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| Original SubmissionJanuary 20, 2022 |
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PONE-D-22-01490DEVELOPMENT AND VALIDATION OF A CLINICAL SCORE FOR IDENTIFYING PATIENTS WITH HIGH RISK OF LATENT AUTOIMMUNE ADULT DIABETES (LADA): THE LADA PRIMARY CARE-PROTOCOL STUDY.PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Vich-Perez, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Oct 29 2022 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: Important study for primary clinical practice, but far implications on LADA patients management Otherwise, Fourlanos criteria must be upgraded and improved. Reviewer #2: Thank you very much for inviting me to review this interesting manuscript. This manuscript describes the development and validation of a clinical score that might help to identify patients at high risk of developing LADA in primary care (The LADA primary care study) in addition to estimate the frequency of LADA in newly diagnosed adult patients in Madrid and to describe the characteristics of these patients ( LADA/non LADA). It includes a pilot project (as a proof of concept) followed by the main study. It is important to diagnose LADA at presentation so the correct therapeutic measures can be implemented while minimizing the risk of developing DKA and a simple, clinic score tool might facilitate this process. The prevalence of LADA in Madrid - and in general in Spain- has not been fully described in the literature hence the proposed objectives are indeed valid. However, a number of questions require some clarification and these are listed below alongside with some comments/suggestions: 1. Although most of the proposed protocol can be found within the document, this has been presented in a slightly disjointed manner, making quite challenging to smoothly follow it. For example, in the "discussion" the following paragraph " each researcher will generate a list of patients [...] the usual clinical practice" will be better placed in methods. The flow chart does not clearly differentiate between the pilot and the main study nor the two groups of patients that will be compared ( LADA and non LADA). This is also rather unclear in the main body of the document. 2. This has been described as an observational, cross sectional, multicenter study. The study subjects are 30 years old (or older) who have been diagnosed with type 2 diabetes in the last 4 years (and diagnosed for at least 6 months). Is the data collected mainly retrospectively using the electronic data collection notebook (eDCN) or will it also include prospective data (and it so with what purpose and how often)? Where will be this prospective data recorded? This should be clearer in the main body of the paper. 3. Is the length of the study 3 or 4 years, please? Both durations have been mentioned within the document. Please, also clarify the estimated enrollment date for the last patient ( 03/31/2023) since this is just above one year from the start of the study. If this is correct, please clarify why the study will be extended for another 3 years. 4. How would the incidence of LADA be estimated in new patients if this is mainly a retrospective study? 5. Is the population served by the 3 pilot centers and the 7 remaining centers that agreed to participate in the study representative of the overall population in Madrid? Is there any variation in ethnicity or deprivation indexes for example that could potentially cause bias? And if so, how this will be addressed, please? 6. How do you propose to recruit the patients for the study? Could most of the data be extracted just by using the electronic data collection notebook (eDCN) rather than by interviewing? How will the patients be consented? 7. Exclusion criteria should include gestational diabetes and use of steroids at the time of diagnosis. 8. Sample size calculation for developing the clinical score: this has been calculated assuming a 10% prevalence of LADA however this prevalence seems to be variable depending on geographical locations. Northern European countries appear to have a higher prevalence than Southern European countries. Although Action LADA 7 (reference 4) suggested a prevalence of 9.7%, the 9 participating countries were predominantly from North/Central Europe with an estimated prevalence of around 10% whereas in Italy (another participating country, also reference 6) it has been reported to be as low as 4.5%. Action LADA 7 also selected patients from both primary and secondary care centers which might bias the data further. Reference 14 reports a prevalence of 3.7% in South Spain. Could this variation in prevalence impact in the size of the cohort required for the study and if so, how will this be addressed, please? 9. Please, kindly report HbA1c concentration in IFCC-standardized units (mmol/mol) in addition to DCCT units (%). It will be also helpful if blood glucose values could be reported in mmol/L. 10. In the flow chart, it reads “First visit. Inclusion criteria. Informed consent. Exam, interview and lab test”. What type of exam (examination?) will be conducted?. Please, if abbreviations are used, clarify what they mean. 11. I read with interest that anti peroxidase antibodies and anti-thyroglobulin antibodies will be tested as part of the protocol. Anti- thyroid peroxidase antibodies (anti-TPO antibodies) are a marker of thyroid autoimmunity and anti-thyroglobulin antibodies are primarily used as a long term tool to monitor patients with thyroid cancer. The second will have no added value in the proposed study. If the former is used to check for additional autoimmunity why this has been limited to the thyroid gland and not extended to additional autoimmune processes elsewhere? ( Coeliac, Addison, Pernicious anemia and so on). Would it be more informative if anti tyrosine phosphatase like insulinoma ( IA-2) and Zinc transporter 8 ( Zn-T8) antibodies are checked instead? 