Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 30, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-24040Association between the proportion of laparoscopic approaches for digestive surgeries and the incidence of consequent surgical site infections, 2009-2019: A retrospective observational study based on national surveillance data PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Toshiki Kajihara, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Nov 03 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Additional Editor Comments: Dear Dr. Toshiki Kajihara: Thank you very much for allowing PLOS ONE team to see your submission entitled "Association between the proportion of laparoscopic approaches for digestive surgeries and the incidence of consequent surgical site infections, 2009-2019: A retrospective observational study based on national surveillance data". We have now reviewed your submission and our view is that some major revisions are required before we can consider it for publication. This email is to invite you to respond to the reviewers comments attached below, and to revise your submission accordingly. We appreciate that these revisions will take some time and effort on your part, but we are confident that they will improve the quality and impact of your submission. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: I Don't Know ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is a large register-based study on surgical site infection (SSI) rate diagnosed in hospitals in Japan from 2009-2019. The study also report on the rate of laparoscopic procedures separately for this period. However, the study does not report the SSI rate after laparoscopic procedures. The study would benefit from a more detailed and transparent method section e.g. using RECORD statement, and maybe also other analyses depending on the data available. Major comments: 1. It is not clear if your manuscript is reported in accordance with a reporting guideline, and the study design is not definitely clear to me. But I presume that RECCORD (https://www.equator-network.org/reporting-guidelines/record/) that is for register-based studies using routinely-collected health data would suit your manuscript and increase the transparency of your reporting. 2. Your outcome is somewhat unclear. You state that CDC definition was used, however, being unfamiliar with the JANIS SSI, it is unclear to me if the physicians at the hospital confirm SSI according to CDC when they report an SSI in JANIS SSI. Furthermore, it seems that JANIS SSI only include hospital data – what about the SSI treated at the patients private physician? Thus, I presume that you report the rate of SSI diagnosed in hospitals, correct? 3. Your study covers 10 years of data. It is evident from your data that the laparoscopic procedures increase tremendously during this period. However, could other factor contribute to decrease of SSIs? Patient-related factors, co-interventions such as prophylactic or empiric antibiotic treatment or others? There is no baseline information on the population receiving these procedures and the development in these over time. All your analyses are unadjusted. But this could be a limitation of your results. Please address in the result section or limitations section in the discussion depending on the data you have available. 4. If data are available you could address 3) by differentiating the types of procedures e.g. by using the surgical codes, if these are available. Minor comments: 1. Introduction: Please ad a reference and be more specific than overall complications for the following sentence: “Laparoscopic techniques have been increasingly used in digestive surgeries, leading to fewer postoperative complications.” 2. Methods: Please add more information on the setting. You write “More hospitals progressively joined the JANIS SSI 91 section, and the program included 785 hospitals in 2019.” But what are the total number of hospitals in Japan, in other words how well is your coverage? 3. Methods: Are the procedures submitted to JANIS SSI reported by the hospital og linked by another nationwide register? How where they reported – as procedure codes? Which where used? 4. Methods: Who submit the outcome, SSI, according to CDC definitions? Hospitals, private practitioners? Is the outcome validated to follow CDC definitions? 5. Methods: How was a laparoscopic procedure confirmed? 6. Discussion: Please add a limitations section to your discussion. Reviewer #2: The authors retrospectively investigated SSI ratio using their surveillance system form 2009 to 2019. I think several points should be addressed as follows. How to collect all data from the hospitals participating in the surveillance? EDC system? CRF by each year? Please represent SSI data showing the differences of superficial, deep or organ. How much was the SSI rate of upper GI surgery? Rec shows high SSI rate, because of the stoma creation, or the incidence coming from the perineal wound? The data of the difference between emergency and scheduled surgeries should be described. What does the table 2 mean? Odd ratio was compared to that of the start year? The trend, fashion and equipment are changing year by year. It is difficult to compare the risk ratio. The caption of the figure axis should be rewritten (e.g., "proportion" should be "Proportion" in Figure 2 and with high DPI figures). ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Siv Fonnes Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Association between the proportion of laparoscopic approaches for digestive surgeries and the incidence of consequent surgical site infections, 2009-2019: A retrospective observational study based on national surveillance data in Japan PONE-D-22-24040R1 Dear Dr. Kajihara, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Takehiko Hanaki, MD, PhD Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Thank you for addressing all comments and for writing a more transparent method section and for adding a limitation section in the discussion section. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Siv Fonnes Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-24040R1 Association between the proportion of laparoscopic approaches for digestive surgeries and the incidence of consequent surgical site infections, 2009-2019: A retrospective observational study based on national surveillance data in Japan Dear Dr. Kajihara: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Takehiko Hanaki Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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