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Original SubmissionNovember 23, 2022
Decision Letter - Loredana Bellantuono, Editor

PONE-D-22-32361Increasing Transparency in Machine Learning through Bootstrap Simulation and Shapely Additive ExplanationsPLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: This paper addresses the problem of machine learning explainability to medicine. Through bootstrap simulation and Shapley Additive exPlanations (SHAP), the study aims to increase model transparency and reliability and improve model selection.

Strengths:

1) The paper presented an interesting approach and evaluated the chosen dataset well.

2) The system presented has potential for wide-scale deployment, tested against many strong baselines.

Weaknesses:

Although the paper presented interesting contributions towards the problem of machine learning explainability in health, a few areas still need some improvement.

• Abstract: In the abstract, only the XGBoost was mentioned as the model used, but other models, such as Random Forest, Artificial Neural Network etc was used in the study.

• Compare results with findings in literature: It might be worth comparing the findings of this study with that in the literature. It is essential to know what was learnt and the methodology used.

• SHAP over other tools: Although ML explainability is relatively new, several tools have been explored in the literature. It might be worth asking why the choice of SHAP over others, such as ELI5, LIME and Yellowbrick, etc.

• Sketchy literature: For an emerging study, the literature appears insufficient missing prior work in this area. How is this study different from the below (cite if relevant):

o Dave, D., Naik, H., Singhal, S. and Patel, P., 2020. Explainable ai meets healthcare: A study on heart disease dataset. arXiv preprint arXiv:2011.03195.

o Shi, H., Yang, D., Tang, K., Hu, C., Li, L., Zhang, L., Gong, T. and Cui, Y., 2022. Explainable machine learning model for predicting the occurrence of postoperative malnutrition in children with congenital heart disease. Clinical Nutrition, 41(1), pp.202-210.

o Lu, S., Chen, R., Wei, W., Belovsky, M. and Lu, X., 2021. Understanding Heart Failure Patients EHR Clinical Features via SHAP Interpretation of Tree-Based Machine Learning Model Predictions. In AMIA Annual Symposium Proceedings (Vol. 2021, p. 813). American Medical Informatics Association.

o Zhou, Y., Chen, S., Rao, Z., Yang, D., Liu, X., Dong, N. and Li, F., 2021. Prediction of 1-year mortality after heart transplantation using machine learning approaches: A single-center study from China. International Journal of Cardiology, 339, pp.21-27.

o Chaves, J.M.Z., Chaudhari, A.S., Wentland, A.L., Desai, A.D., Banerjee, I., Boutin, R.D., Maron, D.J., Rodriguez, F., Sandhu, A.T., Jeffrey, R.B. and Rubin, D., 2021. Opportunistic assessment of ischemic heart disease risk using abdominopelvic computed tomography and medical record data: a multimodal explainable artificial intelligence approach. medRxiv.

o Obaido, G., Ogbuokiri, B., Swart, T.G., Ayawei, N., Kasongo, S.M., Aruleba, K., Mienye, I.D., Aruleba, I., Chukwu, W., Osaye, F. and Egbelowo, O.F., 2022. An Interpretable Machine Learning Approach for Hepatitis B Diagnosis. Applied Sciences, 12(21), p.11127.

Reviewer #2: The paper is clearly written, reproducible and technically fine, in terms of statistical analyses performed.

My concern, beyond the limitations that the authors have addressed is to discuss the approach with more complex designs (data cohorts, variables) that the one in use.

The design is the following:

Independent Variables: Demographic covariates (age and sex). Clinical covariates (Resting blood

pressure, fasting blood sugar, cholesterol, resting electrocardiogram (ECG), presence of Angina,

and maximum heart rate).

Dependent variable: heart disease, as diagnosed by a clinician.

Especially from EHR, one expects to find a mix of information sources with data of different nature, and this aspect of multimodality complicates model selection and may require different strategies to measure performance and explanation.

This might calls for more heterogeneous data to be analyzed with methods to be compared, which is in part one of the limitations that the authors have reported.

The authors should discuss more in depth this part.

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Reviewer #2: No

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Comments to the Author

1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Yes

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: This paper addresses the problem of machine learning explainability to medicine. Through bootstrap simulation and Shapley Additive exPlanations (SHAP), the study aims to increase model transparency and reliability and improve model selection.

Strengths:

1) The paper presented an interesting approach and evaluated the chosen dataset well.

2) The system presented has potential for wide-scale deployment, tested against many strong baselines.

Weaknesses:

Although the paper presented interesting contributions towards the problem of machine learning explainability in health, a few areas still need some improvement.

• Abstract: In the abstract, only the XGBoost was mentioned as the model used, but other models, such as Random Forest, Artificial Neural Network etc was used in the study.

Thank you for bringing this to our attention we have made the change.

• Compare results with findings in literature: It might be worth comparing the findings of this study with that in the literature. It is essential to know what was learnt and the methodology used.

