at least one of the following: competition with cold DHA, pharmacological inhibition, use other substrates which are ligands for other transporters and show they are not affected by the transfection. And again, measurements of radioactivity and not directly DHA using other analytical methods (HPLC and GC) can only provide assumptions and not proofs of what is the exact DHA form in the different stages/regions. Reviewer #2: Major: The in situ transcardiac perfusion was developed by William Banks laboratory, and later optimized for fatty acid by Pan et al. (https://pubs.acs.org/doi/10.1021/acs.molpharmaceut.5b00580). Please also include Pan et al as reference here (i.e. current reference 13). Can the authors confirm if they have included BSA in the perfusion fluid, as otherwise 2 mL/min may not give sufficient pressure for proper perfusion. If BSA was not included, please justify if 2 mL/min is appropriate. Fig 1 & 2, please express B:P ratio as mL/mg OR mL/g, rather than normalizing all values to that of 2 months old as a %. Fig 3 - The MW of FABP5 is ~ 15 kDa, but it was labeled as 25 kDa. Is this a mistake? Again, do not normalize to 2 month old. Fig 4 - Please change the unit to mL/g rather than uL/g I am unsure if it will change the conclusion without normalizing to 2 month old. I will comment on the discussion when I see the revised manuscript. Minor Line 119-120, please specify isotope for DHA, sucrose in the subheading ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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