12. Please, clarify the reasons behind using the criteria of the Immunology of Diabetes Society to stratify patients with and without LADA rather than the Fourlanos criteria. 13. Could you provide some of the references used to describe the validity of the model, the discriminatory capacity of the model and the calibration of the model, please? 14. Could you anticipate any additional bias that could affect the study design? 15. I strongly recommend to find the support of a scientific English editor. Although the document is written in standard English, there are multiple typos and inaccurate/incorrect wording. Some examples to illustrate this are: - instead of "more profitable"= cost effective - instead of "practically exclude the disease"= highly unlikely - instead of " to validate it in our environment"= to locally validate it - instead of "geographic"= geographical areas - instead of "losses of patients"= patient drops out - instead of " they will be summoned"= they will be recalled or invited - instead of "inclusion clearance"= following recruitment - instead of "size" ( kindly check in anthropometric variables)= height - instead of "conceptualization"= study conception - instead of "data curation"= data collection - instead of " formal analysis"= statistical analysis - instead of "methodology"= study design - patients are not LADA nor gestational diabetes nor T2DM but have LADA, gestational diabetes or T2DM - it is unclear what "systematic of 18 determinations of biochemistry "means. - in the flow chart it is mentioned "patients with T2DM over 30 years"= do you mean the patients have T2DM for more than 30 years or that the patients are 30 years old or older? - usually up to 3 references can be added in the document independently (19, 20, 21), if more than 3 consecutive references are mentioned a different format is preferred (18, 22-28) Overall, good concept and effort with good supporting references however, major changes are required, especially in the description of the pilot, main study, material and methods and flow chart. Reviewer #3: 1. Page 11 Paragraph 7: Authors mentioned that “the fact that no subsequent studies have been carried out in other geographic areas to validate score, would make necessary, from our point of view, to validate it in our environment and to test the possibility of including other variables that are more frequent in patients with LADA (for example, HDL cholesterol that is higher in LADA than in T2DM)” - Is HDL cholesterol always high in all LADA patients than T2DM? How is this a specific parameter to score and screen for LADA? Also, in the subsequent paragraph reference 37 it is mentioned that most of the patients screened were well controlled with lipids. 2. How much does the prior treatment with drugs for DM /other drugs listed in S17 table affect the score? 3. How is the final score arrived at? 4. Table S17 covers a range of drugs covered for different conditions. The effect of each of these drugs can be varied and affect the scoring. Whether this can make a bias in deriving the score? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Zoran Gluvic, MD, PhD Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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DEVELOPMENT AND VALIDATION OF A CLINICAL SCORE FOR IDENTIFYING PATIENTS WITH HIGH RISK OF LATENT AUTOIMMUNE ADULT DIABETES (LADA): THE LADA PRIMARY CARE-PROTOCOL STUDY. PONE-D-22-01490R1 Dear Dr. Vich-Perez, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. 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Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses? The manuscript should describe the methods in sufficient detail to prevent undisclosed flexibility in the experimental procedure or analysis pipeline, including sufficient outcome-neutral conditions (e.g. necessary controls, absence of floor or ceiling effects) to test the proposed hypotheses and a statistical power analysis where applicable. As there may be aspects of the methodology and analysis which can only be refined once the work is undertaken, authors should outline potential assumptions and explicitly describe what aspects of the proposed analyses, if any, are exploratory. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable? Descriptions of methods and materials in the protocol should be reported in sufficient detail for another researcher to reproduce all experiments and analyses. The protocol should describe the appropriate controls, sample size calculations, and replication needed to ensure that the data are robust and reproducible. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception, at the time of publication. The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors made an effort to improve the paper. As I already mentioned, the Fourlanos criteria must be improved regarding adaptation to current guidelines. A lot of problems encountered in the paper were in detail improved by authors. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No ********** |
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PONE-D-22-01490R1 DEVELOPMENT AND VALIDATION OF A CLINICAL SCORE FOR IDENTIFYING PATIENTS WITH HIGH RISK OF LATENT AUTOIMMUNE ADULT DIABETES (LADA): THE LADA PRIMARY CARE-PROTOCOL STUDY. Dear Dr. Vich-Perez: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Vijayaprakash Suppiah Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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