Thank you for bringing this to our attention, we have made the change.

• SHAP over other tools: Although ML explainability is relatively new, several tools have been explored in the literature. It might be worth asking why the choice of SHAP over others, such as ELI5, LIME and Yellowbrick, etc.

We did a literature search and found SHAP to be most prevalent over others. Additionally, SHAP has packages within R and python that are compatible with machine learning methods used in this study. Further research is needed to compare the efficacy of models such as SHAP with ELI5, LIME, and Yellowbrick, etc. Goal of paper is to generate a workflow for machine learning, taking into account bootstrapping to generate the distribution for model accuracy statistics, evaluate the feature importances of all our covariates, and highlight the utility of model explanation, only SHAP was used in the study, but we agree with the suggestions above and will do it as a line of inquiry in our next.

• Sketchy literature: For an emerging study, the literature appears insufficient missing prior work in this area. How is this study different from the below (cite if relevant):

o Dave, D., Naik, H., Singhal, S. and Patel, P., 2020. Explainable ai meets healthcare: A study on heart disease dataset. arXiv preprint arXiv:2011.03195.

o Shi, H., Yang, D., Tang, K., Hu, C., Li, L., Zhang, L., Gong, T. and Cui, Y., 2022. Explainable machine learning model for predicting the occurrence of postoperative malnutrition in children with congenital heart disease. Clinical Nutrition, 41(1), pp.202-210.

o Lu, S., Chen, R., Wei, W., Belovsky, M. and Lu, X., 2021. Understanding Heart Failure Patients EHR Clinical Features via SHAP Interpretation of Tree-Based Machine Learning Model Predictions. In AMIA Annual Symposium Proceedings (Vol. 2021, p. 813). American Medical Informatics Association.

o Zhou, Y., Chen, S., Rao, Z., Yang, D., Liu, X., Dong, N. and Li, F., 2021. Prediction of 1-year mortality after heart transplantation using machine learning approaches: A single-center study from China. International Journal of Cardiology, 339, pp.21-27.

o Chaves, J.M.Z., Chaudhari, A.S., Wentland, A.L., Desai, A.D., Banerjee, I., Boutin, R.D., Maron, D.J., Rodriguez, F., Sandhu, A.T., Jeffrey, R.B. and Rubin, D., 2021. Opportunistic assessment of ischemic heart disease risk using abdominopelvic computed tomography and medical record data: a multimodal explainable artificial intelligence approach. medRxiv.

o Obaido, G., Ogbuokiri, B., Swart, T.G., Ayawei, N., Kasongo, S.M., Aruleba, K., Mienye, I.D., Aruleba, I., Chukwu, W., Osaye, F. and Egbelowo, O.F., 2022. An Interpretable Machine Learning Approach for Hepatitis B Diagnosis. Applied Sciences, 12(21), p.11127.

Thank you for suggesting these papers. They have been helpful in revising the introduction and discussion to add greater depth. All of these papers are references either in the introduction or the discussion. What our study brings to the literature is a comprehensive framework for machine learning for medical applications. They consist of an initial machine learning selection methodology that utilizes bootstrap simulation to compute confidence intervals of numerous model accuracy statistics, which is not readily done by current studies. Furthermore, this methodology incorporates multiple feature importance statistics for feature selection. Lastly, the clinically relevant features within the model can be visualized accurately using SHAP. This methodology will streamline the reporting of machine learning by first highlighting the variability of machine learning accuracy statistics even when utilizing the same dataset, using feature importance statistics to understand how the model values each feature and finally utilizing SHAP visualization to understand how the model is generating predictions from each covariate.

Reviewer #2: The paper is clearly written, reproducible and technically fine, in terms of statistical analyses performed.

My concern, beyond the limitations that the authors have addressed is to discuss the approach with more complex designs (data cohorts, variables) that the one in use.

The design is the following:

Independent Variables: Demographic covariates (age and sex). Clinical covariates (Resting blood

pressure, fasting blood sugar, cholesterol, resting electrocardiogram (ECG), presence of Angina,

and maximum heart rate).

Dependent variable: heart disease, as diagnosed by a clinician.

Especially from EHR, one expects to find a mix of information sources with data of different nature, and this aspect of multimodality complicates model selection and may require different strategies to measure performance and explanation.

This might calls for more heterogeneous data to be analyzed with methods to be compared, which is in part one of the limitations that the authors have reported.

The authors should discuss more in depth this part.

The authors would like to thank the reviewer for highlighting such an important further analysis. The authors have addressed this in the limitations and discussed it more in depth.

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Decision Letter - Loredana Bellantuono, Editor

Increasing Transparency in Machine Learning through Bootstrap Simulation and Shapely Additive Explanations

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Increasing Transparency in Machine Learning through Bootstrap Simulation and Shapely Additive Explanations

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